Matlab Ka Pyaar, matlab Ki Duniya hai yeh "Khwaish"

by khwaish on November 04, 2009, 12:41:04 PM
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«Reply #30 on: March 07, 2010, 10:29:56 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Bahut aala janab leken bura na mane to ek baat kahunga
ke gazal ke hisab se aap ke likhe tehrer me sare band baraber nahi hai.gazlon me ye zarure hota hai ke uske her line ke alfazon ke gente baraber ho
Yane VAZAN .aap ke pehla aur dosra mishra theek hai ya kahe bahut khoob hai per bake sare kam jyada hai.ye mai apne malumat ke hisab se keh raha hun ager koye baat bure lage ho to Muaafe ke derkhvast hai.

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Shab Ji..

Aur Bura Kis Baat ka Shab ji..Hum Ne kab kahan Ke Humein Shayari Likhi Aati Hai

Bas Kuch koshish Kar Lete Hai..Shukriya
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«Reply #31 on: March 07, 2010, 10:31:32 AM »
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Bahut Hi sundar peshkash ki hai khawaish ji aapne behtrin and umda likha hai aapne i like it Applause ApplauseApplause

Bahut bahut Shukriya Rishiji.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #32 on: March 07, 2010, 10:32:30 AM »
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hi ji its too good  Applause Applause Applause tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed

Thanks A lOTTTTTTTTTT Pariji.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #33 on: March 07, 2010, 10:35:13 AM »
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ooh bhai mai light heart se kaha. Dil pe na lena icon_thumleft


Ghana jungle andhera rasta tha
Ye kaise shehar mein mai aa gaya tha?

Sitare raaste ke buj chuke they
In aankhon mein diya jalta raha tha

Ek anjaano-si aashat ka tassavur
Ki dash-te-aarzoo mein phool-sa tha

Shanasa kitne chehre the safer mein
Dilon ke darmiyan ek faasla tha

Hawa bhi hiddon se jal gayi thi
Dilon mein pyar ka tufaan machla tha

Matlab ka Pyar, Matlab ki dunia
Dekhkar dilon mein tanhayi ka shola uta tha

Jalta mera dil aur dimak ko bhujane
Samandar khud kinare aane laga tha



Tassavur = Kalpana
Dash-te-aarzoo = Abhilasha ka jungle
Shanasa = Parichit
Hiddon =Garmi


Bhaut Bahut Khoob Roja.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #34 on: March 07, 2010, 10:58:38 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause

hamesha ki tarah lajawab Khwaish ji... bahoot khoob...

Nikhar, Roja and Shihab ji bahoot acha sath nibha rahe hai app sab !!! Good work all...


Thankyou Sooooooooooooo Much Dear Pooja.. icon_flower
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«Reply #35 on: March 07, 2010, 10:59:58 AM »
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har sher vazni aur asardaar..kya hi khoobsurati se aapne ise likha hai bhai...khud ko koi fanaah nahi karta
jindagi apni tabah nahi karta
shuru se ant tak apne sandesh ko padhne walon tak pahunchane me kamyab rahi hai aapki rachna..
daad kabool ho..


Bahut Bahut Shukriya Sanjeev Bro.. icon_flower
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«Reply #36 on: March 12, 2010, 02:09:51 PM »
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very nice kwaish ji. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #37 on: March 30, 2010, 12:05:39 PM »
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Zindagi ki Kuch Kadwi Aur sachi Baaton Ko Zehan Mein Rakh kar Yahan ^_^ :icon_geek: :icon_geek: :sunny: Kuch likh Raha Hoon,Umeed Karta Hoon,Jo Baat Main Kehna Chaahta Hoon,Iss Ghazal mein Keh Sakoon...Yeh Ghazal Agar kisi Insaan Ke Hauslo Ko Buland Kar sake To Yehi Iss ghazal Ka Sabse Bada Inaam Hoga..Shukriya

Khud Ko Koi Fanaah Nahi Karta
Zindagi Apni Tabaah nahi Karta... :

Mushkile Mile Hai "Khwaish" To Raaste Bhi Khud Hi Dhoond!!!
Koi Kisi ka Haath Thaam Kar Yahan Chala Nahi Karta...

Kuch Aise Halaat Se Guzar Raha Hai Har Shaks Iss jahan Ka,
Ke Ab koi Aur, Kisi Ke Liye Dua Nahi karta...

Kuch To majbooriyan Hoti Hai Har Insaan Ki,
Koi Shauk Se To Gunaah Nahi karta...

Matlab ka Pyaar, Matlab ki Duniya Hai Yeh "Khwaish"
Bin matlab ke yahan Koi Kisi Se Mila Nahi Karta...

Yahan jab Khud Ke Liye Hi Koi Fursat Nahi!!!
Zakhm Auro Ke koi Sila Nahi Karta...

"Khwaish" Aaj Tu Bebas,Lachaar Aur Maayus Hi sahi!!
Par Hausla Rakh!!! Insaan Apni Hi Nazron Se To Kabhi Gira Nahi karta...

Waqt Ache-Acho Ko Apne Kabze Mein Kar Leta Hai!!
Par Yeh na Soch Ke Insaan Phir Giir ke Kabhi Utha Nahi Karta...

Khud Ko Koi Fanaah Nahi Karta
Zindagi Apni Tabaah Nahi Karta...

                 ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~

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«Reply #38 on: April 06, 2010, 08:27:03 AM »
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Zindagi ki Kuch Kadwi Aur sachi Baaton Ko Zehan Mein Rakh kar Yahan Kuch likh Raha Hoon,Umeed Karta Hoon,Jo Baat Main Kehna Chaahta Hoon,Iss Ghazal mein Keh Sakoon...Yeh Ghazal Agar kisi Insaan Ke Hauslo Ko Buland Kar sake To Yehi Iss ghazal Ka Sabse Bada Inaam Hoga..Shukriya

Khud Ko Koi Fanaah Nahi Karta
Zindagi Apni Tabaah nahi Karta...

Mushkile Mile Hai "Khwaish" To Raaste Bhi Khud Hi Dhoond!!!
Koi Kisi ka Haath Thaam Kar Yahan Chala Nahi Karta...

Kuch Aise Halaat Se Guzar Raha Hai Har Shaks Iss jahan Ka,
Ke Ab koi Aur, Kisi Ke Liye Dua Nahi karta...

Kuch To majbooriyan Hoti Hai Har Insaan Ki,
Koi Shauk Se To Gunaah Nahi karta...

Matlab ka Pyaar, Matlab ki Duniya Hai Yeh "Khwaish"
Bin matlab ke yahan Koi Kisi Se Mila Nahi Karta...

Yahan jab Khud Ke Liye Hi Koi Fursat Nahi!!!
Zakhm Auro Ke koi Sila Nahi Karta...

"Khwaish" Aaj Tu Bebas,Lachaar Aur Maayus Hi sahi!!
Par Hausla Rakh!!! Insaan Apni Hi Nazron Se To Kabhi Gira Nahi karta...

Waqt Ache-Acho Ko Apne Kabze Mein Kar Leta Hai!!
Par Yeh na Soch Ke Insaan Phir Giir ke Kabhi Utha Nahi Karta...

Khud Ko Koi Fanaah Nahi Karta
Zindagi Apni Tabaah Nahi Karta...

                 ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~


Bahut khoob Khwaish Ji
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«Reply #39 on: August 17, 2010, 05:52:00 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Khwaish Dost  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Khaas ye line bohot gehri...aur agar ise hum samajh saken to shayad bohot si takleefon se bach jaayen:

Kuch To majbooriyan Hoti Hai Har Insaan Ki,
Koi Shauk Se To Gunaah Nahi karta...


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«Reply #40 on: August 17, 2010, 05:53:13 PM »
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Bahut khoob Khwaish Ji
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«Reply #41 on: January 05, 2018, 06:06:01 PM »
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<a href="" target="_blank"></a>Gaharai pyar me ho to bewafai nhi hoti.
sachche pyar me kabhi tanhai nhi hoti.
pyar jara sambhal ke krna dosto.
pyar ke jakhm ki koi dawai nhi hoti.
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