BETIYAAN

by Pallavi Gupta on April 23, 2010, 02:05:51 PM
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Oss ki bund si hoti hai BETIYAAN,
Papa ki dulari aur jaan se pyari hoti hai BETIYAAN,
Sparsh kurdura ho to roti hai BETIYAAN,
Roshan karega beta to sirf ek hi kul ko,
do-do kulo ko roshan karti hai BATIYAAN,
Hira agar hai beta to sachha moti hoti hai BETIYAAN,
Kanto ki raah me chalti hai BETIYAAN,
Auron ki raah mephool banti hai BETIYYAN,
Kahne ko paraya dhan hoti hai BETIYAAN,
Par beto se jyada apni hoti hai BETIYAAN........
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«Reply #1 on: April 23, 2010, 02:12:22 PM »
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Very Nice Sharing. Please mention Not Mine.
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Pallavi Gupta
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«Reply #2 on: April 23, 2010, 03:15:01 PM »
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thanks......yaa its not mine.....
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«Reply #3 on: April 23, 2010, 05:55:00 PM »
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Quote from: Pallavi Gupta on April 23, 2010, 02:05:51 PM
Oss ki bund si hoti hai BETIYAAN,
Papa ki dulari aur jaan se pyari hoti hai BETIYAAN,
Sparsh kurdura ho to roti hai BETIYAAN,
Roshan karega beta to sirf ek hi kul ko,
do-do kulo ko roshan karti hai BETIYAAN,
Hira agar hai beta to sachha moti hoti hai BETIYAAN,
Kanto ki raah me chalti hai BETIYAAN,
Auron ki raah mephool banti hai BETIYYAN,
Kahne ko paraya dhan hoti hai BETIYAAN,
Par beto se jyada apni hoti hai BETIYAAN........
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Nice sharing
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«Reply #4 on: April 23, 2010, 07:11:55 PM »
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Nice Sharing Pallavi Ji.
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«Reply #5 on: April 23, 2010, 08:41:41 PM »
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Bohat Achchi Kavita Hai Pallavi Ji,.

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«Reply #6 on: April 24, 2010, 07:08:21 AM »
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wakai...betiyon se bada koi khazana nahin Applause
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«Reply #7 on: April 24, 2010, 11:27:43 AM »
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Quote from: Pallavi Gupta on April 23, 2010, 02:05:51 PM
Oss ki bund si hoti hai BETIYAAN,
Papa ki dulari aur jaan se pyari hoti hai BETIYAAN,
Sparsh kurdura ho to roti hai BETIYAAN,
Roshan karega beta to sirf ek hi kul ko,
do-do kulo ko roshan karti hai BATIYAAN,
Hira agar hai beta to sachha moti hoti hai BETIYAAN,
Kanto ki raah me chalti hai BETIYAAN,
Auron ki raah mephool banti hai BETIYYAN,
Kahne ko paraya dhan hoti hai BETIYAAN,
Par beto se jyada apni hoti hai BETIYAAN........
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«Reply #8 on: April 24, 2010, 11:33:23 AM »
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bahut khoob pallavi ji.
sachmuch bahut theek likha hai.
Quote from: Pallavi Gupta on April 23, 2010, 02:05:51 PM
Oss ki bund si hoti hai BETIYAAN,
Papa ki dulari aur jaan se pyari hoti hai BETIYAAN,
Sparsh kurdura ho to roti hai BETIYAAN,
Roshan karega beta to sirf ek hi kul ko,
do-do kulo ko roshan karti hai BATIYAAN,
Hira agar hai beta to sachha moti hoti hai BETIYAAN,
Kanto ki raah me chalti hai BETIYAAN,
Auron ki raah mephool banti hai BETIYYAN,
Kahne ko paraya dhan hoti hai BETIYAAN,
Par beto se jyada apni hoti hai BETIYAAN........
 angel13

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«Reply #9 on: April 26, 2010, 05:59:42 AM »
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Nice sharing Pallavi Ji. Moved to "Share Poetry You Like" Section.
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«Reply #10 on: August 26, 2010, 06:57:34 AM »
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Quote from: Pallavi Gupta on April 23, 2010, 02:05:51 PM
Oss ki bund si hoti hai BETIYAAN,
Papa ki dulari aur jaan se pyari hoti hai BETIYAAN,
Sparsh kurdura ho to roti hai BETIYAAN,
Roshan karega beta to sirf ek hi kul ko,
do-do kulo ko roshan karti hai BATIYAAN,
Hira agar hai beta to sachha moti hoti hai BETIYAAN,
Kanto ki raah me chalti hai BETIYAAN,
Auron ki raah mephool banti hai BETIYYAN,
Kahne ko paraya dhan hoti hai BETIYAAN,
Par beto se jyada apni hoti hai BETIYAAN........
 angel13

Written by someone else.....its not my POEM
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