Uthi jo Uski Qalam.......... Abul Asad

by Abul Asad on January 22, 2012, 01:57:33 AM
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Yeh Ghazal Ustad Ibrahim zauq ki Mashoor ghazal “Layi hayat aaye” ke andaaz men likhne ki koshish hai Aaplogon ki nazr.
 
Likha Voh jo rizq aaye, uthi jo uski qalam chale
 Na laayi zaroorat aaye, na pardi musibat chale
 
Kuch din ka hai yeh khel aye ibne adam yanhaan
 Apni marzi nahi yanhaan uski marzi chale
 
Dil ke lagaanay se bhi na jab koi dil lagay
 Vaisa kanhaan daur raha ab ke koi dillagi chale
 
Deedar-e hur bhi yanhan hoga toe kahenge ham
 yanhaan Nahin hai voh dil chalo, dil ki gali chale
 
Partav-e khur ka raaz chupaye hai har kali
 Koi bad-e saba chale to phir kanhaan chale
 
Danishvari na gulshan men chale, janhan aisey husn khiley
 Dil bhi lagaye chale hum to kitnay gul ko tar chale
 
Tuu nazaan na ho apni qismat par aye raqeeb
 Ye daur jo chale hai abhi har waqt na voh chale
 
Maghrib men kanhaan voh mashriqi baten chale
 Janhaan dil hi nahi, kanhaan phir dil ki baten chale
 
Karle jama amaal jab tak hai yeh sanse teri chale
 Jaana hai tujhe bhi Asad janhaan voh chale chale
 Abul Asad
 

Rizq: Rozi, khaana,
 Ibne Adam: Adam ka beta,
Deedar: dekhna, dekhai dena
 Partav-e Khur: Suraj ki raushni, suraj ki kirnay
 Bad-e Saba: subha ki thandi taza hava,
Daanishvari: akalmandi, hoshiyari
 Naazan: naaz karna, fakhr karna
 Raqeeb: Vo doosra jo tumhari muhabbat ko Chahe. competitor in love
 Maghrib: East, Mashriq : West
 Amaal: deeds, karam
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«Reply #1 on: January 22, 2012, 03:46:37 AM »
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boht khoob likha abul sahab . Kuch lafz urdu ke hume samj nahi lage but boht khoob
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«Reply #2 on: January 22, 2012, 05:36:37 AM »
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Quote from: Abul Asad on January 22, 2012, 01:57:33 AM
Yeh Ghazal Ustad Ibrahim zauq ki Mashoor ghazal “Layi hayat aaye” ke andaaz men likhne ki koshish hai Aaplogon ki nazr.
 
Likha Voh jo rizq aaye, uthi jo uski qalam chale
 Na laayi zaroorat aaye, na pardi musibat chale
 
Kuch din ka hai yeh khel aye ibne adam yanhaan
 Apni marzi nahi yanhaan uski marzi chale
 
Dil ke lagaanay se bhi na jab koi dil lagay
 Vaisa kanhaan daur raha ab ke koi dillagi chale
 
Deedar-e hur bhi yanhan hoga toe kahenge ham
 yanhaan Nahin hai voh dil chalo, dil ki gali chale
 
Partav-e khur ka raaz chupaye hai har kali
 Koi bad-e saba chale to phir kanhaan chale
 
Danishvari na gulshan men chale, janhan aisey husn khiley
 Dil bhi lagaye chale hum to kitnay gul ko tar chale
 
Tuu nazaan na ho apni qismat par aye raqeeb
 Ye daur jo chale hai abhi har waqt na voh chale
 
Maghrib men kanhaan voh mashriqi baten chale
 Janhaan dil hi nahi, kanhaan phir dil ki baten chale
 
Karle jama amaal jab tak hai yeh sanse teri chale
 Jaana hai tujhe bhi Asad janhaan voh chale chale
 Abul Asad
 

Rizq: Rozi, khaana,
 Ibne Adam: Adam ka beta,
Deedar: dekhna, dekhai dena
 Partav-e Khur: Suraj ki raushni, suraj ki kirnay
 Bad-e Saba: subha ki thandi taza hava,
Daanishvari: akalmandi, hoshiyari
 Naazan: naaz karna, fakhr karna
 Raqeeb: Vo doosra jo tumhari muhabbat ko Chahe. competitor in love
 Maghrib: WEST, Mashriq : EAST
 Amaal: deeds, karam



BAHUT KHOOB ABUL SAHAB YE HUA AAPKA KALAAM .HAMEIN BHI ISS SE SEEKHNE KO MILE GAA. Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: January 22, 2012, 06:08:19 AM »
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Adil Sahab,

Inayat aapki, Sahil sahab ki
meri ibtedayi koshishen hain yeh
Age bahut kuch aur seekhna baaqi hai.

Ap ki daad ka shukriya.

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«Reply #4 on: January 22, 2012, 06:11:33 AM »
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Quote from: saahill on January 22, 2012, 03:46:37 AM
boht khoob likha abul sahab . Kuch lafz urdu ke hume samj nahi lage but boht khoob

Saahil Sahab,

Aap se mile daad to phir hovi koi bat

kuch alfazon ke ma'ine ghazal ke neeche darz hain
phir bhi aap hukum kijeye, jo bhi alfazon ke ma'aine aap kahenge
main unhen yanhan post kardonga.

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«Reply #5 on: January 22, 2012, 10:45:37 AM »
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Yeh Ghazal Ustad Ibrahim zauq ki Mashoor ghazal “Layi hayat aaye” ke andaaz men likhne ki koshish hai Aaplogon ki nazr.
 
Likha Voh jo rizq aaye, uthi jo uski qalam chale
 Na laayi zaroorat aaye, na pardi musibat chale
 
Kuch din ka hai yeh khel aye ibne adam yanhaan
 Apni marzi nahi yanhaan uski marzi chale
 
Dil ke lagaanay se bhi na jab koi dil lagay
 Vaisa kanhaan daur raha ab ke koi dillagi chale
 
Deedar-e hur bhi yanhan hoga toe kahenge ham
 yanhaan Nahin hai voh dil chalo, dil ki gali chale
 
Partav-e khur ka raaz chupaye hai har kali
 Koi bad-e saba chale to phir kanhaan chale
 
Danishvari na gulshan men chale, janhan aisey husn khiley
 Dil bhi lagaye chale hum to kitnay gul ko tar chale
 
Tuu nazaan na ho apni qismat par aye raqeeb
 Ye daur jo chale hai abhi har waqt na voh chale
 
Maghrib men kanhaan voh mashriqi baten chale
 Janhaan dil hi nahi, kanhaan phir dil ki baten chale
 
Karle jama amaal jab tak hai yeh sanse teri chale
 Jaana hai tujhe bhi Asad janhaan voh chale chale
 Abul Asad
 

Rizq: Rozi, khaana,
 Ibne Adam: Adam ka beta,
Deedar: dekhna, dekhai dena
 Partav-e Khur: Suraj ki raushni, suraj ki kirnay
 Bad-e Saba: subha ki thandi taza hava,
Daanishvari: akalmandi, hoshiyari
 Naazan: naaz karna, fakhr karna
 Raqeeb: Vo doosra jo tumhari muhabbat ko Chahe. competitor in love
 Maghrib: East, Mashriq : West
 Amaal: deeds, karam



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«Reply #6 on: January 22, 2012, 10:51:29 AM »
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Bahut khoob Abul Saheb
Accha kalaam pesh kiya hai apne..
Daad haajir hai apke liye..Applause ApplauseApplause ApplauseApplause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: January 22, 2012, 02:45:43 PM »
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waaaaahhh
bht umda Ghazal Abul sahab.
behtareen aur lajawaaaabbb

daad daad daaad daad aur dher saari daad kubul karen
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«Reply #8 on: January 22, 2012, 04:48:37 PM »
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Quote from: sarfira on January 22, 2012, 02:45:43 PM
waaaaahhh
bht umda Ghazal Abul sahab.
behtareen aur lajawaaaabbb

daad daad daaad daad aur dher saari daad kubul karen


Sarfira ji,

Itni saari daad ?
Bahut hi acha laga aapse milleen jo Daad.
Ye hamari ibtedai ki peshkashon men aap ka bahut
bada hath raha, hame sarhane ka, kheemti mashvaron ka
aur haunsla afzai karne ka. Aap ki har inayat ka shukriya.

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«Reply #9 on: January 22, 2012, 04:51:35 PM »
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Qalb Sahab,
Behad shukriya aapka Sahab
nadaan si koshish ko sarhane ka
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«Reply #10 on: January 22, 2012, 04:55:55 PM »
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Bahut khoob Abul Saheb
Accha kalaam pesh kiya hai apne..
Daad haajir hai apke liye..Applause ApplauseApplause ApplauseApplause Applause


MKV ji,

Sahab bahut bahut shukriya,
Aap ke pyar bhare alfazon ka
aapki behtareen daad ka.

Abul Asad
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«Reply #11 on: January 23, 2012, 04:16:47 AM »
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Bahut khoob asad saheb
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«Reply #12 on: January 23, 2012, 05:14:01 AM »
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Shukriya Dr. Sahab,

Behad Shukriya Janaab aapka

Dua goo
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