Aksar Hum Yeh Gunaah Kartey Hai ......... (Jasbir Singh)

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AKSAR HUM YEH GUNAAH KARTEY HAI
DOSTOH KOH DIL MEH BASA RAKHTEY HAI
KISI DIN WOH HUMEY CHODD JATEY HAI
SABAK SEEKHNEY KEY LIYE, HUM FIR YEH GUNAAH KARTEY HAI

DOSTOH KOH DIL MEH BASA RAKHTEY HAI
BUSS YEHI GUNAAH HAR BAAR KARTEY HAI




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«Reply #1 on: December 11, 2008, 01:53:06 AM »
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Khoob likha hai Jasbir ji...


Humko bhi maloom tha ke dosti masoom tha
Dekhte hi dekhte hum dosti pe jaan gawai tha

Aakhir zameen mein pade raak se samna hua tha
Mitt gaye hai lamhon ki dastaan dard ka samna hua tha

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Nice Jas Ji
and equally good response Honey Ji
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Nice Jas Ji
and equally good response Honey Ji


Thanks Rajesh for your appreciation

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«Reply #4 on: December 11, 2008, 02:37:04 AM »
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Khoob likha hai Jasbir ji...


Humko bhi maloom tha ke dosti masoom tha
Dekhte hi dekhte hum dosti pe jaan gawai tha

Aakhir zameen mein pade raak se samna hua tha
Mitt gaye hai lamhon ki dastaan dard ka samna hua tha

________honeyrose_______



Thanks Honey
you have written wonderfully tooo.



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