jis par beeti tis hi jaane

by AbhiTamrakar on August 05, 2010, 12:09:57 PM
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jis par beeti tis hi jane
kaise he lagte he pal begane
duniya adhoori chand adhoora
ankhon ka har khwab adhoora
samne rakha hota he pyala
fir bhi chhalakte nahi paimane

jis par beeti tis hi jane
kaise lage ye din tadpane
kaise raate bojh si ban gayi
simate rahe apne hi ansoo lekar
ankhon par palko ki chadar taane

jis par beeti tis hi jane
kyu sare apne lagte bemane
kyu chain se ek pal nahi sote
kya khote jo tujhko pa jate
apne toote sapne hathon par lekar
likhte rahe duniya ke fasane

jis par beeti tis hi jane
lagte he mujhko sab anjane
ye dil to bas tujhko pehchane
kaise tumhe batau bita rahe he
har saans zindagi ko bas chala rahe he
haste he lekin dil se pani kyu behta he
ye dard he kaisa khuda hi jaane
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«Reply #1 on: August 05, 2010, 12:28:57 PM »
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aahhaaaa.......bht pyari post abhi ji....
mast mast


sach hai abhi ji jis par beeti tis hi jaane,
sab na iss dard ko pehchane...
chhalke aansu fir bhi suhiaankhen
kaisa hai ye dard kaise kahen deewane

sach hai....jis ar beeti tis hi jane...

dil se lahu tapakta jaye
lab pe rakhen muskaan sajaye
gairon k sang hasen batiyaen
fir bhi tere hi kehlayen

sach hai...........

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«Reply #2 on: August 05, 2010, 01:10:19 PM »
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wah wah Abhi kya baat hai yaara... kya khoob kaha hai tumne to... maza aagaya...
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«Reply #3 on: August 05, 2010, 01:25:08 PM »
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anu ji reply dena to apse seekhna chahiye ...wah

shukriya rancho ...
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«Reply #4 on: August 05, 2010, 02:32:17 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut khoob Abhi ji...!!!
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«Reply #5 on: August 05, 2010, 02:42:10 PM »
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shukriya ji~
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«Reply #6 on: August 05, 2010, 02:45:32 PM »
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Achhi kavita hai aapki Abhi-ji..... Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley

Jis tan lagee agan,dard wahee tan jaaney…
Kaun he apna kaun paraya ye dil pehchane

Aankho sey meri behte hain ab ashru aviral
In aankho me ab kaise sajey sapan-suhaney....!!!!!!!
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«Reply #7 on: August 05, 2010, 02:51:53 PM »
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koyal ji..ye kavitaye nahi mere dil ki bat he....sirf itna kahuga~

aviral ashruo ko behlana saral hota he,
machalte dil ko samjhana bhi saral hota he,
samjhau kaise roothe mehboob ko 'Abhi'
jo chala gaya use wapas bulana kahan saral hota he~
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«Reply #8 on: August 05, 2010, 03:25:40 PM »
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Jis paav fati na bivayi wo kya jaane peer parayee.....
Sach he kavita dil ka dard sunnane ka maadhyam hai....

Jo ho pyaar sachcha,aur dono oor lagi ho agan
Tou roothe mehboob ko manana hota nahi mushkil

Bas bhulaana hoga tumhe apne ahamm ko
Maang kay maafee jhukaana hoga sar ko


koyal ji..ye kavitaye nahi mere dil ki bat he....sirf itna kahuga~

aviral ashruo ko behlana saral hota he,
machalte dil ko samjhana bhi saral hota he,
samjhau kaise roothe mehboob ko 'Abhi'
jo chala gaya use wapas bulana kahan saral hota he~


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«Reply #9 on: August 05, 2010, 03:43:50 PM »
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apna koi mehboob hi nahi..kise manau...hehehe

manzil samne he fir bhi paa nahi sakta
yu to bheed badi he mehfil me 'Abhi'
fir bhi "Tanha" hun kyun ye bata nhai sakta~
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«Reply #10 on: August 05, 2010, 03:48:11 PM »
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bahot hi achha likha he sabhi ne.... Applause  Applause  Applause  Applause
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«Reply #11 on: August 05, 2010, 05:16:42 PM »
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He he he he he.....Abhijee  Giggle
aap tou serious ho gaye..... Winking Winking Winking
humne kab puchha aapki mehbooba k baare main.... love9 love4 tearyeyed
Kaun si kasak he aapke dil me kab puchha humne.... Is it SO! Is it SO! Is it SO!
Ye real nahi reel ki duniya hai....

Kyu nahi kehte Angoor khatte hain.... tongue3 NaNaNa
just kidding...don't take it serious....

apna koi mehboob hi nahi..kise manau...hehehe

manzil samne he fir bhi paa nahi sakta
yu to bheed badi he mehfil me 'Abhi'
fir bhi "Tanha" hun kyun ye bata nhai sakta~

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«Reply #12 on: August 05, 2010, 05:29:24 PM »
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hihihihi aji me or serious ...mujhe yuhi devil nahi kaha jata ji..

pakka shaitan hu..

haan kalam ka pakka bhi hu..

waise angoor chakhe hi nahi, kisi ne peshkash ki thi chakhne ki chahkar bhi accept nahi kar sake~ye bat or he..

and don even think i'll neva be serious...keep kiddin..hehehe n don take my replies serious..
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«Reply #13 on: August 05, 2010, 05:56:57 PM »
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Thanks yaar...sochti thee pehle hi din koi naaraaj ho gaya tou ?
Par ab pakaa rule sab mazaak no seriousness....light light mood...

hihihihi aji me or serious ...mujhe yuhi devil nahi kaha jata ji..

pakka shaitan hu..

haan kalam ka pakka bhi hu..

waise angoor chakhe hi nahi, kisi ne peshkash ki thi chakhne ki chahkar bhi accept nahi kar sake~ye bat or he..

and don even think i'll neva be serious...keep kiddin..hehehe n don take my replies serious..

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«Reply #14 on: August 05, 2010, 05:58:36 PM »
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abhi ji aate hi badmashi shuru kar di aapne....

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