~*~ Wohi kyun rulata hai ~*~ by Rahim

by dead heart on May 04, 2011, 12:13:51 PM
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Khuda toh bas apni rehmat ki chhaya hume deta hai,
Sach kahoun toh insaan apni zindagi khud banata hai..

Aksar suna hai yeh nasihat[advice] maine kay Khuda se ishq karo,
Mager nadan tehra insaan jo insaanon se hi dil lagata hai..

Ghum-e-judai jhelte ek shaks ko pucha ‘itni neend kaise ati hai?’,
Kehne laga ‘na chahoun toh bhi mujhe sona parrta hai,
Akhir uska deedar sirf sapnon main hi toh hota hai..’

Mohobat main out hona cricket main out hone jaisa hi hai,
Ek galat faisle kay sabab baad phir insaan bahaut pachtata hai..

Aj zindagi ki raahon par ek sawal kay jawab ka talabgar hai ‘Khamosh’,
Jisse toot kar chaho akhir main phir wohi kyun rulata hai..

Aj ek sach ki baat janlo aur sabhi se kehdo kay main koi shayar nahin,
‘Khamosh’ toh bas dil kay jazbaton ko lavzon main uttarta hai..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #1 on: May 04, 2011, 01:31:17 PM »
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bht khoob rahim...
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«Reply #2 on: May 04, 2011, 02:30:11 PM »
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bahut bahut Khoob Bhai rahim!!!

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«Reply #3 on: May 04, 2011, 02:39:33 PM »
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boht acha likha raheem ji
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«Reply #4 on: May 04, 2011, 03:19:48 PM »
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hmm……
dost aapke kalaamo se aapke dil me uth rahe sawalo ke tufaan…
aur jhkjhorte tadpaate sachche ehsaaso ka hamesha se pata chala mujhe…

maine ab magmo ko parh kar jo feel hua unn bato ko cmnt me likhna chhod dia hai lekin…
aapke is kalaam ne mujhe thoda majbur kia…

jo baate aapne likhi h uspar srf daad dekar nikal jaana khud se beimani hoti mere lie…
aapne bht sachi aur seekh wali bato ko alfaazo me piroya hai…
aapke uss waqt ki uljhan ko mai smjh skta hu jo ye likhte waqt rhi hogi…
khus rahiye dost
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«Reply #5 on: May 04, 2011, 07:38:29 PM »
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Rahim Sahab,

khoobsoorat andaz hai achchha qalaam..

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«Reply #6 on: May 04, 2011, 08:04:41 PM »
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Quote from: manzil-e-ishq on May 04, 2011, 01:31:17 PM
bht khoob rahim...
Bahaut bahaut shukriya Priya di..
Khush rahiye..!

Quote from: saahill on May 04, 2011, 02:39:33 PM
boht acha likha raheem ji
Shukriya shukriya Saahil jee..
Khush rahiye..!

Quote from: khwaish on May 04, 2011, 02:30:11 PM
bahut bahut Khoob Bhai rahim!!!

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Teh teh dil se shukriya Khwaish dost..
Khush rahiye..!

Quote from: killbill on May 04, 2011, 03:19:48 PM
hmm……
dost aapke kalaamo se aapke dil me uth rahe sawalo ke tufaan…
aur jhkjhorte tadpaate sachche ehsaaso ka hamesha se pata chala mujhe…

maine ab magmo ko parh kar jo feel hua unn bato ko cmnt me likhna chhod dia hai lekin…
aapke is kalaam ne mujhe thoda majbur kia…

jo baate aapne likhi h uspar srf daad dekar nikal jaana khud se beimani hoti mere lie…
aapne bht sachi aur seekh wali bato ko alfaazo me piroya hai…
aapke uss waqt ki uljhan ko mai smjh skta hu jo ye likhte waqt rhi hogi…
khus rahiye dost
Ehsaason ko samajne kay liye apka teh dil se shukriya Killbill dost..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #7 on: May 05, 2011, 02:08:27 AM »
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Nice Rahim Ji
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«Reply #8 on: May 05, 2011, 09:32:18 AM »
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Quote from: Niha Khan on May 05, 2011, 02:08:27 AM
Nice Rahim Ji
Bahaut bahaut shukriya Niha jee..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #9 on: May 05, 2011, 10:17:16 AM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on May 04, 2011, 12:13:51 PM
Khuda toh bas apni rehmat ki chhaya hume deta hai,
Sach kahoun toh insaan apni zindagi khud banata hai..

Aksar suna hai yeh nasihat[advice] maine kay Khuda se ishq karo,
Mager nadan tehra insaan jo insaanon se hi dil lagata hai..

Ghum-e-judai jhelte ek shaks ko pucha ‘itni neend kaise ati hai?’,
Kehne laga ‘na chahoun toh bhi mujhe sona parrta hai,
Akhir uska deedar sirf sapnon main hi toh hota hai..’

Mohobat main out hona cricket main out hone jaisa hi hai,
Ek galat faisle kay sabab baad phir insaan bahaut pachtata hai..

Aj zindagi ki raahon par ek sawal kay jawab ka talabgar hai ‘Khamosh’,
Jisse toot kar chaho akhir main phir wohi kyun rulata hai..

Aj ek sach ki baat janlo aur sabhi se kehdo kay main koi shayar nahin,
‘Khamosh’ toh bas dil kay jazbaton ko lavzon main uttarta hai..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~

Bht Khob Rahim ji.. Aap Ne Sahi Kaha Ji..
Aksar suna hai yeh nasihat[advice] maine kay Khuda se ishq karo,
Mager nadan tehra insaan jo insaanon se hi dil lagata hai..
Aap k jazbaat bht gehraii hai Rahim Ji.. Allah Aap koe Humesha Khus Rakhe.. Aur aap ki har armaan puri farmaye.. Ameen..

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«Reply #10 on: May 05, 2011, 12:15:08 PM »
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Quote from: SkykiTears on May 05, 2011, 10:17:16 AM
Bht Khob Rahim ji.. Aap Ne Sahi Kaha Ji..
Aksar suna hai yeh nasihat[advice] maine kay Khuda se ishq karo,
Mager nadan tehra insaan jo insaanon se hi dil lagata hai..
Aap k jazbaat bht gehraii hai Rahim Ji.. Allah Aap koe Humesha Khus Rakhe.. Aur aap ki har armaan puri farmaye.. Ameen..

-SKY-
Bahaut bahaut shukriya Sky jee..
Haan jazbaat toh gehre hi hote hai..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #11 on: May 23, 2011, 10:23:50 AM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on May 04, 2011, 12:13:51 PM
Khuda toh bas apni rehmat ki chhaya hume deta hai,
Sach kahoun toh insaan apni zindagi khud banata hai..

Aksar suna hai yeh nasihat[advice] maine kay Khuda se ishq karo,
Mager nadan tehra insaan jo insaanon se hi dil lagata hai..

Ghum-e-judai jhelte ek shaks ko pucha ‘itni neend kaise ati hai?’,
Kehne laga ‘na chahoun toh bhi mujhe sona parrta hai,
Akhir uska deedar sirf sapnon main hi toh hota hai..’

Mohobat main out hona cricket main out hone jaisa hi hai,
Ek galat faisle kay sabab baad phir insaan bahaut pachtata hai..

Aj zindagi ki raahon par ek sawal kay jawab ka talabgar hai ‘Khamosh’,
Jisse toot kar chaho akhir main phir wohi kyun rulata hai..

Aj ek sach ki baat janlo aur sabhi se kehdo kay main koi shayar nahin,
‘Khamosh’ toh bas dil kay jazbaton ko lavzon main uttarta hai..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~

ACHI KAVISH HAI RAHIM SB . AAP KA BHI TAKHALLUS 'KHAMOSH' HAI
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«Reply #12 on: May 23, 2011, 02:17:21 PM »
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Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on May 23, 2011, 10:23:50 AM
ACHI KAVISH HAI RAHIM SB . AAP KA BHI TAKHALLUS 'KHAMOSH' HAI
Bahaut bahaut shukriya KA jee..
Haan mera bhi takhallus 'Khamosh' hai..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #13 on: May 23, 2011, 03:08:32 PM »
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MaashaAllah.. Kya Baat hai Rahim Bhai.. Bahut bahut Khooooob yaaaaar.. Ek Such ko Lafzon me utaara hai aapne.. Aur Last Sher to Qasam se Dil tak utar gaya.. Bahut Khooooooooob Bhai.. Yun hi likhte Rahiye.. Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: May 23, 2011, 04:54:40 PM »
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Quote from: Mann on May 23, 2011, 03:08:32 PM
MaashaAllah.. Kya Baat hai Rahim Bhai.. Bahut bahut Khooooob yaaaaar.. Ek Such ko Lafzon me utaara hai aapne.. Aur Last Sher to Qasam se Dil tak utar gaya.. Bahut Khooooooooob Bhai.. Yun hi likhte Rahiye.. Applause Applause
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**~** Mann **~**

Bahaut bahaut shukriya Vikas bhaijan..
Ap daad dete ho toh dil khush hojata hai..
Khush rahiye.!
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