teri chahat ban jaun

by saahill on May 01, 2012, 03:23:12 AM
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sochna chorh diya jab se tujhe paaya hai
             na koi our khayal dil mein mere aaya hai

guzarte they mere dil raat teri yaadon mein
khoya rehta tha bas teri hi baaton mein
             mulaqaaton ka woh daur yaad aaya hai

saamne rahe tu meri aankhon ke yeh armaan tha
teri chahat ban jaun dil ko yeh junoon to tha
             khawab woh bankar kar haqqeqat ab aaya hai

uthakar kalm our kagaj teri tasveer banata tha
apni mohabat ke rango se use sajata tha
             wohi chehra ab ru ba ru maine paaya hai

sochna chorh diya jab se tujhe paaya hai
             na koi our khayaal dil mein ab aaya hai
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«Reply #1 on: May 01, 2012, 03:32:15 AM »
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Shahil bhai kya kahne... Bhoot khoob likha h aapne...
Ak bat btayege aap etni saari poetry kis trah likh lete h.
M to agar ak gazal bhi likhne baithth hu to wo kai dino me jaakr puri hoti h....
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Wese aap es post me Chorh diya ki jagah Chor diya hi kar le.
Chor diya Sayad theek h....
Plz bura mat manna mujhe laga ki aap aesa karege to jyada achcha lagega.
Mene aapki post pe pahle comment kiye h.
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«Reply #2 on: May 01, 2012, 04:39:40 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: May 01, 2012, 07:02:09 AM »
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thx ms bhai
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«Reply #4 on: May 01, 2012, 09:51:13 AM »
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bahut khoob sahiiljii...Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: May 01, 2012, 11:12:33 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: May 01, 2012, 04:15:29 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: May 02, 2012, 05:18:31 AM »
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thx doly ji
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«Reply #8 on: May 02, 2012, 05:34:13 AM »
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khoob kaha Saahil Ji  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: May 02, 2012, 07:59:51 AM »
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thx hridhay ji
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«Reply #10 on: May 03, 2012, 03:28:15 AM »
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«Reply #12 on: May 04, 2012, 03:09:24 AM »
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