Rota hai har manjar

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Bhula dete hai wo ham ko , fakat itne bahane se
Ke unke aansu girty hai , hamari yaad aane se  

Ke rota hai dil unka bhi , magar kuch keh nahi pate
Kya hoga hasil , itna dilon ko aajmane se

Ke ham ko ilm na raha , ye aashiqi ka tha jonon
Bhul jate hai sabkuch ham , unki yaad aane se

Koi kehta hai majnon hamen , koi kehta hai diwana
Bhatak rahe hai ham dur apne Aashiyane se

Ke mai Mandir gaya , Masjid gaya , Mangi yahi dua
Mila de ye jahan ham ko kisi bhi ek bahane se

Ye rahen hai kuch anjani ki manjil bhi hai begani
Ke "Rahi" mit gaya hai apney hi ek fasane se

Ke kaise dikhlaon tujhe , aur kis bahane se
Jo Rota hai har ek Manjar mere aansu  bahane se
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«Reply #1 on: June 08, 2010, 09:13:18 PM »
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    Nice one Raahi ji. icon_thumleft icon_thumleft
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«Reply #2 on: June 09, 2010, 11:23:07 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: June 15, 2010, 06:11:51 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Rahi ji...!!!
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«Reply #4 on: June 16, 2010, 01:57:01 PM »
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Aik khoobsurat tehreer, isi tarah likhte rahiye aur aage baRhte rahiye.

(Waquif Ansari)

Bhula dete hai wo ham ko , fakat itne bahane se
Ke unke aansu girty hai , hamari yaad aane se   

Ke rota hai dil unka bhi , magar kuch keh nahi pate
Kya hoga hasil , itna dilon ko aajmane se

Ke ham ko ilm na raha , ye aashiqi ka tha jonon
Bhul jate hai sabkuch ham , unki yaad aane se

Koi kehta hai majnon hamen , koi kehta hai diwana
Bhatak rahe hai ham dur apne Aashiyane se

Ke mai Mandir gaya , Masjid gaya , Mangi yahi dua
Mila de ye jahan ham ko kisi bhi ek bahane se

Ye rahen hai kuch anjani ki manjil bhi hai begani
Ke "Rahi" mit gaya hai apney hi ek fasane se

Ke kaise dikhlaon tujhe , aur kis bahane se
Jo Rota hai har ek Manjar mere aansu  bahane se
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«Reply #5 on: June 16, 2010, 02:16:07 PM »
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bahut khoob marvellous,touching bahut achhe .waqif ji aap yun hi likhte rahen.kadradani hum karenge.
Bhula dete hai wo ham ko , fakat itne bahane se
Ke unke aansu girty hai , hamari yaad aane se   

Ke rota hai dil unka bhi , magar kuch keh nahi pate
Kya hoga hasil , itna dilon ko aajmane se

Ke ham ko ilm na raha , ye aashiqi ka tha jonon
Bhul jate hai sabkuch ham , unki yaad aane se

Koi kehta hai majnon hamen , koi kehta hai diwana
Bhatak rahe hai ham dur apne Aashiyane se

Ke mai Mandir gaya , Masjid gaya , Mangi yahi dua
Mila de ye jahan ham ko kisi bhi ek bahane se

Ye rahen hai kuch anjani ki manjil bhi hai begani
Ke "Rahi" mit gaya hai apney hi ek fasane se

Ke kaise dikhlaon tujhe , aur kis bahane se
Jo Rota hai har ek Manjar mere aansu  bahane se
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«Reply #6 on: July 20, 2010, 10:46:12 AM »
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Bhula dete hai wo ham ko , fakat itne bahane se
Ke unke aansu girty hai , hamari yaad aane se   

Ke rota hai dil unka bhi , magar kuch keh nahi pate
Kya hoga hasil , itna dilon ko aajmane se

Ke ham ko ilm na raha , ye aashiqi ka tha jonon
Bhul jate hai sabkuch ham , unki yaad aane se

Koi kehta hai majnon hamen , koi kehta hai diwana
Bhatak rahe hai ham dur apne Aashiyane se

Ke mai Mandir gaya , Masjid gaya , Mangi yahi dua
Mila de ye jahan ham ko kisi bhi ek bahane se

Ye rahen hai kuch anjani ki manjil bhi hai begani
Ke "Rahi" mit gaya hai apney hi ek fasane se

Ke kaise dikhlaon tujhe , aur kis bahane se
Jo Rota hai har ek Manjar mere aansu  bahane se


koi isko aagey badhane ki koishish karega ?

plz try it mujhe ye thodi kam lag rahi hai
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