Barish Kee Pehlee Boond....koyal

by KOYAL46 on August 04, 2010, 02:18:12 PM
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Aasma se tapki
Pehlee ek boond
Pehli Barish ki,
Pehli Khwahish jagi,

Pehla Jazba jagaa,
Pehla Waada yaad aaya,
Pehle pyaar ki Khushbu,
pehli Aarjoo jaga gayee

Ootho par amrit si giri
Tan-badan me bijli si giri
Mann me jaise badli ghiri
Nayno se khushi ki boond giri

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«Reply #1 on: August 04, 2010, 02:21:32 PM »
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lovely creation koyal.....
 Clapping Smiley Applause
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«Reply #2 on: August 04, 2010, 02:51:08 PM »
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ચાલ, નીકળી પડીએ રે વરસાદમાં…


અંદર ક્યાંક ધરબીને રાખેલું ગીત જેમ નીકળી પડે રે વાતવાતમાં,
એમ વાદળો અથડાય છે આકાશમાં,
ચાલ, નીકળી પડીએ આ વરસાદમાં…

ઓગળતી ઓગળતી ઓગળતી જાય જાત
અંદર-બાહર બધ્ધું જ તરબોળ;
ભીતરના ચમકારે ભીંજાતી પળપળને
પ્રોવી, પ્રોવામાં થાઉં ઓળઘોળ
સાત સાત રંગ પડે ઝાંખા એમ આભમાં તેજ થઈ ઝળહળીએ, વા’લમા !
ચાલ, નીકળી પડીએ આ વરસાદમાં…

હોવાની હોડીને તરતી મેલીને
ચાલ, વહી નીકળીએ ગઈકાલમાં;
વ્યસ્તતા ઓઢીને જ્યાં કોરું રહેવાનું નહીં,
ભીંજાવું કેવળ સંગાથમાં
ફંટાતા માર્ગ પાણી-પાણી થઈ જાય એમ વરસીએ હાથ લઈ હાથમાં.
ચાલ, નીકળી પડીએ આ વરસાદમાં…
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #3 on: August 04, 2010, 05:46:28 PM »
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BAHUJ SARAS CHHE....... Applause Applause Applause

Chaal niklee padiye varsaad maa......
Fariye kankaria haath lai haath maa...

Ho jaaye sab duriyon ka kaatmaa....
Mile bas hamaari aatmaa se aatmaa...
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mamta bajpai
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«Reply #4 on: August 04, 2010, 05:50:27 PM »
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waah Koyal ! ye bataao ki tum kitni bhaashaayen jaanti ho?
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«Reply #5 on: August 04, 2010, 05:56:31 PM »
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Thanks a lot Mamta-di.......mujhe achhi tarah koi b  language nahi aati hai.....
Thodi thodi....english,hindi,gujraati.....aati hai.....kuchh shabd panjaabi aur Marathi k....bas...
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«Reply #6 on: August 04, 2010, 06:19:30 PM »
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Aasma se tapki
Pehlee ek boond
Pehli Barish ki,
Pehli Khwahish jagi,

Pehla Jazba jagaa,
Pehla Waada yaad aaya,
Pehle pyaar ki Khushbu,
pehli Aarjoo jaga gayee

Ootho par amrit si giri
Tan-badan me bijli si giri
Mann me jaise badli ghiri
Nayno se khushi ki boond giri



wah wah koyal ji.. wah wah ...

jasbir singh
hira_company@yahoo.com
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Sajid_Ghayel
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«Reply #7 on: August 04, 2010, 08:35:00 PM »
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Beautiful work.....
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ParwaaZ
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«Reply #8 on: August 04, 2010, 09:14:20 PM »
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Waw so cool...........

It's for on your nice post...........  happy3

Rim jhim barsaat hai
Aur tu mere saath hai

Tan badan meiN aag hai
Bahke bahke jazbaat hai
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«Reply #9 on: August 05, 2010, 12:16:54 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Nice one Koyal ji...!!!
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