Kar jori kein jauroo karoon binati- Beete palon ke saaye-2009

by Ram Saraswat on July 23, 2013, 02:40:46 AM
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Dosto kuchh saathiyon ka haal behaal dekh ker sochaa ki ham apna dukhdaa bhi sunaadein shaayad kuchh kaam aajaye dukhi logon ke.  

Kar*  jori  kein  jauroo karoon  vinati,  *Hands
               Mati ghairi* ki baat pe dhyaan  dharau.    *Outsider
Na  karau  manmaani  darau rab te*,                       * From God
               Hoon  niriih* sau jeev** na tang karau.    *Helpless **living thing
Sukh chain se jeeo sadaa ghar mein,
               Hai duaa ji  gariib  ki, tum  sudharau.
Rahein baal gupaal dare sahme*,                           *terrified  
              Jab   sherni  si   hoonkaar      bharau.
Ghar daulat hai tumri gati* soon**,                       *Speed , **by
              Khule saand* ki bhaanti jabahin bicharau**. *Bull  **out of control  
Tum kanak* kasauti** bhale ho bani,                       *Gold ,  ** Touch stone    
              Mohi karo mati ghisi ghisi* kanak kharau*.  *grinding  **Pure    
Ko jaane kahaan tak sang rahai,
              Hansi boli kein rahibe* ki  jugati** karau  *to Live  **efforts
Kachhu* sang* chalego na aakhir mein,                     *nothing  **along
             Sabu*  rahijai**  “Ram”  dharyo  ko dharyo.  *every thing *left out

कर  जौरि  कें  जौरू  करूं बिनती ,
                 मति   गैरि की बात  पै  ध्यान    धरौ,
न  करौ  मन  मानी  डरौ रब  ते,
                 हूँ  निरीह  सौ  जीव,   न  तॅग  करौ.
सुख  चैन  से  जीओ  सदा  घर में,
                है  दुआ   जि  गरीब   की तुम   सुधरौ.
रहें    बाल    गुपाल   डरे   सहमे,
                जब    शेरनी   सी     हुंकार     भरौ.
घर   डौलत   है  तुम्हरी गति  सूँ,
                खुले  साँड  की  भांति   जबहिं   बिचरौ.
तुम  कनक कसौटी  भले हो बनी,
                मोहि करौ  मति घिस घिस  कनक खरौ.
को  जाने  कहाँ तक  संग  रहै ,
                   हंसि बोलि कें रहिबे की   जुगति   करौ.      
कच्छू  संग  चलेगो न आखिर में,  
                सबु  रहिजैइ “राम” धरयौ कौ   धरयौ.
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«Reply #1 on: July 23, 2013, 02:47:03 AM »
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Dosto kuchh saathiyon ka haal behaal dekh ker sochaa ki ham apna dukhdaa bhi sunaadein shaayad kuchh kaam aajaye dukhi logon ke.   

Kar*  jori  kein  jauroo karoon  vinati,  *Hands
               Mati ghairi* ki baat pe dhyaan  dharau.    *Outsider
Na  karau  manmaani  darau rab te*,                       * From God
               Hoon  niriih* sau jeev** na tang karau.    *Helpless **living thing
Sukh chain se jeeo sadaa ghar mein,
               Hai duaa ji  gariib  ki, tum  sudharau.
Rahein baal gupaal dare sahme*,                           *terrified 
              Jab   sherni  si   hoonkaar      bharau.
Ghar daulat hai tumri gati* soon**,                       *Speed , **by
              Khule saand* ki bhaanti jabahin bicharau**. *Bull  **out of control 
Tum kanak* kasauti** bhale ho bani,                       *Gold ,  ** Touch stone   
              Mohi karo mati ghisi ghisi* kanak kharau*.  *grinding  **Pure   
Ko jaane kahaan tak sang rahai,
              Hansi boli kein rahibe* ki  jugati** karau  *to Live  **efforts
Kachhu* sang* chalego na aakhir mein,                     *nothing  **along
             Sabu*  rahijai**  “Ram”  dharyo  ko dharyo.  *every thing *left out

कर  जौरि  कें  जौरू  करूं बिनती ,
                 मति   गैरि की बात  पै  ध्यान    धरौ,
न  करौ  मन  मानी  डरौ रब  ते,
                 हूँ  निरीह  सौ  जीव,   न  तॅग  करौ.
सुख  चैन  से  जीओ  सदा  घर में,
                है  दुआ   जि  गरीब   की तुम   सुधरौ.
रहें    बाल    गुपाल   डरे   सहमे,
                जब    शेरनी   सी     हुंकार     भरौ.
घर   डौलत   है  तुम्हरी गति  सूँ,
                खुले  साँड  की  भांति   जबहिं   बिचरौ.
तुम  कनक कसौटी  भले हो बनी,
                मोहि करौ  मति घिस घिस  कनक खरौ.
को  जाने  कहाँ तक  संग  रहै ,
                   हंसि बोलि कें रहिबे की   जुगति   करौ.     
कच्छू  संग  चलेगो न आखिर में,   
                सबु  रहिजैइ “राम” धरयौ कौ   धरयौ.

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  भाई वाह वाह.बहुत खूब
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waah waah bahut sunder
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waah waah bahut sunder
Bahut bahut Shukriya Dr. Saini
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Theth hindi me likhkar bhi aap hansaane me kaamyaab rahe Sir. Aur sabse acchi baat..kahee se bhi kisi seema ka ullanghan hota naheen dikhayi diya..
Bahut badhiya

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Theth hindi me likhkar bhi aap hansaane me kaamyaab rahe Sir. Aur sabse acchi baat..kahee se bhi kisi seema ka ullanghan hota naheen dikhayi diya..
Bahut badhiya


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very nice
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very nice
Bahut bahut shukriya Prasadji
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