----- /// Usko main manaun kaise /// -----

by ~Hriday~ on October 01, 2010, 05:33:50 AM
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rutha hai mera sanam, usko main manaun kaise,
muskaan uske chehre pe wapas main laun kaise,

har lamha uski yaad me ab rota hai dil mera,
apne is dard-e-dil ko ab main samjhaun kaise,

aankhen uski band hain, dekhna kuch chaahti nahi,
aankhon se behta ye pani usko main dikhaun kaise,

mujhse bahut dur hai wo, sunna kuch chahti nahi,
tute dil ka haal apne usko ab main sunaun kaise,

uspe hi har geet mere, uspe hi har gazal meri,
uske un geeton ko tanha ab main gungunaun kaise,

kehte hain sab dost mere, aayegi na laut ke wo,
kehta hoon unse bas itna ki usko bhool jaun kaise,

rootha hai wo pyaar mera, usko main manaun kaise,
chahta hoon usko kitna ab usko main bataun kaise...


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«Reply #1 on: October 01, 2010, 06:28:14 AM »
hmmmmmm........bht hi pyar se likhi hui dil ki baat hai kapil ji ye aapki....
padhkar hi dil khush khush ho gaya.....aur aise sadyy nahin hone ka..
purani baat bhul k nai zindagi shuru karni chahiye..samjhe Hriday ji...

Muskura do tum ek bar bas dil ko chain aajaye
Tere hothon ki muskaan mera bhi chehra khila jaye

Yaadon me dubi har sham teri har subah bhi khamosh hai
Ek bar pukaar lo dil se to sab bhul paas tere aa jaye

Aankhon me chehra tera bas ik teri hi tasveer hai
Ashk isily bahate nahin k taveer na kahin ye mita jaye

Hain bht dur tujhse jante hain hum ye baat
Isily chup rehte hain k tujhko aur na tadpa jaye

Maan lo tum baat unki jo tere dost aur humdard hain
Ab koi nahin hain hum tere k aake tujhe samjha jaye

Teri har gazal har geet me chhupe jazbaat hai
Tu na bole kuch par baat teri ye sab kehta jaye

Ruthe hain jo ruthe rahenge meri hi khata hai wo
Bas dua hai chupchap mera dil ye sab sehta jaye...!!!


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«Reply #2 on: October 01, 2010, 06:30:34 AM »
ahaa kya bat he ...bas halki si peechhe words par drop shadow effect ka use kijiye bahut badhiya lagega ...

bahut khoob jii likhte rahiye~
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«Reply #3 on: October 01, 2010, 06:55:50 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya Abhi ji... and thanks a lot for the suggesstion. Maine paint brush me banaya hai.. shayad usme shadow ka option nahi hota.. I am not sure...!!!

ahaa kya bat he ...bas halki si peechhe words par drop shadow effect ka use kijiye bahut badhiya lagega ...

bahut khoob jii likhte rahiye~
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«Reply #4 on: October 01, 2010, 06:58:00 AM »
hmmmm baat to sahi keh rahe hain aap par aisa lag raha hai yahaan chor kotwaal ko daant raha hai... waise aapne bahut khoobsurti se apne jasbaaton ko shabdon me sajake kavita ka roop diya hai... bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne...


samjhaate ho mujhko par kya tum khud samajh paate ho,
kyun aaj bhi tum un khayaalon me kho ke reh jaate ho,

aasaan nahi hota kisi ko chaah ke bhula dena yahaan,
yahi wajah hai ki tum bhi har pal aansoo bahaate ho,

tadapte ho akele tum, dard ko seene me dabaake apne,
chaahte ho mujhe aur mujhse hi har baat chhupate ho,

dekh sakta hoon main tumhaare aansoo tumse dur rehkar,
par har baar tum mujhse bahaane banaake muskuraate ho,

tumhaari har sisak, har ghaaw ka ehsaas hai mujhe,
par tum akele me unhi zakhmon pe namak lagaate ho,

kya milega tumhe khud ko itna tadpaake batao zaraa,
kyun apni chaar din ki zindagi ko yun gawaate ho,

mumkin nahi har khushi mile humein ya haasil apna ho,
kyun nahi sach ko sweekaar kar tum sambhal jaate ho,

samjhaate ho mujhko par kyun nahi khud samajh paate ho,
yunhi har baar un yaadon me kho ke jeete ji mar jaate ho...
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«Reply #5 on: October 01, 2010, 07:02:05 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya Abhi ji... and thanks a lot for the suggesstion. Maine paint brush me banaya hai.. shayad usme shadow ka option nahi hota.. I am not sure...!!!

kya bat he ji fir to or bhi jyada daad hazir heee~ lage rahiyee
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«Reply #6 on: October 01, 2010, 07:09:44 AM »
shukriya Sir ji...!!!

kya bat he ji fir to or bhi jyada daad hazir heee~ lage rahiyee
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«Reply #7 on: October 01, 2010, 08:22:51 AM »
Waah bahut khoob kapil ji kasak ji apka bhi jawab nhi......
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«Reply #8 on: October 01, 2010, 09:53:47 AM »
Bahot khoob Kapil ji, bahot achhi poem likhi hai. Padhkar achha laga.
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«Reply #9 on: October 01, 2010, 10:55:36 AM »
KAPIL JO RUTHA HAI USSE MANAAO...HUM TOU RUTHE HI NAHI......
NICE reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeee

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«Reply #10 on: October 01, 2010, 11:06:09 AM »
kya baat hai hriday ji..
maza aa gaya padh kar..
sabhi lines aapke dil ka haal baya kar rahi hai..
bahut khoob...
likhte rahiye...
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«Reply #11 on: October 01, 2010, 02:40:16 PM »
bahut bahut shukriya Geet ji...!!!

Waah bahut khoob kapil ji kasak ji apka bhi jawab nhi......
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«Reply #12 on: October 01, 2010, 02:40:46 PM »
bahut bahut shukriya Riyaz ji...!!!

Bahot khoob Kapil ji, bahot achhi poem likhi hai. Padhkar achha laga.
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«Reply #13 on: October 01, 2010, 02:41:30 PM »
koshish kar raha hoon dear.. par wo maane tab na ... thanks for the compliments...!!!

KAPIL JO RUTHA HAI USSE MANAAO...HUM TOU RUTHE HI NAHI......
NICE reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeee

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«Reply #14 on: October 01, 2010, 02:42:08 PM »
bahut bahut shukriya Manzil ji...!!!

kya baat hai hriday ji..
maza aa gaya padh kar..
sabhi lines aapke dil ka haal baya kar rahi hai..
bahut khoob...
likhte rahiye...
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