Hamein bhi be-wafaaon ki, agar pehchaan ho jati.- Beete palon ke saaye - 1971

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«Reply #15 on: August 03, 2013, 02:17:13 AM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya
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«Reply #16 on: August 03, 2013, 02:18:14 AM »
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waah waah aur waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah, excellent, behtareen, bahut hi umda, maza aa gaya padh ke. HazaaroN daad aur ek Rau qubool kijiye meri taraf.
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«Reply #17 on: August 03, 2013, 02:53:43 AM »
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Saraswat ji, Khubsurat ghazal hai aur bahut khubsurat andaz mein aap ne ise pesh kiya hai....Ghazal purani ho ya nayi shaayer ke dil ki akkas hoti hai jis mein khubsurat ehsaasat poshida hote hain aur yeh ghazal bhi un ehsasat ki bharpoor tarjumani karti hai. Ummeed  hai ki maazi ki doosri kaavishon se bhi aap Bazm ko nawazte aur is ke meyaar mein izafa karte raheinge . Mubarakbad qubool karein.
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«Reply #18 on: August 03, 2013, 03:14:35 AM »
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waah!bahut hi umda kalaam! daad!
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«Reply #19 on: August 03, 2013, 04:53:36 AM »
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Dosto, ye ghazal meri suruaat ki  ghazalon mein se ek hai. Ummeed karta hoon ki ek ‘naujawan’ ke likhe  ye ashaar apko pasand aayenge. sath hi hindi ke sath urdu mein bhi translate karane ki koshish ki hai,  shukriya.


Hamein   bhi  be-wafaaon  ki,agar  pehchaan  ho  jati.
Ye  manzil  zindagi  ki,  kuchh  na  kuchh  aasan ho jati.
zindagi kabhi bhi asaan nahin hai. ise khud asaan bana na padta hai.the best manager is one who can use his blunt tools in best way icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Na   dil  mein gham  na  ruswai, na aahein uljhalen hotin,
Wafa    ke    naam   se    hi,   zindagi   anjaan ho jati.
zindagi khud  hi bewafa hai ji...! icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Hamare   man   ka  kauna  bhi,  koi soona  nahi  dikhta,        
Hamare   dil   ki  duniya  bhi,  na  yoon  beeran ho jati.
ye ishq nahin asaan ek aag ka dariya hai. isme koodo bhi aur jalo bhi na aisa nahin ho sakta icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Maza kya saath  jalne mein,  koi parwane se    poochhe,
Wafa  ki  chaah  mein,  shaman  na   khud qurwan ho jati.
ye to ji qudrat ka nezaam hai ki parwana hi ko jalna hai ab kya karein icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
The aaye rote duniya mein,kasam se hanste  jate  hum,
wafa   mein   maut  bhi  apni ,  ager  mehman  ho  jati.
muqadder ka sinkanser hi hoga jo hanste hue jaaye. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Kare   to  kya   kare  ye  ‘Ram’,koi   dil  ki dhdkan  ka,
Jawan   dil  se  na   aksar  bhool,  kya  nadaan  ho  jati.
 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard =))ab aaye na janaab asliyat pe
हमें  भी  बे वफाओं  की , अगर  पेहचान  हो  जाती,
ये मंज़िल ज़िंदगी की, कुछ न कुछ आसान हो जाती ।

न दिल में ग़म न रुसवाई, न आहें उलझलें होतीं,
वफा के नाम से ही,  ज़िंदगी अंजान  हो  जाती।

हमारे मन का कोना भी, कोई सूना नहीं दिखता,
हमारे दिल की दुनिया भी, न यूं बीरान हो जाती।

मज़ा क्या साथ जलने में , कोई परवाने से पूछे,
वफा की चाह में, श़मा न खुद क़ुर्वान हो जाती।

थे आये रोते दुनिया में, कसम से हंस के जाते हम,
वफा में मौत भी अपनी, अगर मेहमान हो जाती।

करे तो क्या करे ये ‘राम', कोई दिल की धड़कन का,
जवां दिल से न अक्सर भूल, क्या नादान हो जाती।

حمے  بہی   بے ب فا وں  کی,  اگر   پہچان  ہو  جاتی
 یہ منزل زندگی کی, کچھ   ن   کچھ   آسان    ہو   جاتی
 
نہ دل  میں غم  ن  رسوائی ,  ن  آہین   الجھلیں   ہوتین
وفا   کے  نام   سے   ہی ,  زندگی   انجان  ہو   جاتی
 
ہمارے  من  کا  کونہ  بھی , کوئی  سونا   نہیں  دکھتا
ہمارے  دل  کی  دنیا بھی , نہ  یوں   بیران   ہو  جاتی
 
مزا  کیا  ساتھ  جلنے  میں , کوئی  پروانے سے پو چھے
وفا   کی  چاہ  میں , شمع  نہ   خود   قربان  ہو  جاتی
 
تھے  اے روتے  دنیا میں,  کسم  سے  ہنستے  جاتے   ہم
وفا   میں   موت   بھی  اپنی , اگر  مہمان   ہو   جاتی

کرے  تو کیا کرے  ے 'رام'  , کوئی دل  کی  دھڑکن  کا
جوان  دل  سے  ن  اکثر  بھول , کیا  ناداں  ہو  جاتی


ram sahab aap ki bhi 1971 ke model ki ye ghazal ab tak khoobsoorat bani hui hai ek rau ke saath main iska istaqbaal karti hoon.........! icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #20 on: August 03, 2013, 09:17:55 AM »
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Lajawab behad khoobsurat shandar jandar bas waaah hi waah...
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«Reply #21 on: August 03, 2013, 11:54:09 AM »
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«Reply #22 on: August 03, 2013, 12:22:26 PM »
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बहुत ही खुबसुरत पंक्तिया लिखी हैं सर आपने Applause
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«Reply #23 on: August 03, 2013, 03:47:09 PM »
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waah waah Ram sahab... bahut umdaa peshkash rahi aapki,, dhero daad.. Usual Smile

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«Reply #24 on: August 03, 2013, 07:44:18 PM »
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Saraswat ji, Khubsurat ghazal hai aur bahut khubsurat andaz mein aap ne ise pesh kiya hai....Ghazal purani ho ya nayi shaayer ke dil ki akkas hoti hai jis mein khubsurat ehsaasat poshida hote hain aur yeh ghazal bhi un ehsasat ki bharpoor tarjumani karti hai. Ummeed  hai ki maazi ki doosri kaavishon se bhi aap Bazm ko nawazte aur is ke meyaar mein izafa karte raheinge . Mubarakbad qubool karein.
Bahut bahut shukriya Siddiqui saheb. Tahe dil se mashkoor hoon.
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«Reply #25 on: August 03, 2013, 07:50:27 PM »
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waah!bahut hi umda kalaam! daad!
Bahut bahut shukriya Kaashji
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«Reply #26 on: August 03, 2013, 07:57:50 PM »
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ram sahab aap ki bhi 1971 ke model ki ye ghazal ab tak khoobsoorat bani hui hai ek rau ke saath main iska istaqbaal karti hoon.........! icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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waaaaaaaaaaah waah aur sirf waaaaaaaaah ramji. sabhi ashaar dil ko chooo gaye. hazaron hazaron daaaaaaaaaaaaaad...
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Lajawab behad khoobsurat shandar jandar bas waaah hi waah...
Iqtedarji apka bahut bahut shukriya
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«Reply #29 on: August 03, 2013, 08:02:47 PM »
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soooo lovely creation
Bahut bahut shukriya
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