"aap aayenge to"

by aaina on June 29, 2009, 04:47:04 AM
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Aap aayenge to fizao.n ki ada kuch aur hogi
Mehkegi har simt khushbu rang e hina kuch aur hogi

Ye jo mousam abhi mujhse katra ke nikla jate hain
Mujhme samayenge ye, inki waza kuch aur hogi

Har qadam mere jaanib jab badhega tera
Rang har gul pe chadhega fiza kuch aur hogi

Tujhse milne ko betaab sabhi honge ey nadiya
Gungunaate huway dariyao.n ki nida kuch aur hogi

Tere aane ki khabar lay ke aayegi jo
Wo mehki hui baad e saba kuch aur hogi

Is dil pe chalega phir tumhara jaadu
Meri hi dhadkan mujhse bewafaa kuch aur hogi

Chala bhi aa ke har sitam manzoor tera
Tu baho.n mai hoga to aslam ki saza kuch aur hogi
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«Reply #1 on: June 29, 2009, 05:29:46 AM »
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Wah wah Aaina ji,excellent,bahut khoob,keep it up. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: June 29, 2009, 10:47:33 AM »
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MashAllah Aslam bhaijan bahaut bahaut acha likha hai yaar...Applause
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«Reply #3 on: June 29, 2009, 11:54:35 AM »
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Aap aayenge to fizao.n ki ada kuch aur hogi
Mehkegi har simt khushbu rang e hina kuch aur hogi

Ye jo mousam abhi mujhse katra ke nikla jate hain
Mujhme samayenge ye, inki waza kuch aur hogi

Har qadam mere jaanib jab badhega tera
Rang har gul pe chadhega fiza kuch aur hogi

Tujhse milne ko betaab sabhi honge ey nadiya
Gungunaate huway dariyao.n ki nida kuch aur hogi

Tere aane ki khabar lay ke aayegi jo
Wo mehki hui baad e saba kuch aur hogi

Is dil pe chalega phir tumhara jaadu
Meri hi dhadkan mujhse bewafaa kuch aur hogi

Chala bhi aa ke har sitam manzoor tera
Tu baho.n mai hoga to aslam ki saza kuch aur hogi


Bohot hi pyaari aur mohabbat se choor ye ghazal....Bohot Khoob Aslam Ji
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«Reply #4 on: June 29, 2009, 01:11:37 PM »
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waah .. bahut aaccha likha hai aap ne....   do lines kissi Shayar ki likhi yaad aa gyin.

Shamma jalaye rakhna jab tak ke mein na aau
kudh ko bchaye rakhna jab tak ke mein na aau !!


Kucch arz hai .....


Door kissi des mein bulata hai koi
Rahoon mein palkein bichata hai koi

Rasta na rokein yeh fizaoon se keh do
Pyaar bhariii bahien failata hai koi

Kaseey na jau ke bahut der se mujhko
Muhhobat ki gazalein sunata hai koi !!


HumTum

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shayara
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«Reply #5 on: June 30, 2009, 06:54:45 AM »
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Aaina Ji,

Bohot Khoob

Shayara

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shayara
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«Reply #6 on: June 30, 2009, 06:55:33 AM »
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HumTum Ji,

Very nice

Shayara
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aaina
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«Reply #7 on: June 30, 2009, 08:18:36 AM »
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Wah wah Aaina ji,excellent,bahut khoob,keep it up. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

thnxxxx so much madhu
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aaina
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«Reply #8 on: June 30, 2009, 08:19:26 AM »
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MashAllah Aslam bhaijan bahaut bahaut acha likha hai yaar...Applause
bhut bhut shukriya bro is hosla afzaai ka
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«Reply #9 on: June 30, 2009, 08:20:49 AM »
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waah .. bahut aaccha likha hai aap ne....   do lines kissi Shayar ki likhi yaad aa gyin.

Shamma jalaye rakhna jab tak ke mein na aau
kudh ko bchaye rakhna jab tak ke mein na aau !!


Kucch arz hai .....


Door kissi des mein bulata hai koi
Rahoon mein palkein bichata hai koi

Rasta na rokein yeh fizaoon se keh do
Pyaar bhariii bahien failata hai koi

Kaseey na jau ke bahut der se mujhko
Muhhobat ki gazalein sunata hai koi !!


HumTum



thnxxxx so much humtum, nd bhut khoob kaha aane bhi keep writing, very nice
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aaina
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«Reply #10 on: June 30, 2009, 08:22:06 AM »
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Aaina Ji,

Bohot Khoob

Shayara



bhut bhut shukriya shayara ji
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aaina
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«Reply #11 on: June 30, 2009, 08:23:03 AM »
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Bohot hi pyaari aur mohabbat se choor ye ghazal....Bohot Khoob Aslam Ji
shukriya talat
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«Reply #12 on: January 11, 2010, 01:23:25 AM »
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bahut hi accha likha hai aaina jee
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«Reply #13 on: January 11, 2010, 06:18:38 AM »
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Sach mea bahoot umda likha hai Aslam ji.. Bahoot Khoob!
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leena loves kamlesh
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«Reply #14 on: January 11, 2010, 06:28:48 AM »
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wah wah!! very toching poetry Clapping Smiley
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