***Na main pass usko bula saka****

by shad on March 07, 2010, 03:01:09 PM
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Na Main Pass Usko Bula Saka
Na Main Dil ki Baat Suna Saka
Wo Hansi Hansi Main Hi Chal Diya
K Main Haath Tak Na Hala Saka
Mujhe kiya khabar k wo kiya howa
Mujhe kitna ghehra khuumar tha
Main khara tha us k hissar main
Mery ird ghird ghoobar tha
Yunhi sochta raha Dair talak
Magher usko kuch na bata saka
Na main pass usko bula saka
Na main Dil ki baat suna saka
Na hai Dushmahi kisi Din say ab
Na hai Doosti kisi Raat say
Hai Bacha hi kiya jo woh ley gaya
Mujhe cheen kar meri zaat say
ye Mukaam tha hi Ajeeb sa
k main khud ko bhi na Bacha saka
Na main paas usko bula saka
Na main Dil ki baat suna saka
Ye bhi theek hai k wo chal diaya
Mujhe band rasty pe choor kr
Ye bhi theek hai k na aay ga
khabi Butt Anna ka wo torr kr
wo Judda bhi aisy howa
k main koi Rassam bhi na Nibha saka
Na Main Pass Usko Bula Saka
Na Main Dil ki Baat Suna Saka
Wo Hansi Hansi Main Hi Chal Diya
K Main Haath Tak Na Hala Saka



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«Reply #1 on: March 07, 2010, 04:31:37 PM »
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bahut hi khoob shad ji...

Vo juda bhi aese hua
ki main koi rasam bhi na nibha saka...

ye lines dil ko chhu gyi...
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«Reply #2 on: March 07, 2010, 06:45:02 PM »
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VERY NICELY EXPRESSED  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: March 07, 2010, 07:32:42 PM »
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Shad ji kya ye aapki shayari ya kisi aur ki.
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«Reply #4 on: March 07, 2010, 09:49:00 PM »
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Bahut bahut sukriya
@Turbo  ye mere pasand hai kisne likhe hai mujhe nahi malum
Han Maine pehle 3 shayere submit ke hai wo Mere likhe huye hai.
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«Reply #5 on: March 07, 2010, 10:33:57 PM »
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Nice sharing Shad ji. Ek guzarish hai hai ke  kisi aur ki poetry ko poetry launge section mein post karein. Poet ka naam maloom na ho to Not Mine ya NM zaroor likhein. Now this ghazal is moved to above section. Thanks.
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