"SAMJHOTA"

by kamal aggarwal on February 18, 2011, 05:45:55 PM
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MAI EK NANHI KALI JAB KHILI USKE AANGAN ME, MAA NE KIYA THA EK "SAMJHOTA"   KI
HAR   KISI   KE   NASEEB  MAI  BETA   NAHI  HOTA

MAINE JAB RAKHA KADAM DHRTI PAR PEHLA ,MAA NE SAMJHAKAR YE BOLA
HAR KADAM GIN-GIN KAR RAKHNA, CHAL SE APNI KARLE "SAMJHOTA"

JAB MUN-N MACHLA GUDE-GUDIYO PAR, MAINE KHILONO KA THAILA KHOLA
MAABOLI CHAKLA BELAN LEKAR HAATHON ME, TU CHUHLE SE KARLE "SAMJHOTA"

JAB CHAHA MAINE PADNE-LIKHNE KO ,MAA AA GAYI LEKAR SEEKH KA JHOLA
IN SABME KYA RAKHA HAI ,SASURAL KI SOCH SE KARNA HAI "SAMJHOTA"

JAB LADKPAN ME RAKHA KADUM TO ,MUN-N MERA UDNE KO BOLA
MAA NE CHUNAR DAAL DI SAR PE, BOLI SHRM-HAYA SE KARLE "SAMJHOTA"

WIDA HUI NEHAR SE JAB MAIN ,MAA NE GALE LAGAKAR YE BOLA
DONO GHRON KI LAAJ KI KHATIR ,KAR LIZO TU HAR "SAMJHOTA"

SAAS-NANAD KI TEHAL-CHAKRI NE ,MERE ARMAANO KA GALA JO GHOTA
HAR DARD KO DIL ME DABA LIYA ,BAS YAAD RAKHA EK "SAMJHOTA"

AAYA WO SHUBH DIN MERE AANGAN ME ,EK NANHI KALI NE AANKHO KO KHOLA
LIYA PRUN MAINE AB MAIN USKO, NAHI KARNE DUNGI KOI "SAMJHOTA"

LEKIN  KACHI UMAR  KE  NAJUK  TUN NE, MERE  JEWAN KA SAATH YU CHODA
MAIN TO CHALI GAYI LEKIN PICHE CHOD DIYA, BETI KO AUR SAATH ME CHODA WAHI "SAMJHOTA"...

YU KEHNE KO TO HUMNE BADA LIYEN KADUM KITNE HI AAGE  PHIR BHI
KANHI NA KANHI KISI NA KISI ROOP ME EK LADKI AAJ BHI KARTI HAI "SAMJHOTA"....
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«Reply #1 on: February 18, 2011, 09:25:39 PM »
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Moved to appropriate section!

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THANX...
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«Reply #2 on: February 18, 2011, 09:27:50 PM »
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Bahut khoob kamal ji.
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«Reply #3 on: February 19, 2011, 01:20:24 AM »
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Aadaab Janab!

Behad khoob aur sahiN farmayaa aapne par guzre hua kal lagta hai hume yeH aaj ki baateN nahi... Usual Smile

Wel aapke ahsaas behad mindblowing rahe ..
Dil se daad hazir hai ...

Likhate rahiye...
Khush O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile         

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«Reply #4 on: February 19, 2011, 11:41:39 AM »
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MAI EK NANHI KALI JAB KHILI USKE AANGAN ME, MAA NE KIYA THA EK "SAMJHOTA"   KI
HAR   KISI   KE   NASEEB  MAI  BETA   NAHI  HOTA

MAINE JAB RAKHA KADAM DHRTI PAR PEHLA ,MAA NE SAMJHAKAR YE BOLA
HAR KADAM GIN-GIN KAR RAKHNA, CHAL SE APNI KARLE "SAMJHOTA"

JAB MUN-N MACHLA GUDE-GUDIYO PAR, MAINE KHILONO KA THAILA KHOLA
MAABOLI CHAKLA BELAN LEKAR HAATHON ME, TU CHUHLE SE KARLE "SAMJHOTA"

JAB CHAHA MAINE PADNE-LIKHNE KO ,MAA AA GAYI LEKAR SEEKH KA JHOLA
IN SABME KYA RAKHA HAI ,SASURAL KI SOCH SE KARNA HAI "SAMJHOTA"

JAB LADKPAN ME RAKHA KADUM TO ,MUN-N MERA UDNE KO BOLA
MAA NE CHUNAR DAAL DI SAR PE, BOLI SHRM-HAYA SE KARLE "SAMJHOTA"

WIDA HUI NEHAR SE JAB MAIN ,MAA NE GALE LAGAKAR YE BOLA
DONO GHRON KI LAAJ KI KHATIR ,KAR LIZO TU HAR "SAMJHOTA"

SAAS-NANAD KI TEHAL-CHAKRI NE ,MERE ARMAANO KA GALA JO GHOTA
HAR DARD KO DIL ME DABA LIYA ,BAS YAAD RAKHA EK "SAMJHOTA"

AAYA WO SHUBH DIN MERE AANGAN ME ,EK NANHI KALI NE AANKHO KO KHOLA
LIYA PRUN MAINE AB MAIN USKO, NAHI KARNE DUNGI KOI "SAMJHOTA"

LEKIN  KACHI UMAR  KE  NAJUK  TUN NE, MERE  JEWAN KA SAATH YU CHODA
MAIN TO CHALI GAYI LEKIN PICHE CHOD DIYA, BETI KO AUR SAATH ME CHODA WAHI "SAMJHOTA"...

YU KEHNE KO TO HUMNE BADA LIYEN KADUM KITNE HI AAGE  PHIR BHI
KANHI NA KANHI KISI NA KISI ROOP ME EK LADKI AAJ BHI KARTI HAI "SAMJHOTA"....


Very Impressive .... Kamal Ji !
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«Reply #5 on: February 19, 2011, 12:52:30 PM »
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bahut achha topic kamal ji..

or kafi achhi rahi aapki lines..

umda dher saari daad~
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«Reply #6 on: February 19, 2011, 01:28:23 PM »
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uff Kamal ji--
aapne jo likha hai wo agr ekant me beth kar nahi parhta to shayd wo feel aur dard ka ehsaas kabhi nhi hota jo aapke alfaazo me bayan kiya.
ek picture sa chalta raha dimaag me --ek ladki ke janam se lekar aakhir tak sab kuch maujud hai isme wo bhi behtareen tarike se.
behad umda Post aur haqeeqat rachna Kamal ji.
aapko hazaron daad --
aur shabd bhi nhi kuch kahne ko ab
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«Reply #7 on: February 19, 2011, 01:40:05 PM »
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bht bht khoob kamal ji.....
hamare samaj ki ek kadvi sacchai...
ko lafzo me bakhoobi dhala hai aapne....
hats off to u for dis beautiful creation....
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«Reply #8 on: February 19, 2011, 06:41:38 PM »
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thanku bbl ji
 i can't understand what u want to say in this msg

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YOINDIA MONITOR!

THANX...



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«Reply #9 on: February 19, 2011, 06:45:43 PM »
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thanku very much nirala ji aapne ise usi ehsaas ke sath pada hai jis ehsaas ke sath maine likha hai.
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«Reply #10 on: February 19, 2011, 06:52:28 PM »
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thanku ABHI JI AND ANSHUMALI JI AND PARWAAZ Ji


ye sirf  kal ki baat nahi hai aaj bhi aisa hota hai "SAMJHOTA"
hota tha aur hota rahega. ruk sakta hai hume apni soch badlne ki jarorut hai
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«Reply #11 on: February 19, 2011, 11:36:20 PM »
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rula diya aapne kamal ji....sach...bahut behtarin likha hai aapne..... mujhe aaj tak ye samajh nahi aaya ki samjhote kabhi kabhi zindagi k liye zaruri q ho jaate hai....ye rachna padh kar mehsus hua jaise zindagi hi ek samjhota hai....
jee rahe hai qunki jeena nahi waqt gujaarna hai...well....bahut khoob likha aapne.... Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: February 20, 2011, 03:21:03 PM »
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thanku very much NIKHAAR JI
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«Reply #13 on: February 20, 2011, 03:53:49 PM »
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Kamal ji--aapke iss kalaam ke ehsaas aur sachhai sachmuch dil ko aansuo se bhar deta hai--
uff alfazo ki shakti bhi kamaal hai--
really great peshkash dear
hats off to u
be happy always
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«Reply #14 on: February 20, 2011, 04:00:54 PM »
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thanku nirala ji aapka tahe-dil se shukriya ada karti hoon
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