ab laut kar nahi aayenge

by amrita on June 10, 2005, 07:21:18 PM
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woh ruth kar gaye the kuch iss tarah
k ab laut kar nahi aayenge,
ab toh aisa lagta hai humari mauth par hi aayenge
aye huzoor tum kya jano,
tumhari rah mein hum roz
ek benaam mauth mar jaayenge
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«Reply #1 on: June 16, 2005, 07:53:53 PM »
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mein tu teri judaai mein sujghta rha hoon raat din
tere pyar mein trpta raha hoon mein tu raat din
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«Reply #2 on: June 17, 2005, 05:12:48 PM »
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mein tu teri judaai mein sujghta rha hoon raat din
tere pyar mein trpta raha hoon mein tu raat din


huzoor aap apni har shayeri mein tadap kyon rahe hain..??

raat din humein yaad mat kiya karo
humare bina jeene ki aadat dalna shuru karo
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«Reply #3 on: June 17, 2005, 06:25:30 PM »
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gr888 naveed  n amrita ji......good work........ keep it up!!!
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pandit
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«Reply #4 on: June 17, 2005, 06:30:00 PM »
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are hina chandani ji...........
aap to new lagti hai.....
kuch joordaar sunayea na.....................
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«Reply #5 on: June 17, 2005, 06:34:19 PM »
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are hina chandani ji...........
aap to new lagti hai.....
kuch joordaar sunayea na.....................
YEH MASHWARA HAI MERE JAAN GAWARA KIJYE
CHAND SE CHEHRE KA SADKA UTARA KIJYE
HUM TO LIYE PHIRTE HAIN HATHELI PE JAAN
BUS KISI ROZ HALKA SA ISHARA KIJYE.
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«Reply #6 on: June 17, 2005, 06:36:45 PM »
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wah jaisa naam waisa hi kaam bhi...............
maza hi aagaya..........
dil ki waadi me jo aapne dil se pukara,
sab chodh kar aayenge ki
hume har haal me hai saath nibhana
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«Reply #7 on: June 17, 2005, 06:56:38 PM »
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Tumhari yaad se daman chura nahi sakti
mai hud ko bhool sakti hoon tumhai bhula nahi sakti
kisi aur chehre ko dekhoon
to kyun meri ankon mai koi aur tasveer sama nahi sakti?
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«Reply #8 on: June 17, 2005, 07:54:54 PM »
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Tumhari yaad se daman chura nahi sakti
mai hud ko bhool sakti hoon tumhai bhula nahi sakti
kisi aur chehre ko dekhoon
to kyun meri ankon mai koi aur tasveer sama nahi sakti?


that was pretty good hina and pandit..!!
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«Reply #9 on: June 17, 2005, 08:25:36 PM »
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Tumhari yaad se daman chura nahi sakti
mai hud ko bhool sakti hoon tumhai bhula nahi sakti
kisi aur chehre ko dekhoon
to kyun meri ankon mai koi aur tasveer sama nahi sakti?


that was pretty good hina and pandit..!!
Oye Jaan Ji Mein Kia BUra hoon?



Aaj sab k smaney meri jaghnsai krwadi aap ney
mera chain meri neend churali hai aap ney
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«Reply #10 on: June 17, 2005, 08:29:01 PM »
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Tumhari yaad se daman chura nahi sakti
mai hud ko bhool sakti hoon tumhai bhula nahi sakti
kisi aur chehre ko dekhoon
to kyun meri ankon mai koi aur tasveer sama nahi sakti?


that was pretty good hina and pandit..!!
Oye Jaan Ji Mein Kia BUra hoon?



Aaj sab k smaney meri jaghnsai krwadi aap ney
mera chain meri neend churali hai aap ney


ur the best..!!happy??
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«Reply #11 on: June 17, 2005, 08:32:48 PM »
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Tumhari yaad se daman chura nahi sakti
mai hud ko bhool sakti hoon tumhai bhula nahi sakti
kisi aur chehre ko dekhoon
to kyun meri ankon mai koi aur tasveer sama nahi sakti?


that was pretty good hina and pandit..!!
Oye Jaan Ji Mein Kia BUra hoon?



Aaj sab k smaney meri jaghnsai krwadi aap ney
mera chain meri neend churali hai aap ney


ur the best..!!happy??
haan............................Jaan Ji
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«Reply #12 on: June 18, 2005, 05:24:07 AM »
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Tumhari yaad se daman chura nahi sakti
mai hud ko bhool sakti hoon tumhai bhula nahi sakti
kisi aur chehre ko dekhoon
to kyun meri ankon mai koi aur tasveer sama nahi sakti?


VERY NICE KEEP IT UP
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«Reply #13 on: June 18, 2005, 10:21:29 PM »
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Hazaro khushiya kam hoti hai ek gham bhulaneke liye,
Ek gham kaafi hota hai zindagi bhar rulane ke liye.
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«Reply #14 on: August 01, 2005, 07:16:39 PM »
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jo hawa ek jhonke ek saath gir jaaye ,
woh tash ke paton ka mahal bana diya teri mohobat ne..
udaas the toh pehle bhi aaj rula diya teri mohobat ne..
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