"" Charaag hawa me --""

by nirala on February 16, 2011, 07:25:23 AM
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Charag hawa me hum jalayenge !

Ik ashiya toofaa me bhi hum sajayenge !

bujhti ik Lau ko shola sa bhdkayenge !

gar ho jarurat khud ko bhi bedum tadpayenge

suna h humne,raas na aati mohbt zamane ko

thaam kr haath uska zamane ko bhi jhutlayenge !

rehmat khuda ki hoti h mhbt

nibhakr kasme apni duniya ko hum diklayenge !

bhawar me fasi kasti ko

sahil tak lane ktra ktra khud ko hum azmayenge !

kyun dare,khuff kiska

dilon ki nafraten 'nir' hum mohbt se hi Khaak kar jayenge !
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«Reply #1 on: February 16, 2011, 07:46:52 AM »
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nirala ji........

hmm ab kya kahu.........
ho sake to yakin karna ........aajtak apne jab bhi aur jo bhi likha he ye unme se to best he hi but yaha yo per jitni bhi aachi post sab karte he unme bhi apki is post ka bahot ucha mukaam he...........is post ki rythm...theme.and words sabkuch gajab he..........

it is realy wondefrul.........mindblowing.......fantastic.... meaning full and lovable post..........just superb.........

in words of KB ji..its chumeeshwari post........

maja aa gaya nirala ji......wat ane excellent creation........
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«Reply #2 on: February 16, 2011, 08:07:47 AM »
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nirale mastane ki ek aurzabardast nirali kalakaari......

ek bht hi dilchasp aur dil chhuti poem ji........bhtttttttttt achchi lagi mujhe
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

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«Reply #3 on: February 16, 2011, 10:16:26 AM »
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wah wah Neeraalaa ji....badi joshilee dilkash rachna hai aapki.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Rok nahi paaoge tum taali bajaa kay hum bhee deekhlaayenge
Tum chaaho naa chaaho ek aur kavita aapse hum likhvaayenge

Bhadak jaayenge shole bhee aur Charag bhee jal jaayenge
Jab hum Dil se teri sulagtee huyee kavita gungunaayenge

Charag hawa me hum jalayenge !

Ik ashiya toofaa me bhi hum sajayenge !

bujhti ik Lau ko shola sa bhdkayenge !

gar ho jarurat khud ko bhi bedum tadpayenge

suna h humne,raas na aati mohbt zamane ko

thaam kr haath uska zamane ko bhi jhutlayenge !

rehmat khuda ki hoti h mhbt

nibhakr kasme apni duniya ko hum diklayenge !

bhawar me fasi kasti ko

sahil tak lane ktra ktra khud ko hum azmayenge !

kyun dare,khuff kiska

dilon ki nafraten 'nir' hum mohbt se hi Khaak kar jayenge !
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nirala
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«Reply #4 on: February 16, 2011, 01:51:26 PM »
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Thanx Natrix yaara--mujhe itni izzat baksne ke liye.
lekin mujhe lagta hai ki aapne kuch jada tareef kar daali--itne ka haqdaar nirala nhi hai.
mujhe pata hai--
bt aapke hausala afzai ka behad sukriya.
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«Reply #5 on: February 16, 2011, 02:23:39 PM »
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nirala ji jesa apne kaha  wesa nahi he ji.........

jitni bhi tarif ki he apki post ki kari he apki nahi.. Winking Winking Winking.... DOH DOH DOH

dear sidhi si baat he aacha likha he so aacha he kahnege ....koi juthi tarif nahi he.really u wrote wonderful dear........muje to ye best post lagi aaj ki ........ab aap chahe jo soche.....for me it is post of the day...... Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP
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«Reply #6 on: February 16, 2011, 02:44:08 PM »
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haha yaara kamaal hain aap bhi.
post ki tareef kari to meri bhi ho hi gai na!!
ye kya baat hui bhala ki post ki tareef kari aur meri nahi:(
meri bhi tareef kari aakhir me bhi INSAAN hun dusron ki karah--to kya hua gar bheja kam hai Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: February 16, 2011, 02:47:56 PM »
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thanx K mam and K sahiba Usual Smile
koyal sahiba aapka reply as usual mast Usual Smile
than q choooo much
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thanx
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«Reply #8 on: February 16, 2011, 04:32:50 PM »
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Charag hawa me hum jalayenge !

Ik ashiya toofaa me bhi hum sajayenge !

bujhti ik Lau ko shola sa bhdkayenge !

gar ho jarurat khud ko bhi bedum tadpayenge

suna h humne,raas na aati mohbt zamane ko

thaam kr haath uska zamane ko bhi jhutlayenge !

rehmat khuda ki hoti h mhbt

nibhakr kasme apni duniya ko hum diklayenge !

bhawar me fasi kasti ko

sahil tak lane ktra ktra khud ko hum azmayenge !

kyun dare,khuff kiska

dilon ki nafraten 'nir' hum mohbt se hi Khaak kar jayenge !

Bahut hii umdaa soch ke saath likhe khayaal bayaan kiye hai aapne .... Nirala ji ! bahut khoob ... janaab ! dil se daad .... !
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«Reply #9 on: February 16, 2011, 06:43:58 PM »
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Charag hawa me hum jalayenge !

Ik ashiya toofaa me bhi hum sajayenge !

bujhti ik Lau ko shola sa bhdkayenge !

gar ho jarurat khud ko bhi bedum tadpayenge

suna h humne,raas na aati mohbt zamane ko

thaam kr haath uska zamane ko bhi jhutlayenge !

rehmat khuda ki hoti h mhbt

nibhakr kasme apni duniya ko hum diklayenge !

bhawar me fasi kasti ko

sahil tak lane ktra ktra khud ko hum azmayenge !

kyun dare,khuff kiska

dilon ki nafraten 'nir' hum mohbt se hi Khaak kar jayenge !

bahut behtreen ji
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«Reply #10 on: February 17, 2011, 05:42:09 AM »
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nirala ji bahut khub

aap yun hi chalte rahiye hum hosla aapka badayenge
gar jarurat ho kisi ki to aawaz dena hum saath nibhane chale aayenge
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«Reply #11 on: February 17, 2011, 06:04:28 AM »
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bilkul kamal ji--
aap hausala badhaiye
aapko hi aawaz denge jarurat par--aakhri saans se pahle aapko hi aawaz denge Usual Smile
thanx
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«Reply #12 on: February 17, 2011, 06:16:25 AM »
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Anshumali ji --- Khamosh ji ---
Shihaab ji --
aap jaise shayrs se daad milna fakra ki baat hai Usual Smile
thanq so much aap sab ke hausala afzai ka.
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thanx
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«Reply #13 on: February 18, 2011, 11:36:41 AM »
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wah niralaji.... sach main habut khub kurban aapki is rachna par... kya baat hai..
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«Reply #14 on: February 18, 2011, 11:40:56 AM »
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bahut bahut thanku Manju ji--
aapki daad sae aankhon par
thanx
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