---to baat hai---

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aansuon ko chipao
dard me bhi muskarao
--to baat hai
apne gam me sabi rote hain
gairon ke gam me neer bahao
--to baat hai
paane ki chahat me dete hain sabhi
bina aas ke dete jao
--to baat hai
mohabbat ko paakar sabhi jhoome
gam e judai me ta-umra muskrao
--to baat hai
chngari se shola sab bhadkaye
bujhi shama ko jalao
--to baat hai
nigahon se qatl sab ho jayen
labon ki khamosi se chlni ho jao
--to baat hai
dil to sanam ko apne sabhi dete ha
ruh se KB fana ho jao
--to baat hai
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«Reply #1 on: January 10, 2011, 07:06:51 PM »
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bahut sunder rachana killbill ji
mazaa aa gaya
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«Reply #2 on: January 10, 2011, 07:40:06 PM »
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sukriya Sangwaan ji.
samay dene aur sarahne ke liye
dhanyabaad
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«Reply #3 on: January 11, 2011, 12:12:04 AM »
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KB jee Aadaab!

Janab kuch to baat hai aapki in baatoN meiN
Achche ahsaas o khayaal rahe ....

Kia baat hai daad janab. Usual Smile

Likhte rahiye.....
Khush O aabad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez.... Usual Smile         

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«Reply #4 on: January 11, 2011, 11:13:41 PM »
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mastammmmmmmmmmm reeeeeee.........KB..yahan expresion changed...

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«Reply #5 on: January 11, 2011, 11:21:47 PM »
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sukriya re--
ab hui na kuch baat.
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«Reply #6 on: January 12, 2011, 09:44:03 AM »
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bahut bahut khub KBC...ji

khub haiji...

isi tarah likhte jao to baat hai..
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«Reply #7 on: January 12, 2011, 09:57:01 AM »
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wah KB ji.....bahoot hi khoob likha....

likhne ko to mai bhi kuch likh hi leta hun,
KB ki tarah likh paun to baat hai
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«Reply #8 on: January 12, 2011, 12:25:18 PM »
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Manju ji aapka sukriya dil se.
Beqaraar ji aapke hausala afzai ke liye behad sukriya.
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«Reply #9 on: January 12, 2011, 12:31:23 PM »
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bohut khoob kb ji
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«Reply #10 on: January 12, 2011, 12:32:52 PM »
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wah KB ji.....bahoot hi khoob likha....

likhne ko to mai bhi kuch likh hi leta hun,
KB ki tarah likh paun to baat hai


sahi kaha bekaraar ji aapne.....KB k likhne ki baat hi kuch aur hai...
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«Reply #11 on: January 12, 2011, 12:46:13 PM »
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Sahil ji aapne pasand kiya iska sukriya bhai.
Kasak ---
ab mujhe chane ke jhad me na chadhao--
gir jaunga re.
Beqaraar ji ne to aag lagai aur tum usme Ghee dalne ki baat karing.
agar mere seedha sapal lafzon ko aap jese shayr pasand krte hain to ye meri kabiliyat nahi aaplogo ki Nazre inayat hain ji.
by the way--sukriya fir se.
bas aise hi mujhe Chadhate raho hawa me:)Usual Smile
sukriya
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«Reply #12 on: January 12, 2011, 01:02:15 PM »
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kb chane k ped se chane tod k akele na kaha lena mujhe bhi dena ji.....
fir hum aise hi chadhate rahenge aapko
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«Reply #13 on: January 12, 2011, 01:31:22 PM »
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Aysi achhi rachna par daad dein
Aur taaliyein hum sab bajaayein
-- to baat hai

Yu tou sab likhte hain,par kb ki tarah
Theethurte Ess mausam mai kalam uthaao
--to koi baat hai

VERY GOOD POEM kb..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

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aansuon ko chipao
dard me bhi muskarao
--to baat hai
apne gam me sabi rote hain
gairon ke gam me neer bahao
--to baat hai
paane ki chahat me dete hain sabhi
bina aas ke dete jao
--to baat hai
mohabbat ko paakar sabhi jhoome
gam e judai me ta-umra muskrao
--to baat hai
chngari se shola sab bhadkaye
bujhi shama ko jalao
--to baat hai
nigahon se qatl sab ho jayen
labon ki khamosi se chlni ho jao
--to baat hai
dil to sanam ko apne sabhi dete ha
ruh se KB fana ho jao
--to baat hai
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«Reply #14 on: May 04, 2011, 03:54:32 PM »
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Aysi achhi rachna par daad dein
Aur taaliyein hum sab bajaayein
-- to baat hai

Yu tou sab likhte hain,par kb ki tarah
Theethurte Ess mausam mai kalam uthaao
--to koi baat hai

VERY GOOD POEM kb..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

ye iska style hai……
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