EK SHAAM..................

by akela on November 30, 2004, 09:07:52 PM
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shabab par thi mahfil ,
mahaul bhi shayarana tha,
unko dekha tab jab humne,
samne apne bhi ab jine ka bahana tha.


                                       lagne lagi tab hume yeh shaam hassi,
                                       laga jaise mausam bhi suhana tha,
                                       pal mai duniya badal gaye hamari,
                                       ek taraf woh ek taraf zamana tha.

unki hi chahat thi abb
unko hi bas pana tha
kya haal hai dil ka yaha
kaise bhi ho unko batana tha.

                                            najare jo padi phir unki hum par
                                            jannat kya hai najaro ne jaana tha
                                            aaj kyamat aa jaye shayad
                                            aisa gajab uska sharmana tha.....

                                                      .........to be cont......
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akela
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«Reply #1 on: November 30, 2004, 09:21:58 PM »
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..............
aisa haseen na hoga jahan mai
yeh dil ne bhi maana tha,
hodho ki laali surkh ho jaati,
kya khoob uska muskurana tha.


chahat kisi ke liye ab hume bhi hai,
ye aaj mahfil ko batana tha,
halat hamari sab baya kar rahi thi
ab bhala kisi se kya chupana tha.


phir unki taraf badhte kadmo ko
tab achanak hi humne thama tha,
saath unke koi auur bhi tha ye
 mahfil khatam hue, tab hum humne jana tha.


.......................to be contd.........
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akela
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«Reply #2 on: November 30, 2004, 09:33:40 PM »
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.................
najaro mai hamare ab bhi aas thi,
aaur haatho mai paimana tha,
reshtey naatey tho khoob they waha
magar mai phi mahfil mai anjaana tha.


jii na payenge usske bina,
kya mai iss kadar diwana tha
koi hota sambhalne ke liye,
par waha na koi dost,na koi maikhana tha.


ab kisi se kya gila yaaro,
jab unhone hi nahi pahchana tha
intezaar unka waha mai kar leta ''akela'' magar
aakhir ghar bhi jaana tha. Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: November 30, 2004, 09:51:49 PM »
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wowowow Nice AKELA JI!!!!
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akela
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«Reply #4 on: November 30, 2004, 10:15:05 PM »
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shukariya aapka Usual Smile
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Nedura!
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«Reply #5 on: December 01, 2004, 07:35:01 AM »
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nice akela!
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #6 on: December 01, 2004, 08:32:33 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Akela ji!!! Very Nice!
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husain52
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«Reply #7 on: December 01, 2004, 08:56:40 AM »
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bahoot khoob akela

kabhi bhi kisi per aatbar mat karna ..
bhool kar bhi kisi se pyar mat karna ..
khushi kay lamhe kam hain zindagii mainn..
aansoo bha kay inhe barbaad mat karna ...
mohobbat kya hai .. mahaz dokha hai banwat haii..
kisi bhi waday per aatbar mat karna..
zindagii tanha bhi basar hosakti hai jana..
kisi pe marnay jeenay ka iqrar mat karna ..
mujhe kiya maloom tha woh jatay jatay khajahay ga..
dil beqarar mat karna mera intazar mat karna...
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #8 on: December 01, 2004, 09:00:23 AM »
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Very Nice Husain ji!
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husain52
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«Reply #9 on: December 01, 2004, 09:08:27 AM »
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thax arun ji
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akela
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«Reply #10 on: December 02, 2004, 02:15:58 PM »
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shukariya dosto, nice husain ji
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husain52
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«Reply #11 on: December 02, 2004, 02:32:18 PM »
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thax akela
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akela
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«Reply #12 on: December 03, 2004, 02:27:55 PM »
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ye jhuki jhuki aankhe,
ye daba daba tabasubh,
kahi dar hai mujhe
ki pyar na ho jaye.(nm)
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«Reply #13 on: December 03, 2004, 07:50:43 PM »
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woh or hain jo her ik dar pe juhkatey hain jabeen,
hum jahan juk jayein phir sir uthtey nahi kabhi
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«Reply #14 on: December 03, 2004, 08:36:59 PM »
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awesome akela....u write 2 well! By d way wuss ur name?

jab se aayi hu dikh raha hai tu akela
pooch pooch ke ho gaya apuna thakela
aaj to bata hi de kya hai yeh jhamela
kyon naam rakha hai tune apna 'akela'?? :wink:
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