betiyaan:Poetry of seperation in Punjabi

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betiyaan

« on: March 29, 2008, 01:13:44 AM »

har rishte ko har haal me nibhati hai betiyaan
fir b unpe tohmate lagaati hai ye duniya........

maa-baap ki dehlij par janm jab leti hai betiyaan
na jaane kyu shauk me tabdil ho jaati hain us ghar ki khushiyaan

maa-baap kyu nahi sochte kuch din mehmaan hain betiyaan
chod wo dehlij wo aangan ek din chali jaayengi betiyaan

ek roz ban maa mamta nuochawar karti hain betiyaan
har farz b-khubi anjaam deti hain betiyaan

soona ho har aangan jo naa ho ye betiyaan
bekar hai har sawaan jo jhule na ye betiyaan

na dafn karo e-maaon kokh me ye betiyaan
tumhare hi jism ka ek ansh hain ye betiyaan

band kar do e haiwaano khelna tum inki izjat se
tumhi me se kisi ki maa kisi ki bahan hain betiyann


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hame zindgi se koi shikwa nahi,
koi gila nahi ki wo hamko mila nahi,
jeene k liye unki yaadon ka sahara bohu hai,
koi gam nahi jo wo do kadam saath chala nahi.

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Re: betiyaan

« Reply #1 on: March 29, 2008, 01:55:18 AM »

wah wah kya kehne aapke kaushikbhawna ji...
bohat achhi soch hai aapki
khash kar mujhe last wali 2 lines bohat achhi lagi
keep it up ji....


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Aur Ruh Ka Kona Kona Ek Yaad Ne Mehkaaya Hai.

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Re: betiyaan

« Reply #2 on: March 29, 2008, 02:24:52 AM »

Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on March 29, 2008, 01:13:44 AM

Khoobsoorat ahsaas Bhwawna ji.....Dil ko is kader jhanjhoRh diyaa tumne ke be-saakhta hi lafz phoot padeiN haiN...Ek koshish bhawna ji....Dekhein toh

BetiyoN ka khud woh imtihaan haiN betiyaaN
MaaN baap ke ghar ki her shaan hai betiyaaN

Nibha rahi hai duniyaaN de-de ke tohmateiN
par Poore Ghar ki aaj ab shaan hai betiyaaN.

Doob gaye HaiN din woh jab shok manati duniyaN
daman lutati aaj jab janam leti HaiN betiyaaN

Angan rahe hai soona jab hoN na betiyaaN
Ghar ki tum ab dekho ab chhanv haiN betiyaaN

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Re: betiyaan

« Reply #3 on: March 29, 2008, 02:39:35 AM »

shukriyaa majid ji and harsh mahajan ji


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hame zindgi se koi shikwa nahi,
koi gila nahi ki wo hamko mila nahi,
jeene k liye unki yaadon ka sahara bohu hai,
koi gam nahi jo wo do kadam saath chala nahi.

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Re: betiyaan

« Reply #4 on: March 29, 2008, 07:27:27 AM »

Buhat umda aur khari baaten batlaayin hain, aapne, Kaushik jee...
Bas aankhen hain nam aur dil hai gham men dooba, sahih kaha aapne sab...
Shukriya...


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Mataa'e loh-o-qalam chhin gayi to kya gham hai,
Ki khoon-e-dil men duboli hain ungliyan mainne,
Zubaan pe muhr lagi hai to kya, ki rakh di hai,
Har ek Halqaa-e-zanjeer men zubaan main ne.
(Faiz Ahmed Faiz)

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Re: betiyaan

« Reply #5 on: June 08, 2008, 06:44:19 AM »

kya sonch hai aap ki
bohat ache shayar hai aap kaushikbhawana jiiii


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