Meri Zindagi Ko Woh Jawaani De Gaya "Khwaish"

by khwaish on October 23, 2012, 04:37:20 PM
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Kaash Woh Laut Aae Mujh say Yeh Kehnay..
Tum Hote Kaun ho mujh say Bicharne Walay...



Zindagi Bhar Jisse Dohra Sakoon Aisi Kahaani De Gaya
Woh Baaton-Baaton Mein Aankhon Mein Paani De Gaya

Woh Apne Saath Meri Duniya Bhi Le Jaa Raha Tha..!!
Mujhe To Sirf  Woh Apni Yaadon Ki Nishaani De Gaya

Ek Duje Ko Alwida kehna Naa Usse Aaya  Naa Mujhe
Waqt-e-Rukhsat Ki Woh Ek Shaam Suhaani De Gaya

Zindagi Yuh Guzar Rahi Thi Jaise Bas Ab Tham Jaayegi
Mera Saath Dekar,Meri Zindagi Ko Woh Jawaani De Gaya

Agar Manzilen Juda Hai To Juda Hi Sahee "Khwaish"
Zindagi Ke Kuch Palon Ko Woh Zindegaani De Gaya


         ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: October 23, 2012, 05:10:54 PM »
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Khwaish ji bahut khubsurati se shabdon ko sajaya hai.....waah....v v nice...
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«Reply #2 on: October 23, 2012, 06:44:39 PM »
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Bahut khoob khwaish jee
Applause Applause Applause
2nd and last one...superb..Applause
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«Reply #3 on: October 23, 2012, 06:56:54 PM »
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Bahut Khub...
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«Reply #4 on: October 23, 2012, 07:10:46 PM »
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Bohat Khub Khwaish Jee!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: October 23, 2012, 07:35:23 PM »
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Kaash Woh Laut Aae Mujh say Yeh Kehnay..
Tum Hote Kaun ho mujh say Bicharne Walay...



Zindagi Bhar Jisse Dohra Sakoon Aisi Kahaani De Gaya
Woh Baaton-Baaton Mein Aankhon Mein Paani De Gaya

Woh Apne Saath Meri Duniya Bhi Le Jaa Raha Tha..!!
Mujhe To Sirf  Woh Apni Yaadon Ki Nishaani De Gaya

Ek Duje Ko Alwida kehna Naa Usse Aaya  Naa Mujhe
Waqt-e-Rukhsat Ki Woh Ek Shaam Suhaani De Gaya

Zindagi Yuh Guzar Rahi Thi Jaise Bas Ab Tham Jaayegi
Mera Saath Dekar,Meri Zindagi Ko Woh Jawaani De Gaya

Agar Manzilen Juda Hai To Juda Hi Sahee "Khwaish"
Zindagi Ke Kuch Palon Ko Woh Zindegaani De Gaya


         ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~~

NICE
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«Reply #6 on: October 24, 2012, 01:06:59 AM »
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bahut khoob, dhero dad
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«Reply #7 on: October 24, 2012, 01:38:26 AM »
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Khwaish ji khwaish hai woh daad doN ki maja aa jai par lafaz hi nahi mil rahe sab shayer ban kar jangel mai chaley gae.Chalo isi say kam chala layti hun mubarik for your creation.
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«Reply #8 on: October 24, 2012, 01:42:12 AM »
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Baeautifulllll
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«Reply #9 on: October 24, 2012, 02:00:34 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
wonderful...
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«Reply #10 on: October 24, 2012, 03:11:12 AM »
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Kaash Woh Laut Aae Mujh say Yeh Kehnay..
Tum Hote Kaun ho mujh say Bicharne Walay...



Zindagi Bhar Jisse Dohra Sakoon Aisi Kahaani De Gaya
Woh Baaton-Baaton Mein Aankhon Mein Paani De Gaya

Woh Apne Saath Meri Duniya Bhi Le Jaa Raha Tha..!!
Mujhe To Sirf  Woh Apni Yaadon Ki Nishaani De Gaya

Ek Duje Ko Alwida kehna Naa Usse Aaya  Naa Mujhe
Waqt-e-Rukhsat Ki Woh Ek Shaam Suhaani De Gaya

Zindagi Yuh Guzar Rahi Thi Jaise Bas Ab Tham Jaayegi
Mera Saath Dekar,Meri Zindagi Ko Woh Jawaani De Gaya

Agar Manzilen Juda Hai To Juda Hi Sahee "Khwaish"
Zindagi Ke Kuch Palon Ko Woh Zindegaani De Gaya


         ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~~

kya baat hai khwaish ji bohut umda ghazal hai, sabhi ashar achche hain aur khas taur se is shair ka to jawab nahiN..


Agar Manzilen Juda Hai To Juda Hi Sahee "Khwaish"

Zindagi Ke Kuch Palon Ko Woh Zindegaani De Gaya.

DheroN daaad qubool karen....


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«Reply #11 on: October 24, 2012, 07:00:49 AM »
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Khwaish ji bahut khubsurati se shabdon ko sajaya hai.....waah....v v nice...


Thankyou Sooooooo Much Gayatri ji.. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #12 on: October 24, 2012, 09:15:07 AM »
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very nice
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«Reply #13 on: October 24, 2012, 09:35:11 AM »
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Waah khwaish ji badi khoobsurti se bayan kiya apne
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«Reply #14 on: October 24, 2012, 10:25:51 AM »
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Khawahish Jee Aadaab!


bahut khoob janab.. bade achche ahsaas O khayaal piroye haiN aapne...
Sabhi ashaar khoob rahe... Usual Smile

Humari dheroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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