koi bhi to nahi..................

by Gesu on January 09, 2006, 09:09:48 AM
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Tadap yeh dil ki sahi nahi jaati,
Tum nahi ho to yeh jaan kyon nahi jaati,,
Yeh dhadkane jo itni tez chala karti thi,
Aaj mujhe kabr tak lekar kyon nahi jaati,
Rasta pucha saanso ne shamshaano ka
Dhadkan yeh kahe tadpe bina maut bhi nahi aati,
Paani ke bin machli bhi tadap jaati hai,
Tum hi socho ikk jaan kaise jiye jaati hai,
Dil-o-jaan aaj bus mein nahi hai mera,
Zindagi zehar bhi to nahi laati.....

gesu's tadap!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #1 on: January 19, 2006, 07:30:27 AM »
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kya baat hai kisi ko pasand nahi aaya
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«Reply #2 on: January 19, 2006, 10:00:18 AM »
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wah gesuji, bahut tadap hai, dard hai, isliye likhne ko kuch nahi hai. . .aapne speechless kar diya hai. Good work. . .
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«Reply #3 on: January 19, 2006, 07:54:30 PM »
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Quote from: "gesu_kapoor"
Tadap yeh dil ki sahi nahi jaati,
Tum nahi ho to yeh jaan kyon nahi jaati,,
Yeh dhadkane jo itni tez chala karti thi,
Aaj mujhe kabr tak lekar kyon nahi jaati,
Rasta pucha saanso ne shamshaano ka
Dhadkan yeh kahe tadpe bina maut bhi nahi aati,
Paani ke bin machli bhi tadap jaati hai,
Tum hi socho ikk jaan kaise jiye jaati hai,
Dil-o-jaan aaj bus mein nahi hai mera,
Zindagi zehar bhi to nahi laati.....

gesu's tadap!!!!!!!!!!!!!


bahut khoob.....Gesu

Tadap toh yeh mujhse bhi nahi sahi jaati,
Ek Ek pal ek sadi k barabar lagta hai aur doori kaati nahi jaati,
Zeher ki toh choro aaj kal toh Sharab bhi pee nahi jaati,
Tum kya sochti ho khush hoon me tumhare bina,
Tumhe kya pata k tumhare bina toh Shama bhi is parwaane ko jala nahi paati..............
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«Reply #4 on: January 20, 2006, 07:15:38 AM »
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thanks a lot tinda ji and badnaam ji

bahut khoob badnaam ji nice reply
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«Reply #5 on: January 20, 2006, 10:10:25 AM »
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shukriya gesu ji......... tongue3
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