Ek Aur Manjar

by NETRAPAL on May 21, 2007, 09:47:58 AM
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dikhne lage hai sab tarf katre khoon ke fir ek bar
dahal uutha hai  jarra jarra bhart ka dhamake se fir ek bar

siskatee maye, cheekh uthe  hai masoom bhare huye ghavo se
jhukhe huye boodhe lage dhone mayat, arthiya  jawano ki fir ekbar

ho rahe hai dhamake Ohm, Alah, Jissas ke seeno par bhee
margayee hai insaniyat , jaag uthee shitaniyat hai desh me fir ek bar

lal hoye mandir, maszid, girjaghar or gurudware bhee
chal padee band dukane molviyo or pandito kee desh me fir ek bar

aagayee hai safed phosh rahnuma hamre, marham liye kori bato ka
chand rupyo se cukane ko keemat, jawan myat, arthiyo kee fir ek bar


netra..

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«Reply #1 on: May 21, 2007, 09:56:20 AM »
wah !! hamesha ki tarah bahoot hi acha likha hai apne Netra ji!!!
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«Reply #2 on: May 21, 2007, 10:41:31 AM »
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wah !! hamesha ki tarah bahoot hi acha likha hai apne Netra ji!!!


shukriya pooja ji

netra.
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«Reply #3 on: May 21, 2007, 11:26:40 PM »
Ya.. AGain good..

Nicely narrating about current situations !
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«Reply #4 on: May 23, 2007, 09:45:04 AM »
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Ya.. AGain good..

Nicely narrating about current situations !


thanks sir jee

netra....
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«Reply #5 on: May 29, 2007, 10:25:28 AM »
Kyo ugate hai anaj ham desh me
kya bhook mitee kisi kee aaj tak  is desh me

Uagana hai to bamb ugaao barood heeugao desh me
rojgar to milega baccho ko kam se kam is desh me

kyo padhayee jati hai bhasha vigyan kee unhe is desh me
pakda to bandook hatho me pet to bharenge wo is desh me

Kyo pilate ho ghoot sachayee ka unhe tum
makkari sikhao unko, rahnuma banenge, wo is desh me

kya hotee hai kdar, sachaayee, gyan kee is desh me
banado kattar unhe wideshyo ki kathputali banjayege wo
bhee is desh me

netra......
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«Reply #6 on: June 20, 2007, 11:11:53 PM »
again Good job Netra ji!!
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«Reply #7 on: June 21, 2007, 05:01:05 AM »
Netra

Beautiful =D>

You are a revolutionary man. =D>
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«Reply #8 on: June 21, 2007, 11:24:38 AM »
thanks pooja ji and rajbir ji

netra....
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«Reply #9 on: February 15, 2010, 11:44:17 AM »
Wah Nethra ji,bahut achi soch aur khoobsurat kavita likha aapne.excellent.hats off.
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«Reply #10 on: February 15, 2010, 12:03:55 PM »
Wah wah bahut khoob Nethra ji,great creation.hats off
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