"" Yaad aati hai ""

by nirala on February 18, 2011, 09:46:28 PM
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uss roz ki wo mulakaat yaad aati hai
nihaarti palkon me doobi wo shaam yaad aati hai

hasta nuskurata gungunta beparwah sa
wo khushiyon ki jaam yaad aati hai

saath guzare pal wo saare
sitaaron sazi wo raaton ke nazaare
chandni ki wo bahaar yaad aati hai

judai ke wo pal
na rah payenge duur unse ik pal
pyar bhari wo kasme yaad aati hain

ashq bhare wo nain
kaampte hotho se wo muskurakar izazat dena
sachhi chahat ke unn ehsaaso ki yaad aati hai

uss roz ki wo mulakaat yaad aati hai
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«Reply #1 on: February 19, 2011, 11:20:04 AM »
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bht khoob nirala ji....
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«Reply #2 on: February 19, 2011, 11:37:58 AM »
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uss roz ki wo mulakaat yaad aati hai
nihaarti palkon me doobi wo shaam yaad aati hai

hasta nuskurata gungunta beparwah sa
wo khushiyon ki jaam yaad aati hai

saath guzare pal wo saare
sitaaron sazi wo raaton ke nazaare
chandni ki wo bahaar yaad aati hai

judai ke wo pal
na rah payenge duur unse ik pal
pyar bhari wo kasme yaad aati hain

ashq bhare wo nain
kaampte hotho se wo muskurakar izazat dena
sachhi chahat ke unn ehsaaso ki yaad aati hai

uss roz ki wo mulakaat yaad aati hai
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Very Nice Poetry ..... Nirala Ji !
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«Reply #3 on: February 19, 2011, 09:06:43 PM »
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Anshumali ji aapka dher saara sukriya.
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«Reply #4 on: February 19, 2011, 09:08:30 PM »
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thanx Manzil ji.
aapka bhi bahut sukriya.
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«Reply #5 on: February 20, 2011, 04:36:38 AM »
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Khoob dost..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #6 on: February 20, 2011, 03:50:38 PM »
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kya baat hai nirala ji very nice
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«Reply #7 on: February 20, 2011, 03:57:15 PM »
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Thanx Rahim dost
thanx Kamal ji.
aapdono ka sukriya dil se
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«Reply #8 on: February 20, 2011, 07:37:06 PM »
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Bahut Khub Nirala Ji
U hi Likhte Rahiye
Aur Humein Padhne Ka Mauka Dete Rahiye
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«Reply #9 on: February 20, 2011, 08:18:42 PM »
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thanku Risi ji.
humare utpatang likhne ki aadat hai jo shayd kabhi na jaaye.
par aap achhi rachnaye likhte rahiye bas.
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«Reply #10 on: February 21, 2011, 06:07:19 PM »
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«Reply #11 on: February 21, 2011, 06:19:23 PM »
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thanx KA ji.
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«Reply #12 on: March 05, 2011, 04:21:09 AM »
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Bahut baddiya Nirala ji,kamaal ki peshkash hai ji.bahut khoobsurti se bayaa kiya apne ehsaaso ko.hats off icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: May 08, 2011, 01:17:26 PM »
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Bahut baddiya Nirala ji,kamaal ki peshkash hai ji.bahut khoobsurti se bayaa kiya apne ehsaaso ko.hats off icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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