tum sitam aur karo

by bekarar on October 19, 2005, 05:30:51 AM
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wo khush hai, wo aisa jatata to hai,
wo mahafil me sabako hansata to hai,
hansi mere hisse me aaye na aaye,
wo kam se kam mujhako, rulata to hai,


wo gairon ki mahfil sajata to hai,
wo mahfil me peeta-pilataa to hai,
jam mere hisse me aaya na aaye,
zahar apane hisse me aata to hai,

wo mahfil me sabako lubhata to hai,
jamane se milata-milata to hai,
wo dar pe mere aur aaye na aaye,
khwabon me aake jalata to hai,

meri bewafai ke jhute ye kisse,
suna hai jamane me sunata to hai,
mai khush hoon ke ab tak teri mahfilon me
mera nam tere lab pe aata to hai,
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«Reply #1 on: October 19, 2005, 11:08:34 AM »
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wo shikave, shikayat, hai kal ki baaten,
wo ishq, mohabbat, hai kal ki baaten,
galiyon ke sajade tumhe hi mubarak
mai unka deewana tha, hai kal ki baaten

wo khwabon ko bunana, hai kal ki baaten,
wo sapano ko chunana, hai kal ki baaten,
kharido to khuda bhi bikata yahan hai,
ishq khuda hai, hai kal ki baaten,

bikhara tha mai bhi, hai kal ki baaten,
toota tha mai bhi, hai kal ki baaten,
teri bewafai ne jeena sikha diya,
barbaadee hai ishq me, hai kal ki baaten,
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«Reply #2 on: October 19, 2005, 02:58:31 PM »
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Dono hi posts bahoot hi khoobsoorat likhi hai apne!!

Wah kaya baat hai!!!

kharido to khuda bhi bikata yahan hai,
ishq khuda hai, hai kal ki baaten,
teri bewafai ne jeena sikha diya,
barbaadee hai ishq me, hai kal ki baaten,
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«Reply #3 on: October 19, 2005, 08:25:00 PM »
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ati sunder bekerar ji...


meri adheer aankhe hain sagar piye hue,
beh rahi, ik umra  se aansoo  liye hue.

Ik waqt tha woh shaid the mere shabab ke,
aaj woh Gairon se hain, shirkat kiye hue.

mera junoo tha unka mein sizda karoon ta-umra,
ab kya kahein ham chot hain dil per liye hue.

bulandiyon ko chhoo rahi hain aanhe dil ki 'harsh'
our ham hain ke, khud hi dil, pathher kiye hue.


'harsh'©
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«Reply #4 on: October 20, 2005, 12:38:18 PM »
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thanx pujaji aur harshji,
hosalaafazai ka shukriya, main ek baat yahan kahana chahunga harsh ji aapake liye jo maine aapaki shayari me mahsus ki hai. wo ye ke mai jab bhi aapako padata hoon kabhi bhi aisa nahi lagata ke ye gazal ya shayari likhi gayi hai bas yoon lagata hai ke dil se nikali hai aur khud ba khud bina kat chant ke screen par aa gayi hai, shayad isiliye apaki shayari ki sabhi lines bahoot strong hoti hai aur zabardasti thoons di gai hai aisa kabhi bhi nahi lagata. doosara shabdon ka aapaka chayan itana satik hai ke maana padega aap alfazon ke khiladi hai,
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«Reply #5 on: October 20, 2005, 03:59:10 PM »
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wah kaya baat hai!! kaya zazbaat hai!! bahoot hi khoobsoorat likha hai apne harashmahajan ji!!
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«Reply #6 on: October 20, 2005, 05:26:01 PM »
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very nice  work.............harsh...........Pooja.........

kyon main alfaz ka sahaara loon
jab nigahon se baat hoti hai
ye mohabbat ka khel bhi hai ajeeb
jeet jao to maat hoti hai......................
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«Reply #7 on: October 20, 2005, 06:02:40 PM »
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bekrara ,pooja and waahid ji....aap yahaan per bahoot muddat se shareek hote rahein hain...main aapka hamesha teh dil se shuker guzaar hoon ki aapne mere  zehen ke shabdon ko wazen diya...bekerar ji...aapki screen pe paker itni mazboot hai ki hame bhi ab soch ker hi kalam ko karam dena hoga....kabhi kabhi der sa lagta hai mere tareen dosto ki kahin hamaari hamdam our hamaari dost kabhi hamein hi daga na de jaaye...jee haan mein apni kala ke baare mein hi keh raha hoon....

jab dekhta hoon sochta hoon, dam sa ghut-ta hai,
ye mere apne hain apno se der sa lagta hai.
dushman toh honge dushmani bhi kerenge beshaq,
na jaane apno se dushmani ka der sa lagta hai.


aapne thek pehchana bekrara ji ek-ek alfaaz jab seene se utarta hai toh khuda kasam seena fat-ta mesoos sa hota hai....pata nahi mujhe logon ko kaisa mehsoos hota hai...per mujhe khud ko bahoot sakoon sa lagta hai....aage aapke lafz jo lafzon ke khilaadi ki upaadi de gaye...aisa kabhi nahi socha hamne ...hum hameshaan khuda se yahi dua kerte hain jab bhi hamaari kalam ki is kagaz ko chhue toh is tarah chhue ki woh bhi tarse kalam-e-lahoo ko.....again bahoot bahoot shukriya......

'harsh'
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«Reply #8 on: October 21, 2005, 05:31:58 PM »
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Wah kya baat hai,kya khoob shayri chal rahi hai yahan Usual Smile .Bohat khoob bekaraar and harsh ji,and waheed always good.

"Tum na karna ab aur sitam mujhpe ki seh na sakungi,
      is toote dil ko thhaame kab tak aur main jee sakungi,

     muddatein yun hi guzar gayin,tumne ek nazar ne dekha mujhe,
     kab tak ise nazron ka dhoka samajh andekha main karti rahungi.
   
    main bhi chaahti hun is zindagi ka lutf uthaana,
    meri zindagi tum ho,kaise tumhe main bhula sakungi."
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«Reply #9 on: October 21, 2005, 05:45:25 PM »
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achha likha hai nidhi ji....
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«Reply #10 on: October 21, 2005, 05:51:57 PM »
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Thank u harsh ji.
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«Reply #11 on: October 22, 2005, 06:46:42 AM »
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very nice all of you

bhulau chahe lakh, khyalon me mere wo aa hi jate hain,
kabhi wo paas aate hain kabhi wo door jaate hain,
kuch to khas hai us bewafa sitamgar me,
dard seene me liye hum bhi bas muskara hi jaate hain
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«Reply #12 on: October 24, 2005, 07:16:21 PM »
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Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
Wah kya baat hai,kya khoob shayri chal rahi hai yahan Usual Smile .Bohat khoob bekaraar and harsh ji,and waheed always good.

"Tum na karna ab aur sitam mujhpe ki seh na sakungi,
      is toote dil ko thhaame kab tak aur main jee sakungi,

     muddatein yun hi guzar gayin,tumne ek nazar ne dekha mujhe,
     kab tak ise nazron ka dhoka samajh andekha main karti rahungi.
   
    main bhi chaahti hun is zindagi ka lutf uthaana,
    meri zindagi tum ho,kaise tumhe main bhula sakungi."


Thanxxxxx  Nidhi.........&  all...............  nice  Nidhi.........&  All.......

wonderfull..............
Tumhein basne nahi deta barbaadi ka dhadka
Humein abaad rakhti hai ujar jaane ki khwahish............
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«Reply #13 on: October 25, 2005, 06:37:16 AM »
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Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"
Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
Wah kya baat hai,kya khoob shayri chal rahi hai yahan Usual Smile .Bohat khoob bekaraar and harsh ji,and waheed always good.

"Tum na karna ab aur sitam mujhpe ki seh na sakungi,
      is toote dil ko thhaame kab tak aur main jee sakungi,

     muddatein yun hi guzar gayin,tumne ek nazar ne dekha mujhe,
     kab tak ise nazron ka dhoka samajh andekha main karti rahungi.
   
    main bhi chaahti hun is zindagi ka lutf uthaana,
    meri zindagi tum ho,kaise tumhe main bhula sakungi."


Thanxxxxx  Nidhi.........&  all...............  nice  Nidhi.........&  All.......




wonderfull..............
Tumhein basne nahi deta barbaadi ka dhadka
Humein abaad rakhti hai ujar jaane ki khwahish............




uff............... kya gahari baat kahi hai aapane. . . . . . .realyyyyy  goooood one. . . .
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«Reply #14 on: June 27, 2008, 06:23:30 PM »
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very nice all of you

bhulau chahe lakh, khyalon me mere wo aa hi jate hain,
kabhi wo paas aate hain kabhi wo door jaate hain,
kuch to khas hai us bewafa sitamgar me,
dard seene me liye hum bhi bas muskara hi jaate hain
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Nice Thread Bekarar jee
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