Waqt ki deewar par.....manjum

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Waqt ki deewar par
Ek poster si zindgi...

Kuchh ruke
Rukkar padha
kuchh ne ruk kar sirf dekha
Kuchh ne dali ek nazar
aur chal diye.....

kuchh ne noucha
bin padhe hi
aur kuchh the
khikhila kar hans diye.....

Bheed thi bhari magar
apne nahi the
ek chubhan thi aankh main
sapne nahin the...

dard tha
bas dard tha..
chain ka zara sa
marham nahin tha...

dard ki deewar par
ek poster si zindgi...

manju "mann"
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«Reply #1 on: April 15, 2011, 12:17:28 PM »
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hmm……
zindgi ke kitne roop dekne ko milte hain yo par…
good
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«Reply #2 on: April 15, 2011, 12:22:48 PM »
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thanks......niralaji......zindgi hai hi esi...
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«Reply #3 on: April 15, 2011, 12:43:55 PM »
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kabhi khushaal
kabhi bahaal
kabhi satranghj
kabhi berang……
yahi hai zindgi……

mere khyaal se sirf ehsaaso ka naam hai zindgi
jesi soch bas wesi zindgi………

ab is topic par kabi kuch nai likhna muje…
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«Reply #4 on: April 15, 2011, 12:46:49 PM »
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han ji niralaji sach kaha aapne..... jaisi socho waisi hai...
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«Reply #5 on: April 15, 2011, 12:50:45 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Anju Ji..

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«Reply #6 on: April 15, 2011, 12:52:15 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya khwaishji....

sath rahiega sada......
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«Reply #7 on: April 15, 2011, 02:01:15 PM »
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wahhhhhhhhhh

manju ji kya baat he maja aa gaya .........sabse alag aur hat ke theme he apki is post ki is baar.........really very wonderful though and deep feelings from heart........behtareen peshkash....

ek request he apse........apne jo poster word use kiya he ho sake to use hata de aur uski jagah tasveer use kare........

actually apne bht seriously likha he aur poster word english ka he to match nahi ho raha he aur poetry ki seriousnes ko break kar raha he......

once again congrats for this lovely poetry......
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«Reply #8 on: April 15, 2011, 02:08:13 PM »
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bahutbahut shukriya metrixji... aap ka sujhao acha hai par poster aur tasvir main bahut fark hai... tasvir saheji jati hain.. sambhali jati hain aur poster.. ek bar kisi deewar par chipka diya gaya fir use chipkane wala bhi nahin dekhta ki uska kya hua... pata nahin esa hamne tab bhi socha tha jab likha aur abhi bhi yahi lagta hai...... so poster hi thik hai....

aap ka bahut bahut shukriya jo aapne itna pasand kiya... hame laga sab ko atpata sa lagega...

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«Reply #9 on: April 15, 2011, 06:50:23 PM »
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boht acha or sacha likha manjum ji .
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«Reply #10 on: April 15, 2011, 07:05:00 PM »
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bht bht khoob manju ji....
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«Reply #11 on: April 15, 2011, 08:09:45 PM »
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Waqt ki deewar par
Ek poster si zindgi...

Kuchh ruke
Rukkar padha
kuchh ne ruk kar sirf dekha
Kuchh ne dali ek nazar
aur chal diye.....

kuchh ne noucha
bin padhe hi
aur kuchh the
khikhila kar hans diye.....

Bheed thi bhari magar
apne nahi the
ek chubhan thi aankh main
sapne nahin the...

dard tha
bas dard tha..
chain ka zara sa
marham nahin tha...

dard ki deewar par
ek poster si zindgi...

manju "mann"

Sache ehsaas bahut khoob lage hume .. Manjum Ji !

ek umdaa rachna ko janam dene ki tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... qubuul famaayeN ... yunhi likhte rahen ... khush rahen ... duaaoN ke saath ... !
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«Reply #12 on: April 16, 2011, 09:23:25 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya saahilji..... sath rahie....
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«Reply #13 on: April 16, 2011, 09:25:10 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya priyaji....

yun hi sath rahie....
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«Reply #14 on: April 16, 2011, 09:27:07 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya anshuji.....

aapki daad aur duaye sar aankhon par.... yun hi sath rahiega...
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