Toota huaa shisha hoon, bikhartaa bhi nahi hoon.. Ram Saraswat

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Dhundhla bhi nahi hoon , mein nikhartaa bhi nahi hoon,
toota  huaa  shisha hoon ,  bikhartaa  bhi  nahi hoon.

Kehne ko ho ke ru - b - ru  kuchh  apne  dil  ki baat,
himmat  nahi padati hai ,  mein dartaa  bhi nahi hoon.

Kartaa    hoon   buraai   ki,  buraai   hazaar   baar,
parhez   buraai   se,   sudhartaa   bhi   nahi   hoon.  

Sachchaai  ugalne    ko ,   tarasti    zubaan    meri,
sach  bolane  ka  dum, magar bhartaa  bhi  nahi  hoon.

Palate  hein kuchh bhi karne ko, dil mein hazar kwaab,
mein  bin kiye  rahata  nahi, kartaa  bhi  nahi  hoon.

Mat  poochho  mujhse, qiyon  mein zindagi ki raah par,
khud chal nahi saktaa  hoon ,thahrtaa  bhi  nahi hoon.

Hota   hai   mere  samane,   har   roz   qatl -e -aam,
nahi   dekh  paata,   dekh   sihartaa  bhi  nahi hoon.  

Hein   karke   pahal, mujh ko  bulate  na   wo  kabhi,
khud jaa  ke miloon  mein, to  akhartaa bhi nahi hoon.  

Rakhte  hein  apni  aankhon  mein,  mere  liye  jagah,  
fir  bhi  mein un  ke dil  mein utartaa bhi nahi hoon.

Yoon  jee  raha  hoon "Ram" khud mar mar ke baar baar,
mein jee  nahi paata hoon , per  martaa bhi nahi hoon.  
 

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«Reply #1 on: October 04, 2012, 05:27:26 PM »
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wah.wah kya baat hai...behad khoobsurat...i loved it...Usual Smile
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«Reply #2 on: October 04, 2012, 05:54:54 PM »
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Beautiful..
very very nice ghazal
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«Reply #3 on: October 04, 2012, 06:10:05 PM »
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Dhundhla bhi nahi hoon , mein nikhartaa bhi nahi hoon,
toota  huaa  shisha hoon ,  bikhartaa  bhi  nahi hoon.

Kehne ko ho ke ru - b - ru  kuchh  apne  dil  ki baat,
himmat  nahi padati hai ,  mein dartaa  bhi nahi hoon.

Kartaa    hoon   buraai   ki,  buraai   hazaar   baar,
parhez   buraai   se,   sudhartaa   bhi   nahi   hoon.   

Sachchaai  ugalne    ko ,   tarasti    zubaan    meri,
sach  bolane  ka  dum, magar bhartaa  bhi  nahi  hoon.

Palate  hein kuchh bhi karne ko, dil mein hazar kwaab,
mein  bin kiye  rahata  nahi, kartaa  bhi  nahi  hoon.

Mat  poochho  mujhse, qiyon  mein zindagi ki raah par,
khud chal nahi saktaa  hoon ,thahrtaa  bhi  nahi hoon.

Hota   hai   mere  samane,   har   roz   qatl -e -aam,
nahi   dekh  paata,   dekh   sihartaa  bhi  nahi hoon. 

Hein   karke   pahal, mujh ko  bulate  na   wo  kabhi,
khud jaa  ke miloon  mein, to  akhartaa bhi nahi hoon.   

Rakhte  hein  apni  aankhon  mein,  mere  liye  jagah, 
fir  bhi  mein un  ke dil  mein utartaa bhi nahi hoon.

Yoon  jee  raha  hoon "Ram" khud mar mar ke baar baar,
mein jee  nahi paata hoon , per  martaa bhi nahi hoon. 
 


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«Reply #4 on: October 04, 2012, 06:19:28 PM »
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Dhundhla bhi nahi hoon , mein nikhartaa bhi nahi hoon,
toota  huaa  shisha hoon ,  bikhartaa  bhi  nahi hoon.

Kehne ko ho ke ru - b - ru  kuchh  apne  dil  ki baat,
himmat  nahi padati hai ,  mein dartaa  bhi nahi hoon.

Kartaa    hoon   buraai   ki,  buraai   hazaar   baar,
parhez   buraai   se,   sudhartaa   bhi   nahi   hoon.   

Sachchaai  ugalne    ko ,   tarasti    zubaan    meri,
sach  bolane  ka  dum, magar bhartaa  bhi  nahi  hoon.

Palate  hein kuchh bhi karne ko, dil mein hazar kwaab,
mein  bin kiye  rahata  nahi, kartaa  bhi  nahi  hoon.

Mat  poochho  mujhse, qiyon  mein zindagi ki raah par,
khud chal nahi saktaa  hoon ,thahrtaa  bhi  nahi hoon.

Hota   hai   mere  samane,   har   roz   qatl -e -aam,
nahi   dekh  paata,   dekh   sihartaa  bhi  nahi hoon. 

Hein   karke   pahal, mujh ko  bulate  na   wo  kabhi,
khud jaa  ke miloon  mein, to  akhartaa bhi nahi hoon.   

Rakhte  hein  apni  aankhon  mein,  mere  liye  jagah, 
fir  bhi  mein un  ke dil  mein utartaa bhi nahi hoon.

Yoon  jee  raha  hoon "Ram" khud mar mar ke baar baar,
mein jee  nahi paata hoon , per  martaa bhi nahi hoon. 
 




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«Reply #5 on: October 05, 2012, 12:39:22 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: October 05, 2012, 01:49:02 AM »
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Ram ji bahut khoobsurat ghazal....wah wah wah....
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Bahut Bahut Bahut Hi Khubsurat Gazal Ram Ji Daaaaaaaaaaaaad
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bohut khub raam ji kamaal kar diya aapne
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wah.wah kya baat hai...behad khoobsurat...i loved it...Usual Smile

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«Reply #10 on: October 05, 2012, 05:11:47 PM »
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Beautiful..
very very nice ghazal
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«Reply #11 on: October 05, 2012, 05:14:36 PM »
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ek rau iss khoobsoorat ghazal per
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mashaalaah ek rau qubool karen
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Ram ji bahut khoobsurat ghazal....wah wah wah....
Bahut bahut shukriya gaytriji
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