oh mere laal mere dil khaan he tu aja

by hameeda on May 05, 2010, 12:11:17 PM
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as salamu ale kum
 ye koi khani ya shayari nahi meri khud ki bate hei
mera beta asif jo bombay me he or me dubai me hu
us ki yaad me ne ye apne dil ki pukaar likhi he agr aap log bhi apni maa se alg hei to mera manna he aap ke bhi zaaroor ansoo nikal ayen ge mere bete ki ye photo he
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bibbo
 
 
oh mere laal mere dil  kahan tu aja
me tadhapti hun teri yaad me wapas ajaa
 
tere bin zindagi  bhati nahi bete mere
aja-aja tujhe  baanhoonme me bhar kar rolu
 
mere bete -o- mere jigar ke tukre aaja
ashq ruk te nahi mere ye dikhadu  tujh ko
 
teri yado me  jina dushwaar he  bete aaja
zeher  judai ka kese piti hu btadun tujhko
 
chup ke chup ke me rooti hun  dikha dun aaja
teri yaado me- me har pal yun ghut ke jiti  hun
 
meri aahei he be aasar kun ye btade aaja
apni maam to ko gale ake lagale aaja
 
sari duni ko btade ki meri maa he ye
kit na kar ti he tujhe piyaar batade aaja
 
mere -asif- mere jane jigaar piyaare bete
bibbo. roti he teri yaad me waapas aajaa
 
apna khyaal rakhna
written yb hameeda
bibbo ameer allah hafiz

 
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«Reply #1 on: May 05, 2010, 03:33:17 PM »
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bohat dard likha hai aapne hameeda ji. sach me ye aapki rachna dil pighlane waali hai aur bohat hi umda hai. notworthy notworthy
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«Reply #2 on: May 05, 2010, 05:17:14 PM »
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Badi dard bhari poem likhi hai Hameeda ji. Padhkar ranjeeda ho gaya aur dil bhar aaya. Meri Rabb-ul-Alameen se dua hai ke aap bahot jald apne pyare bete se mil jayen. Aameen.
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«Reply #3 on: May 05, 2010, 10:49:40 PM »
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Ek maa ka dard maa se behtar aur kaun samajh sakta hai. Bahut dard bhari daastaan likhi hai aapne. Bahut bahut dard hai isme. Main duwa karta hoon ki aapka beta jald se jald aaapke paas laut aaye.

tu na bahaa apne ashq moti mere intzaar me O meri maa,
main aaunga bahut jald tere paas sun le ye baat meri maa,
jitna dard diya hai tujhe maine apni judaai ka,kasam hai
seene se tujhe lagake usse jyaada khushiyaan dunga tujhe meri maa...


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«Reply #4 on: May 06, 2010, 12:03:48 AM »
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Wah Hameeda ji bahut dard ,pyar aur khoobsurti se likhi aapne.wonderful work.Kapil ji aapne bhi kamaal ke likha.meri dua hai aapke bete jald aapke paas aayegi Hameeda ji. icon_salut Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #5 on: May 07, 2010, 04:46:55 AM »
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Bahut khoob Hameeda Ji
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«Reply #6 on: September 05, 2011, 12:29:28 PM »
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 notworthy icon_salut notworthy icon_salut notworthy icon_salut icon_salut thank's
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