FARMAAN (3- Liner)... "MohaN"

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FARMAAN

Unkaa farmaan hai nafratein buree baat hai
To kyaa mujhe jeene kaa bhi bhi haq nahin
Mohabbat ne to tarhpaayaa din-o-raat hai


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«Reply #1 on: February 27, 2019, 10:33:02 PM »
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FARMAAN

Unkaa farmaan hai nafratein buree baat hai
To kyaa mujhe jeene kaa bhi bhi haq nahin
Mohabbat ne to tarhpaayaa din-o-raat hai...


Surindar. N           "MohaN"

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«Reply #2 on: February 28, 2019, 02:23:28 AM »
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Sir, mazirat ke saath kah raha hoon - 2 line ka sher, 4 line ka qhata ya rubai - aur sher ke 1 line ko misra kahte suna hai...
Ye 3 lines kuch confuse karti hain  icon_scratch
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Sir, mazirat ke saath kah raha hoon - 2 line ka sher, 4 line ka qhata ya rubai - aur sher ke 1 line ko misra kahte suna hai...
Ye 3 lines kuch confuse karti hain  icon_scratch
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«Reply #4 on: March 01, 2019, 11:36:24 PM »
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FARMAAN

Unkaa farmaan hai nafratein buree baat hai
To kyaa mujhe jeene kaa bhi bhi haq nahin
Mohabbat ne to tarhpaayaa din-o-raat hai


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«Reply #6 on: March 03, 2019, 11:29:05 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: March 04, 2019, 09:55:07 PM »
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«Reply #8 on: March 05, 2019, 11:39:54 PM »
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FARMAAN

Unkaa farmaan hai nafratein buree baat hai
To kyaa mujhe jeene kaa bhi bhi haq nahin
Mohabbat ne to tarhpaayaa din-o-raat hai

Unkaa farmaan hai nafratein bahut buree baat hai
Jee par mohabbat ne to tarhpaayaa din-o-raat hai


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«Reply #9 on: March 06, 2019, 11:10:02 PM »
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«Reply #10 on: March 07, 2019, 11:35:25 PM »
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