Koi nahi mai !

by salma786 on May 28, 2009, 04:54:56 AM
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Dhundli si pad gayi hu raton ki tanhaayi me,
Aks bhi nazar na ata andheron ki parchaayi me,

Ose ki bund hu mai patto me padi hu,
Suraj ki kirno se bhaap ban udi hu,

Nadi ki lehar hu mai samandar se mil jau,
Is chor kabhi us chor mai sahil se takrau,

Mitti ki khushboo hu mai Jannat sa mehkau,
Par khoon se seche mitti ko kaise mai apnau,

Lehrata khet hu mai varsha barse to muskaau,
Sukha pad jaye to ek boond ko mai taras jau,

Mausam badle rituye badle phool ban khil jau,
Ek jhoke se apne astitva ko mai mitti me milta pau,

Kon hu mai, kya hu mai, kisko ye samjhau,
Bhuli bisri yaad hu mai waqt ke sath guzar jau!
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«Reply #1 on: May 28, 2009, 07:36:10 AM »
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Bohot khoob Salma...bohot achcha likha hai
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«Reply #2 on: May 28, 2009, 08:09:32 AM »
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excellent salma ji,very very ice. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: May 28, 2009, 08:10:27 AM »
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Bohat khoob salma...
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«Reply #4 on: May 28, 2009, 09:38:37 AM »
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Dhundli si pad gayi hu raton ki tanhaayi me,
Aks bhi nazar na ata andheron ki parchaayi me,

Ose ki bund hu mai patto me padi hu,
Suraj ki kirno se bhaap ban udi hu,

Nadi ki lehar hu mai samandar se mil jau,
Is chor kabhi us chor mai sahil se takrau,

Mitti ki khushboo hu mai Jannat sa mehkau,
Par khoon se seche mitti ko kaise mai apnau,

Lehrata khet hu mai varsha barse to muskaau,
Sukha pad jaye to ek boond ko mai taras jau,

Mausam badle rituye badle phool ban khil jau,
Ek jhoke se apne astitva ko mai mitti me milta pau,

Kon hu mai, kya hu mai, kisko ye samjhau,
Bhuli bisri yaad hu mai waqt ke sath guzar jau!



waaah KYAA KHOOB LIKHAA HAI S786
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«Reply #5 on: May 28, 2009, 10:52:59 AM »
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Bohot khoob Salma...bohot achcha likha hai
Shukriya Talat sis Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: May 28, 2009, 10:57:03 AM »
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excellent salma ji,very very ice. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Thanks lot Madhu ji!
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«Reply #7 on: May 28, 2009, 12:39:36 PM »
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Isska reply koi de hee nahi sakta... mindblowing
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«Reply #8 on: May 29, 2009, 07:32:33 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause

Bohat khoob salma...


Shukriya Jaya sis Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: May 29, 2009, 07:36:12 AM »
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waaah KYAA KHOOB LIKHAA HAI S786

Shukriya KA ji!
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«Reply #10 on: May 29, 2009, 07:49:55 AM »
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Isska reply koi de hee nahi sakta... mindblowing

Are apne bahoot badi baat kehdi notworthy

Shukriya apka!
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