Kabhi Kabhi ..... ( Jasbir SIngh)

by jasbirsingh on April 08, 2010, 05:27:00 PM
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KABHI KABHI HUM LIKH LIYA KARTEY HAI
HAAL-EH-DIL BAYAAN KAR LIYA KARTEY HAI
TANHAYI BHI SAATH REHTI HAI HAMAREY
TANHAYI MEH KUCH NA KUCH LIKH LIYA KARTEY HAI




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«Reply #1 on: April 08, 2010, 05:37:55 PM »
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Bahut achche Jasbir ji...!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

kabhi tanhaayi ko kabhi tere saath ko yaad kar lete hain,
hum bhi kabhi kabhi haal-e-dil bayaan kar lete hain,
kabhi kabhi jab tu chhed jata hai humein aake khwaabo me,
usi ehsaas ho labzon me bayaan kar lete hain...
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«Reply #2 on: April 08, 2010, 05:59:22 PM »
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Bahut achche Jasbir ji...!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

kabhi tanhaayi ko kabhi tere saath ko yaad kar lete hain,
hum bhi kabhi kabhi haal-e-dil bayaan kar lete hain,
kabhi kabhi jab tu chhed jata hai humein aake khwaabo me,
usi ehsaas ho labzon me bayaan kar lete hain...



Thanks Klaskar ji ... wah kya khoob jawaab dia ..

HUM HAR EHSAAS LABZOH MEH BAYAAN NAHI KAR PATEY
DIL KI LEHROH KOH PANNO PEH LIKH NAHI PATEY
BAHUT SEY UMANG UTHTEY HAI TANHAYI MEH
HAR UMANG KOH SHABDOH MEH DHAAL NAHI PATEY



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«Reply #3 on: April 08, 2010, 06:12:19 PM »
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Shukriya Jasbir ji... aur aapne bhi khoob likha hai...

uthte hain kai toofan dil me magar,
har toofaan shabdon me nahi rehta,
dil hi humse likhwaata hai magar,
har ehsaas ko wo likhne nahi deta...
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«Reply #4 on: April 08, 2010, 06:20:48 PM »
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Shukriya Jasbir ji... aur aapne bhi khoob likha hai...

uthte hain kai toofan dil me magar,
har toofaan shabdon me nahi rehta,
dil hi humse likhwaata hai magar,
har ehsaas ko wo likhne nahi deta...



thanks klaskar ji... and very well said by you


TOOFANOH KA SILSILA TOH CHALTA REHTA HAI
AASHIYAA BANTA HAI, GIRTA REHTA HAI
EK NAYI SUBAH HUM BHI DEKHENGEY
DIL EH AAS HAR PAL KARTA REHTA HAI.....



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«Reply #5 on: April 08, 2010, 06:29:10 PM »
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Bilkul Jasbir ji... bahut hi jaldi wo subah aayegi...

hum bhi raah tak rahe hain us naye subha ki,
har taraf bas pyaar hoga jagah na hogi dard ki,
raat ayegi magar wo hogi bas kuch lamhon ki,
baadh(flood) aayegi magar wo hogi bas khushiyon ki...
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Wah wah bahut khoob Jasbir ji and Kapil ji.lovely creation.bahut achi lagi. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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«Reply #8 on: April 08, 2010, 08:29:03 PM »
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Bahaut khoob Jasbir jee aur Kapil dost... Bahaut ache!
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«Reply #9 on: April 08, 2010, 08:31:21 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Madhu ji...!!!

Wah wah bahut khoob Jasbir ji and Kapil ji.lovely creation.bahut achi lagi. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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«Reply #10 on: April 08, 2010, 08:32:04 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Rahim bhai...!!!

Bahaut khoob Jasbir jee aur Kapil dost... Bahaut ache!
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«Reply #11 on: April 08, 2010, 09:17:07 PM »
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nice j.s ji..
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«Reply #12 on: April 08, 2010, 10:33:26 PM »
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GUd job!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #13 on: April 08, 2010, 11:42:28 PM »
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Bilkul Jasbir ji... bahut hi jaldi wo subah aayegi...

hum bhi raah tak rahe hain us naye subha ki,
har taraf bas pyaar hoga jagah na hogi dard ki,
raat ayegi magar wo hogi bas kuch lamhon ki,
baadh(flood) aayegi magar wo hogi bas khushiyon ki...
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«Reply #14 on: April 08, 2010, 11:46:47 PM »
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bahuth acha hai jasbir ji
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