Laaibaa huN maiN,................

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 bohat din pehle sir saini jee ne 'laaibaa' word use kar ke aik ghazal share ki thee ,aaj uss ghazal ka aik chota sa reply sir ki ijazat se share kar rahee hun q ke chahne ke bawjood limited time mein main isse ghazal nahi kar paayi,.,our iske baad shayed aik lambe arse tak aap ke samne na aa payoon ,
dua hai ke yo per yunhee ache ache log rahen our acha achaa likhte rahen,...allah hafez


urvashi hun na mainkaa huN main
ik pareeroo see laaibaa huN main

aqs sab hee jahaan men meraa
panee pe tehraa aayinaa huN main

koi mujh koh na aaj tak samjhaa
hus.n kaa ek falsafaa huN main

yun to laakhon haseeN yahan lekin
haaN magar sab se hi judaa huN main
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«Reply #1 on: November 12, 2013, 11:35:02 PM »
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ofcourse tum sabse judaa ho naam se naheen tum man se bhee Laaibaa ho mujhe tumne jo izzat dee vo mere hameshaa saath rahegee jiskaa mujhe fakhr rahegaa khush rahnaa aage badhnaa aur haan chalte -chalte ek rau GOD BLESS U
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«Reply #2 on: November 12, 2013, 11:37:53 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: November 12, 2013, 11:38:34 PM »
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aqs sab hee jahaan men meraa
panee pe tehraa aayinaa huN main

is ashaar per RAU dena banta hai

bohut hi umda kalaam ba hasiyat e jawaab diya hai


koi mujh koh na aaj tak samjhaa
hus.n kaa ek falsafaa huN main


bohut khush rahi ..likhte rahiye .

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«Reply #4 on: November 12, 2013, 11:57:23 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: November 13, 2013, 12:23:29 AM »
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Bahut khoob Laaiba ji . Achhe ashaar se nawaza hai . Ghazal Saini saheb ki ghazal ka jawaab hai ya nahin main nahin kah sakta . Lekin mujhe yaad hai ki yeh ghazal parh kar main pahle chaunka thha kyuunki mujhe khud lafz 'Laaiba ' ka matlab nahin maloom thha . Ittefaqan saini bhai ka phone bhi aaya aur unhon ne matlab bataya. Bahut khubsurat istemaal kiya thha is lafz ka . Aap ne bhi pareeroo lafz ka khub istemaal kiya hai . Achhe ashaar k liye aap ko phir mubarakbaad . Yunhi khub se khubtar likhti rahye . Allah aapko nawaaze.
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«Reply #6 on: November 13, 2013, 12:30:15 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob Laiiba jee....beshak aap dur ja rahi hai par hamari duayein aapke sath rahengi, likhte rahein or dur rahne ka jo ye waqt hai ye jaldi kat jaye taki ham fir se aapki khoobsurat Ghazlein padh sakein...
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«Reply #7 on: November 13, 2013, 12:37:47 AM »
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Bahut badhiya Laaiba jee
duaayen..khush rahiye
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«Reply #8 on: November 13, 2013, 01:04:45 AM »
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 bohat din pehle sir saini jee ne 'laaibaa' word use kar ke aik ghazal share ki thee ,aaj uss ghazal ka aik chota sa reply sir ki ijazat se share kar rahee hun q ke chahne ke bawjood limited time mein main isse ghazal nahi kar paayi,.,our iske baad shayed aik lambe arse tak aap ke samne na aa payoon ,
dua hai ke yo per yunhee ache ache log rahen our acha achaa likhte rahen,...allah hafez


urvashi hun na mainkaa huN main
ik pareeroo see laaibaa huN main

aqs sab hee jahaan men meraa
panee pe tehraa aayinaa huN main

koi mujh koh na aaj tak samjhaa
hus.n kaa ek falsafaa huN main

yun to laakhon haseeN yahan lekin
haaN magar sab se hi judaa huN main



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«Reply #9 on: November 13, 2013, 01:37:32 AM »
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Bahut khooooooooob laaiba ji... Allah tumhe apne hifz o amaan mein rakhe..Aameen... jaldi laut kar aana.. intezar rahega..
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«Reply #10 on: November 13, 2013, 01:42:07 AM »
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 bohat din pehle sir saini jee ne 'laaibaa' word use kar ke aik ghazal share ki thee ,aaj uss ghazal ka aik chota sa reply sir ki ijazat se share kar rahee hun q ke chahne ke bawjood limited time mein main isse ghazal nahi kar paayi,.,our iske baad shayed aik lambe arse tak aap ke samne na aa payoon ,
dua hai ke yo per yunhee ache ache log rahen our acha achaa likhte rahen,...allah hafez


urvashi hun na mainkaa huN main
ik pareeroo see laaibaa huN main

aqs sab hee jahaan men meraa
panee pe tehraa aayinaa huN main

koi mujh koh na aaj tak samjhaa
hus.n kaa ek falsafaa huN main

yun to laakhon haseeN yahan lekin
haaN magar sab se hi judaa huN main

wah wah
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«Reply #11 on: November 13, 2013, 01:42:35 AM »
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urvashi hun na mainkaa huN main
ik pareeroo see laaibaa huN main

Wah.Wah,Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Laaibaa ji,Bahut sunder.
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«Reply #12 on: November 13, 2013, 05:10:25 AM »
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 bohat din pehle sir saini jee ne 'laaibaa' word use kar ke aik ghazal share ki thee ,aaj uss ghazal ka aik chota sa reply sir ki ijazat se share kar rahee hun q ke chahne ke bawjood limited time mein main isse ghazal nahi kar paayi,.,our iske baad shayed aik lambe arse tak aap ke samne na aa payoon ,
dua hai ke yo per yunhee ache ache log rahen our acha achaa likhte rahen,...allah hafez


urvashi hun na mainkaa huN main
ik pareeroo see laaibaa huN main

aqs sab hee jahaan men meraa
panee pe tehraa aayinaa huN main

koi mujh koh na aaj tak samjhaa
hus.n kaa ek falsafaa huN main

yun to laakhon haseeN yahan lekin
haaN magar sab se hi judaa huN main



bahot khoob likha hai aapne aur dr saini ji ko jo aapne izzat bakhshi hai wo aap ne ham sab ko di hai . aap jis wajah kar bhi taweel waqt ke liye ye mehfil chhor rahi.n hain meri doa hai ALLAH JALLESHANAHU aap ko kaamyaabi aur mussarrat ata'a kare.amin aur umeed hai aap jald hi apne kaam se faarig ho kar wapas aayein gi


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«Reply #13 on: November 13, 2013, 05:44:35 AM »
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 bohat din pehle sir saini jee ne 'laaibaa' word use kar ke aik ghazal share ki thee ,aaj uss ghazal ka aik chota sa reply sir ki ijazat se share kar rahee hun q ke chahne ke bawjood limited time mein main isse ghazal nahi kar paayi,.,our iske baad shayed aik lambe arse tak aap ke samne na aa payoon ,
dua hai ke yo per yunhee ache ache log rahen our acha achaa likhte rahen,...allah hafez


urvashi hun na mainkaa huN main
ik pareeroo see laaibaa huN main

aqs sab hee jahaan men meraa
panee pe tehraa aayinaa huN main

koi mujh koh na aaj tak samjhaa
hus.n kaa ek falsafaa huN main

yun to laakhon haseeN yahan lekin
haaN magar sab se hi judaa huN main



aqs sab hee jahaan men meraa
panee pe tehraa aayinaa huN main

koi mujh koh na aaj tak samjhaa
hus.n kaa ek falsafaa huN main


Waah Waah Waah Waah........Bahut Bahut Khoooob  Laaiba Jiii...

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