Bas yaad kuchh zaraa sa hai !

by shara63 on January 12, 2013, 06:31:47 AM
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   Khaali haath shaam hai aur josh kuchh maraa sa hai
   na chhed saaz pyaar ke, ye dil bharaa bharaa sa hai

   ChaahatoN ki sairgaah, vo muhabbatoN ke sabz-baagh
   koi na dikhlaae mujhe, dil abhi daraa daraa sa hai

   Sab le gaya vo saath may, baaqi rahee to ek khalish
   ab dard na de koi naya, ye zakhm abhi haraa sa hai

   Maazi ke saath dafn hueeN ulfat kee sab yaadeN haseeN
   bhulaa diya zehan ne sab , kuchh yaad bas zaraa sa hai

   gher letee hai vaqtan-fauqatan vo yaad-e-zulm-o-sitam
   dua ho 'ainy' haq me tere, abhi abr-e-nahusat ghiraa sa hai !!........'ainy'
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«Reply #1 on: January 12, 2013, 06:53:38 AM »
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   Khaali haath shaam hai aur josh kuchh maraa sa hai
   na chhed saaz pyaar ke, ye dil bharaa bharaa sa hai
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   ChaahatoN ki sairgaah, vo muhabbatoN ke sabz-baagh
   koi na dikhlaae mujhe, dil abhi daraa daraa sa hai
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   Sab le gaya vo saath may, baaqi rahee to ek khalish
   ab dard na de koi naya, ye zakhm abhi haraa sa hai
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   Maazi ke saath dafn hueeN ulfat kee sab yaadeN haseeN
   bhulaa diya zehan ne sab , kuchh yaad bas zaraa sa hai
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   gher letee hai vaqtan-fauqatan vo yaad-e-zulm-o-sitam
   dua ho 'ainy' haq me tere, abhi abr-e-nahusat ghiraa sa hai !!........'ainy'

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zabardast lajawaab,shara ji ,,
kamaal ka dard bayaan kiya hai ,,dabe alfaazon mein,,,
ek RAU to banta hai.
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«Reply #2 on: January 12, 2013, 07:00:17 AM »
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behtreen, lajawaab....wah wah
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«Reply #3 on: January 12, 2013, 07:26:06 AM »
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   Khaali haath shaam hai aur josh kuchh maraa sa hai
   na chhed saaz pyaar ke, ye dil bharaa bharaa sa hai

   ChaahatoN ki sairgaah, vo muhabbatoN ke sabz-baagh
   koi na dikhlaae mujhe, dil abhi daraa daraa sa hai

   Sab le gaya vo saath may, baaqi rahee to ek khalish
   ab dard na de koi naya, ye zakhm abhi haraa sa hai

   Maazi ke saath dafn hueeN ulfat kee sab yaadeN haseeN
   bhulaa diya zehan ne sab , kuchh yaad bas zaraa sa hai

   gher letee hai vaqtan-fauqatan vo yaad-e-zulm-o-sitam
   dua ho 'ainy' haq me tere, abhi abr-e-nahusat ghiraa sa hai !!........'ainy'




Waah Waah Waah...

Bahut Gehrai Hai Aapke Iss Ghazal Mein...

Bahut Bahut Khoooooooob!!!!!!

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«Reply #4 on: January 12, 2013, 07:31:25 AM »
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   Khaali haath shaam hai aur josh kuchh maraa sa hai
   na chhed saaz pyaar ke, ye dil bharaa bharaa sa hai

   ChaahatoN ki sairgaah, vo muhabbatoN ke sabz-baagh
   koi na dikhlaae mujhe, dil abhi daraa daraa sa hai

   Sab le gaya vo saath may, baaqi rahee to ek khalish
   ab dard na de koi naya, ye zakhm abhi haraa sa hai

   Maazi ke saath dafn hueeN ulfat kee sab yaadeN haseeN
   bhulaa diya zehan ne sab , kuchh yaad bas zaraa sa hai


   gher letee hai vaqtan-fauqatan vo yaad-e-zulm-o-sitam
   dua ho 'ainy' haq me tere, abhi abr-e-nahusat ghiraa sa hai !!........'ainy'


v.v.nice creation shara jee Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: January 12, 2013, 11:42:24 AM »
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Sharaa Sahibaa Aadaab!



Kia kahne jee waaH behad khoob aur umdaa kalaam kahi hai aapne...
Kafi achchi rawaani rahi kalaam ki aur kafi dilfareb ahsaas O
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Sabhi ashaar khoob rahe jee... Is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN
dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile


Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye....
Bazm ko roshan karte rahiye....
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: January 12, 2013, 03:05:41 PM »
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bahut sundar, bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Ainy ji....!!!
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«Reply #7 on: January 13, 2013, 03:06:08 AM »
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bahut khoob, dhero dad
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«Reply #8 on: January 14, 2013, 08:01:31 AM »
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wah wah
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«Reply #9 on: January 15, 2013, 05:37:09 AM »
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Aadaab sahal sb, kalaam ko pasand karne aur tareef-o- Rau dekar meri izzat afzai ke liye maiN tahe dil se aapki shukraguzaar hoon! bus hauzla afzaai ka ye silsila qaayam rakhiyega .. bahut shukria aapka!!
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«Reply #10 on: January 15, 2013, 05:41:48 AM »
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Ritesh ji, aapka bahut bahut shukria!!
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«Reply #11 on: January 15, 2013, 06:02:00 AM »
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Khwaish sb...itne khoobsoort alfaaz me kalaam ki taareef karne ke liye aapko mera dili shukria!
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«Reply #12 on: January 15, 2013, 06:04:53 AM »
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Aadaab Suman ji, kalaam ko pasand karne ke liye maaien tah-e-dil aapki shukraguzaar hooN!
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«Reply #13 on: January 15, 2013, 06:08:08 AM »
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Aadaab Parwaaz sb, daad-o-mubaarakbaad ke saath itne khoobsurat andaz me kalaam ki tareef karneke ke liye aapko mera bahut bahut shukria!!
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«Reply #14 on: January 15, 2013, 06:17:53 AM »
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Hriday ji, aapne taaliyon ke saath saath jo khoobsoorat alfaaz me mere kalaam ko  izzat bakhshi hai uske liye aapko tahe-dil se shukria adaa karti hooN!
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