*~Falak Se Uttar Ke~*

by honeyrose on October 20, 2008, 09:21:12 AM
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Falak se uttar ke tere dil mein rehne aaye hoon
Tumari zindagi mein noor banke aaye hoon

Zamaane se tujhe aapna banane aaye hoon
Tumari aankhon mein pyaar likhne aaye hoon

Falak se uttar ke tere labon ki hansi banke aaye hoon
Muhabbat ke paane mein tera naam likhne aaye hoon

Zindagi bhar ka rishta hai aapna tujhe yaad dilane aaye hoon
Falak se uttar ke tere rooh-o-jaan banke aaye hoon

**^^honeyrose^^**
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«Reply #1 on: October 20, 2008, 09:29:11 AM »
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BAHUT KHOOB AUR BEHAD PYARA
KALAM LIKHA DIDI,
BY. K.SHAEL

FALAK SE UTAR KAR AAYE HAI TERI AAGOSH ME,
PYAR DE DE TUJHE KAISE,KAISE KARE KHUSH HAI
HAM BASS ISI SOCH ME,

HAM FALAK KE SITARA HI SAHI PAR TERE ZAMEEN
KE CHAND KE BINA FALAK PE HAMARA GUJARA NAHI,

BHAR LE APNI BAAHOON ME KI TU AAB MERA HAI
ISS BAAT SE ZAMANA ANJANA NAHI...
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«Reply #2 on: October 20, 2008, 09:41:44 AM »
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Shukriya Shally dear...

Bohat khoob likha hai shally beautifull lines ... Applause
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«Reply #3 on: October 20, 2008, 09:51:30 AM »
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Bahut hi achcha likha hai aapne Honeyrose Ji

Equally good comments Shael Ji
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«Reply #4 on: October 20, 2008, 10:00:32 AM »
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aaj shayri me teri sab tha magar gam na tha
isse badhkar mere liye ya malik koi karam na tha
Quote from: k.shael on October 20, 2008, 09:29:11 AM
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BAHUT KHOOB AUR BEHAD PYARA
KALAM LIKHA DIDI,
BY. K.SHAEL

FALAK SE UTAR KAR AAYE HAI TERI AAGOSH ME,
PYAR DE DE TUJHE KAISE,KAISE KARE KHUSH HAI
HAM BASS ISI SOCH ME,

HAM FALAK KE SITARA HI SAHI PAR TERE ZAMEEN
KE CHAND KE BINA FALAK PE HAMARA GUJARA NAHI,

BHAR LE APNI BAAHOON ME KI TU AAB MERA HAI
ISS BAAT SE ZAMANA ANJANA NAHI...
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«Reply #5 on: October 20, 2008, 10:14:20 AM »
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Honeyrose Saahiba,

Zindagi bhar ka rishta hai aapna
tujhe yaad dilane aaye hoon
Falak se uttar ke tere rooh-o-jaan banke aaye hoon

Aap ki yeh lines bahut hi bhayi hain. Wah
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«Reply #6 on: October 20, 2008, 10:21:04 AM »
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SHUKRIYA HONEY DIDI,
RAJESH JI & SAJID JI,
BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #7 on: October 20, 2008, 11:06:31 AM »
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Bahoot Hi Achcha Likha Hai Sis,.
Nice one,.
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«Reply #8 on: October 20, 2008, 11:10:28 AM »
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Quote from: honeyrose on October 20, 2008, 09:21:12 AM


Falak se uttar ke tere labon ki hansi banke aaye hoon
Muhabbat ke paane mein tera naam likhne aaye hoon

Zindagi bhar ka rishta hai aapna tujhe yaad dilane aaye hoon
Falak se uttar ke tere rooh-o-jaan banke aaye hoon

**^^honeyrose^^**

Bohot Khoob Honey sis Ye lines to bohot pyari hain......

Nice reply Shael, Sajid Ji
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«Reply #9 on: October 20, 2008, 11:32:10 AM »
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Thank you Rajesh ji..

Shukriya Sajid ji

Shukriya Sayed ..

Shukriya Azeem bhai..

Thanks so much Celmira sis..
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«Reply #10 on: October 20, 2008, 11:26:42 PM »
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Quote from: honeyrose on October 20, 2008, 09:21:12 AM
Falak se uttar ke tere dil mein rehne aaye hoon
Tumari zindagi mein noor banke aaye hoon

Zamaane se tujhe aapna banane aaye hoon
Tumari aankhon mein pyaar likhne aaye hoon

Falak se uttar ke tere labon ki hansi banke aaye hoon
Muhabbat ke paane mein tera naam likhne aaye hoon

Zindagi bhar ka rishta hai aapna tujhe yaad dilane aaye hoon
Falak se uttar ke tere rooh-o-jaan banke aaye hoon

**^^honeyrose^^**

Waah honey sahiba bohot khoob bohot hi khoob, is baar to kamal kar diya aapne, isi tarah lihte rahiye khumar-e-ishq mein doob kar... tongue3
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«Reply #11 on: October 20, 2008, 11:33:05 PM »
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Quote from: k.shael on October 20, 2008, 09:29:11 AM
HAM FALAK KE SITARA HI SAHI PAR TERE ZAMEEN
KE CHAND KE BINA FALAK PE HAMARA GUJARA NAHI,

Kya baat hai.. bohot hi umda jawaab k.shael ji. bohot khoob.
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«Reply #12 on: October 21, 2008, 04:08:31 AM »
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Shukriya Sayyid ji...
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«Reply #13 on: October 21, 2008, 04:37:18 AM »
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wah kaya baat hai, bahoot khoob Honey, apki shayri padte waqat yahi lines man mai aai hai

falak se app hume shayri sunane aai hai
apni shayri se YoIndia ko jugmagane aai hai
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«Reply #14 on: October 21, 2008, 04:58:13 AM »
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bohut khoob honey ji Applause
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