EK MANJAR EK BAJAAR

by NETRAPAL on August 03, 2009, 05:48:09 PM
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Raat ke sannate me
Timtimatee roshnee me
Kisee gaon kee subah hotee thee
Ek baajaar har ghar me sajtaa tha
Jahaa kisee cheej kee bolee lagetee thee

Apne kano hamne bhee sunee
Utsuktaa see man me jagee
Chal pade ham bhee dabe panw
Or jaa pahuche us gaon

Har ghar me hal chal see machee thee
Grahko kee bheed har ghar me lagee thee
Kolaahal saa machaa thaa
Soda har ghar me ho rahaa thaa
Koi muskaraa rahaa tha
Koi maayoos, haath mal rahaa thaa

Ek dukaan khaalee see thee
Roshnee kee jahaa kamee thee
Us ke dwaar pe ham aagaye
Sitaare kismat ke kisee ke jagaa gaye

Dil me ek tadaf see uth gayee thee
ek tasveer saamne aagayee thee
baap swagat kar rahaa thaa
maa bistar  sajaa  rahee thee
betee muskaraa rahee thee
Apnee asmat kee keemt wo
Bekhof lagaa rahee thee……

Is bajaar me sb bik rahaa thaa
Kahee khushee bik rahee thee
Kahii gam bik rahaa thaa
Waah re majbooree
Saath saal kee umar bhee
Apnee keemat lagaa rahee thee…

Apne aap se ham sharmaa gaye
Us baajaar ki hakikat jaan gaye
chukaayee thee keemat kisee
majbooree kee.
bairang hee waha se ham lot aaye….

Netrapal.....
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«Reply #1 on: August 03, 2009, 06:16:38 PM »
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Netra,

Shabash Applause Applause Applause

Only you can write such nice poetry on burning social issues !  notworthy

Bravo !
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«Reply #2 on: August 03, 2009, 06:26:51 PM »
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Waah Bahoot bahoot Khoob Netrapal ji..

Hamesha ki tarah ak alag subject pe likha hai ... Wakai Kabile taareef hai sayad mere sabd hi kam pade isske liye..

Bahoot Khoob !
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«Reply #3 on: August 03, 2009, 07:05:25 PM »
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KYA BAAT HAI NETRAPAL JI.......

WOH GHIRAK KO DEKH KAR,KHUSH NAHI HO RAHI THI,
WOH APNI FUTI KISMAT PE HAS RAHI THI.
KI KOI AAJ FIR AAYEGA...
KUCH PAISE DEKAR MERI IZAAT LUTEGAA.

INSAAN IZAAT LUTKAR,  INKO PAISA DE DETA HAI,
APNA SHARIRI MAJAA LENE KE LIYE,
INSAAN BAIGAR KISI KI IZAAT LUTKAR, UNKO MADAD KYUN NAHIN KARTA,
APNE MAN KA MAJAA LENE KE LIYE.
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«Reply #4 on: August 03, 2009, 07:27:00 PM »
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wah ji wah kya bbat hai aap ki
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«Reply #5 on: August 04, 2009, 06:02:13 AM »
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Bahut khoob Netra ji,wonderful creation,beautiful lines by Kaash ji
and Cara ji. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: August 04, 2009, 09:48:17 AM »
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thanks rajbir jee and sophi ji for reply

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«Reply #7 on: August 04, 2009, 09:53:52 AM »
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wah wah wah sahi kaha Rajbir veer ji ne... aise kavita, itani sundrta se app he likh sakte hai Netra ji .. wah kaya baat hai.. kitani sarlta se itni gahri baat kah gaye app... A Very Good creation...
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«Reply #8 on: August 04, 2009, 09:54:11 AM »
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thanks kaash ji,

aapne abhut hee sahee kahaa har jaghah majbooree hee hotee hai

wo saj rahee thee thee
bazaar bhee sajaa thaa
bheed see lagee thee
molbhaav ho rahaa thaa
uchee keemat lag rahee thee
waah re majbooree
60 saal kee jawaanee bhee
apnee keemat lagaa rahee thee...

Netra..


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«Reply #9 on: August 04, 2009, 09:56:50 AM »
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cara jee aapne ek lajwab jawab diyaa hai...

wo bik rahee thee
rotee thee dil se
hoto se muskaraa thee thee
ansuon kee keemat nahi thee yahaa
bas muskaan hee bik rahee thee..

Netra...
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«Reply #10 on: August 04, 2009, 09:57:36 AM »
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wah ji wah kya bbat hai aap ki

bahut bahut shukriyaa aapkaa

Netra...
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«Reply #11 on: August 04, 2009, 09:59:04 AM »
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wah wah wah sahi kaha Rajbir veer ji ne... aise kavita, itani sundrta se app he likh sakte hai Netra ji .. wah kaya baat hai.. kitani sarlta se itni gahri baat kah gaye app... A Very Good creation...

thanks pooja jee aapne, rajbir jee ne or bahut se logo hai jinhone har wakt meraa hoslaa badhyaa hai.........bahut bahut dhanyaad aapkaa....

Netra...
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«Reply #12 on: August 04, 2009, 02:51:26 PM »
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Likha jo tune koi kya uspar dad dega

Teri kalem ko Netrapal khud khuda aashirwaad dega....
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«Reply #13 on: August 04, 2009, 03:51:59 PM »
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bahut achche bnetra bhai kaash bhai and cara
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«Reply #14 on: August 04, 2009, 05:23:00 PM »
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Likha jo tune koi kya uspar dad dega

Teri kalem ko Netrapal khud khuda aashirwaad dega....


bahut bahut shukriya aapkaa hoslaaafjaayee ke liye

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