~*~ Zindagi se rootha hai koi ~*~ by Rahim

by dead heart on April 29, 2011, 09:44:59 PM
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Duniya ki iss bheed mein apna koi nahin lagta.
Jabse zindagi main zindagi se choota koi..

Usne toh mujhe chorr kar dusre haath ko tham lia,
Mager uski judai main yahan pal pal gootha hai koi..

‘Tere bina main reh nahin paungi’ ‘Khamosh’,
Aj jana, dil ki duniya main bhi jhoota hai koi..

Dil ne toh kal ko bhula diya mager aj udaas hai kyun,
Shayad dil main teri yaad ka gubara foota hai koi..

Meri nazmein mere dil ki parchayi hoti hai yaaron,
Woh toh bas sada yeh dikhane ki koshish karti rahi,
Kay mohobat paa kar bhi yahan toota hai koi..

‘Khamosh’ ko parr kar woh sirf wah wahi karte rahe,
Mager aj jo tum us’se miloge toh keh dena ae dost,
Uski wajah se zindagi main zindagi se rootha hai koi..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #1 on: April 30, 2011, 04:03:11 AM »
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Nice Rahium ji.. Bohout Khob.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #2 on: April 30, 2011, 04:52:03 AM »
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Duniya ki iss bheed mein apna koi nahin lagta.
Jabse zindagi main zindagi se choota koi..

Usne toh mujhe chorr kar dusre haath ko tham lia,
Mager uski judai main yahan pal pal gootha hai koi..

‘Tere bina main reh nahin paungi’ ‘Khamosh’,
Aj jana, dil ki duniya main bhi jhoota hai koi..

Dil ne toh kal ko bhula diya mager aj udaas hai kyun,
Shayad dil main teri yaad ka gubara foota hai koi..

Meri nazmein mere dil ki parchayi hoti hai yaaron,
Woh toh bas sada yeh dikhane ki koshish karti rahi,
Kay mohobat paa kar bhi yahan toota hai koi..

‘Khamosh’ ko parr kar woh sirf wah wahi karte rahe,
Mager aj jo tum us’se miloge toh keh dena ae dost,
Uski wajah se zindagi main zindagi se rootha hai koi..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~

bht khoob, bht khoob Rahim bhai,

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«Reply #3 on: April 30, 2011, 05:22:10 AM »
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wah wah rahimji.... bahut khub.......

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«Reply #4 on: April 30, 2011, 06:58:25 AM »
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Nice Rahium ji.. Bohout Khob.. Usual Smile
-SKY-
Bahaut bahaut shukriya Sky jee..
Khush rahiye..!

wah wah rahimji.... bahut khub.......

 Applause Applause Applause
Bahaut bahaut shukriya Anu jee..
Khush rahiye..!

bht khoob, bht khoob Rahim bhai,


Shukriya Noor bhai..
Teh dil se..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #5 on: April 30, 2011, 10:11:15 AM »
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Duniya ki iss bheed mein apna koi nahin lagta.
Jabse zindagi main zindagi se choota koi..

Usne toh mujhe chorr kar dusre haath ko tham lia,
Mager uski judai main yahan pal pal gootha hai koi..

‘Tere bina main reh nahin paungi’ ‘Khamosh’,
Aj jana, dil ki duniya main bhi jhoota hai koi..

Dil ne toh kal ko bhula diya mager aj udaas hai kyun,
Shayad dil main teri yaad ka gubara foota hai koi..

Meri nazmein mere dil ki parchayi hoti hai yaaron,
Woh toh bas sada yeh dikhane ki koshish karti rahi,
Kay mohobat paa kar bhi yahan toota hai koi..

‘Khamosh’ ko parr kar woh sirf wah wahi karte rahe,
Mager aj jo tum us’se miloge toh keh dena ae dost,
Uski wajah se zindagi main zindagi se rootha hai koi..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~

Good One ... Rahim Ji !

Very Impressive Creation ... Nice Expression .... !

tahe dil se daad ... !!!!
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«Reply #6 on: April 30, 2011, 10:22:15 AM »
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Bahut bahut Khoob Bhai Rahim!!!

Huemsha Ki Tarah Dil Ki Baaton ko Lafzon mein Utaarna..

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: April 30, 2011, 12:44:38 PM »
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Good One ... Rahim Ji !

Very Impressive Creation ... Nice Expression .... !

tahe dil se daad ... !!!!
Bahaut bahaut shukriya Naresh jee..
Khush rahiye..!

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«Reply #8 on: April 30, 2011, 12:46:15 PM »
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Bahut bahut Khoob Bhai Rahim!!!

Huemsha Ki Tarah Dil Ki Baaton ko Lafzon mein Utaarna..

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahaut bahaut shukriya Khwaish dost..
Hamesha saath dete rahiye..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #9 on: April 30, 2011, 01:38:10 PM »
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wah dost wah…
lagta hai fir aapki kalam ne alfaaz di hai teeste zazbaato ko
kured gaya kya fir se koi sisakte ehsaaso ko……
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jab bhi aapki kalam chli aye dost
syahi lahoo si laal hui……
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khus rho dost
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«Reply #10 on: April 30, 2011, 07:04:31 PM »
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wah dost wah…
lagta hai fir aapki kalam ne alfaaz di hai teeste zazbaato ko
kured gaya kya fir se koi sisakte ehsaaso ko……
*
jab bhi aapki kalam chli aye dost
syahi lahoo si laal hui……
*
khus rho dost
sukriya
Haan dost ehsas toh khured ti rehti hai yaadein..
bahaut bahaut shukriya Dost..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #11 on: April 30, 2011, 07:12:35 PM »
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gud poetry……
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«Reply #12 on: April 30, 2011, 07:20:29 PM »
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gud poetry……

Thank you..!
Khush rahiye..!
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