waaldain..sheba

by Sheba on September 20, 2011, 10:25:33 AM
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                      har shakhs ne mujhe aazmanaa chaaha..,
                      najaane mujh se kyaa paanaa chaaha..,

                      ki izzat jiski bhari mehfil humne,
                      waqaar meraa usi ne mitanaa chaaha,


                      silaa waaldain ka nahin kuch yahaan,
                      ishq-e-nadaan ne apna zor batanaa chaaha,


                     lafz-e-jamhuriyat ka maane badall dalo,
                      kiya intekhaab jiska usi ne kuchalnaa chaaha,

                      kam-zarf hua kirdaar hamaara aye sheba...!
                      giraa kar doosro.n ko humne sambhalnaa chaaha.!!




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«Reply #1 on: September 20, 2011, 11:10:47 AM »
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Shebaa Sahibaa Aadaab!

Kia baat hai janab bade khoob ahsaas O khayaal baNdhe hai aapne..
Sabhi aashaar ke khayaal behad khoob rahe... Usual Smile

Achche ahsaas O khayaal par humari dili daad O mubarakbad kabul
kijiye..... Usual Smile






                      har shakhs ne mujhe aazmanaa chaaha..,
                      najaane kyaa mujh se paanaa chaaha..,

Bahut khoob janab achcha matla hai... Sochte rahiye..
Samjh meiN aa jayeNga kisne kia pana chaha.. Usual Smile


                      ki izzat jiski bhari mehfil humne,
                      waqaar meraa usi ne mitanaa chaaha,


Achcha sher hai... khayaal kafi apna sa lagta hai..
         


                      silaa waaldain ka nahin kuch yahaan,
                      ishq-e-nadaan ne apna zor batanaa chaaha,


Waah waah waah janab kia gazab ka khayaal ataa kiya hai..
Masha Allaah bahut umdaa ... behad khub sher kaha hai daad daad daad Usual Smile         


                      lafz-e-jamhuriyat ka maane badall dalo,
                      kiya intekhaab jiska usi ne kuchalnaa chaaha,

Achcha sher hai daad... Par aap kafiye mein galti kar gayi janab..
         


                      kam-zarf hua kirdaar hamaara aye sheba...!
                      giraa kar doosro.n ko humne uthaanaa chaaha.!!

Bahut khoob behad achcha tanz kiya hai.. daad ..
Is sher meiN bhi kafiye meiN galti huyi thi par humne durust kar liye Usual Smile         






waaldain- parents

Likhate rahiye... Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez..... Usual Smile

Kuch ashaar aapke khayaaloN se khayaal milte lage so apni
kalaam aapki pesh e nazar.. Usual Smile           


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«Reply #2 on: September 20, 2011, 11:16:56 AM »
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Shebaa Sahibaa Aadaab!

Kia baat hai janab bade khoob ahsaas O khayaal baNdhe hai aapne..
Sabhi aashaar ke khayaal behad khoob rahe... Usual Smile

Achche ahsaas O khayaal par humari dili daad O mubarakbad kabul
kijiye..... Usual Smile




Likhate rahiye... Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez..... Usual Smile

Kuch ashaar aapke khayaaloN se khayaal milte lage so apni
kalaam aapki pesh e nazar.. Usual Smile           




 bahut bahut shukria parwaaz sahab



aapne shayad maqte ko ghaur se nahin padha.........!
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«Reply #3 on: September 20, 2011, 11:36:39 AM »
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 bahut bahut shukria parwaaz sahab



aapne shayad maqte ko ghaur se nahin padha.........!


Jee humen Maqte ko thik se padh liye..
aap wahaaN khud ke sambhalne ki baat kah rahi hai..

Par humare changing se shayad khayaal change ho gaya hai..
yaa aapka khayaal bar karaar raha gaur kijiyeNga...

Dono surat meiN kirdaar ki kamzarfi saaf hai... wel aap
apne khayaal ke mutabik dekh lijiye...

Hume jaise laga humne aapni rai rakhiye... aage aapki marzi


Likhati rahiye... Khush o aabaad rahiye..
Khuda hafez... Usual Smile         

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«Reply #4 on: September 20, 2011, 07:19:52 PM »
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Bahut khub likha aapne Sheba Ji..!!
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«Reply #5 on: September 24, 2011, 12:03:36 PM »
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                      har shakhs ne mujhe aazmanaa chaaha..,
                      najaane mujh se kyaa paanaa chaaha..,

                      ki izzat jiski bhari mehfil humne,
                      waqaar meraa usi ne mitanaa chaaha,


                      silaa waaldain ka nahin kuch yahaan,
                      ishq-e-nadaan ne apna zor batanaa chaaha,


                      lafz-e-jamhuriyat ka maane badall dalo,
                      kiya intekhaab jiska usi ne kuchalnaa chaaha,

                      kam-zarf hua kirdaar hamaara aye sheba...!
                      giraa kar doosro.n ko humne sambhalnaa chaaha.!!




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«Reply #6 on: September 24, 2011, 12:09:04 PM »
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