Haan Maine Pyaar Kiya "Khwaish"

by khwaish on April 30, 2011, 09:54:57 AM
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Saari Duniya Ke sitam Ek Taraf RakhKar Bhi,
Har Haal Mein Tujhe maine Sirf Pyaar Kiya

Kaun Kehta Hai Ke Mohabbat Dam Tod Deti Hai!!!
Har Kadam par khud Ko,Tujhpar Vaar Kiya

Sabne Hungama-e-Mehfil ke Maze Loote!!
Maine To Teri Tanhai Ka Bhi Satkaar Kiya

Kisi Manzil Ki Mujhe Koi Tamanna Kabhi Thi Bhi Nahi!!!
Saath Chalna Hi Zindagi hai,Yehi Maine Humesha Mere Yaar Kiya

Ruthne-manaane Ke Daur Se UbharKar Bhi Ab Yeh Naraazgi Kaisi!!!
 humne To Apni Zindagi hi Tujhpar Nisaar Kiya..

Chaand-Taare Tod Laana To Mere Bas Mein Nahi!!!
maine To Kharch Tumpar Sirf Apna Aitbaar Kiya

suna Hai Log Mohabbat mein Aaj Bhi Saboot Mangte Hai!!!
Sochta Hoon Maine Mohabbat Ki Yaa Koi Karobaar Kiya

Yaar "Khwaish" Dabi Awaaz mein Kyon Kehte Ho!!!
Ba-Buland kaho Naa Ke "HaaN Maine Pyaar Kiya..."
 
                   ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: April 30, 2011, 09:58:47 AM »
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Saari Duniya Ke sitam Ek Taraf RakhKar Bhi,
Har Haal Mein Tujhe maine Sirf Pyaar Kiya

Kaun Kehta Hai Ke Mohabbat Dam Tod Deti Hai!!!
Har Kadam par khud Ko,Tujhpar Vaar Kiya

Sabne Hungama-e-Mehfil ke Maze Loote!!
Maine To Teri Tanhai Ka Bhi Satkaar Kiya

Kisi Manzil Ki Mujhe Koi Tamanna Kabhi Thi Bhi Nahi!!!
Saath Chalna Hi Zindagi hai,Yehi Maine Humesha Mere Yaar Kiya

Ruthne-manaane Ke Daur Se UbharKar Bhi Ab Yeh Naraazgi Kaisi!!!
 humne To Apni Zindagi hi Tujhpar Nisaar Kiya..

Chaand-Taare Tod Laana To Mere Bas Mein Nahi!!!
maine To Kharch Tumpar Sirf Apna Aitbaar Kiya

suna Hai Log Mohabbat mein Aaj Bhi Saboot Mangte Hai!!!
Sochta Hoon Maine Mohabbat Ki Yaa Koi Karobaar Kiya

Yaar "Khwaish" Dabi Awaaz mein Kyon Kehte Ho!!!
Ba-Buland kaho Ke "HaaN Maine Pyaar Kiya..."
 
                   ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~


Bahut Umdaa Khayaalaat ..... Khwaish Ji !

dil se daad ... !!!
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«Reply #2 on: April 30, 2011, 10:21:57 AM »
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Dear Khwaish

Aapki ghazal padhkar achchh laga
 
Bahut achchhe khayal hain bharpoor koshish kee hai
kaafee had taq safal bhee hain thoda aur koshish
karen...manzil kareeb hi hai...

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«Reply #3 on: April 30, 2011, 10:26:46 AM »
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Saari Duniya Ke sitam Ek Taraf RakhKar Bhi,
Har Haal Mein Tujhe maine Sirf Pyaar Kiya

Kaun Kehta Hai Ke Mohabbat Dam Tod Deti Hai!!!
Har Kadam par khud Ko,Tujhpar Vaar Kiya

Sabne Hungama-e-Mehfil ke Maze Loote!!
Maine To Teri Tanhai Ka Bhi Satkaar Kiya

Kisi Manzil Ki Mujhe Koi Tamanna Kabhi Thi Bhi Nahi!!!
Saath Chalna Hi Zindagi hai,Yehi Maine Humesha Mere Yaar Kiya

Ruthne-manaane Ke Daur Se UbharKar Bhi Ab Yeh Naraazgi Kaisi!!!
 humne To Apni Zindagi hi Tujhpar Nisaar Kiya..

Chaand-Taare Tod Laana To Mere Bas Mein Nahi!!!
maine To Kharch Tumpar Sirf Apna Aitbaar Kiya

suna Hai Log Mohabbat mein Aaj Bhi Saboot Mangte Hai!!!
Sochta Hoon Maine Mohabbat Ki Yaa Koi Karobaar Kiya

Yaar "Khwaish" Dabi Awaaz mein Kyon Kehte Ho!!!
Ba-Buland kaho Naa Ke "HaaN Maine Pyaar Kiya..."
 
                   ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~


maine to teri tanhai ka satkar....bahut khoob khawaish ji

ek asar dar tehreer jo aapki mehbooba sunn le to behaal ho jaaye.

bahut hi khoob
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«Reply #4 on: April 30, 2011, 11:19:02 AM »
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Bahut Umdaa Khayaalaat ..... Khwaish Ji !

dil se daad ... !!!

Aapka Bahut Bahut Shukriya Nareshji..

Yuhi Saath Dete Rahiyega icon_flower

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«Reply #5 on: April 30, 2011, 11:20:12 AM »
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Dear Khwaish

Aapki ghazal padhkar achchh laga
 
Bahut achchhe khayal hain bharpoor koshish kee hai
kaafee had taq safal bhee hain thoda aur koshish
karen...manzil kareeb hi hai...

Raqeeb Lucknowi

Ji Shukriya
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«Reply #6 on: April 30, 2011, 12:11:27 PM »
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maine to teri tanhai ka satkar....bahut khoob khawaish ji

ek asar dar tehreer jo aapki mehbooba sunn le to behaal ho jaaye.

bahut hi khoob

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Shebaji..

hahaha..Aaj Kal Mehaz Lafzon Se Kaun Behaal Hota Hai Sheba Ji tongue3

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«Reply #7 on: April 30, 2011, 01:11:09 PM »
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"Tanhai ka bhi satkar kiya"

"Mohobat ki ya koi karobar kiya"

"Tujhpe kharch sirf apna aetabaar kiya"

Dost, bahaut umda likha hai apne hamesha ki tarha..
Quoted lines toh behad dil kay kareeb rahi..
Jaise mere dil ki awaz ko sunkar kisi ne kagaz par utaar diya..
Dil dil se daad..
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Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #8 on: April 30, 2011, 03:24:55 PM »
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Bahut hi wadiya likheya hai khwaish ji..bahut hi wadiya...
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«Reply #9 on: May 01, 2011, 09:04:57 AM »
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bahot khoob
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«Reply #10 on: May 01, 2011, 09:18:57 AM »
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Saari Duniya Ke sitam Ek Taraf RakhKar Bhi,
Har Haal Mein Tujhe maine Sirf Pyaar Kiya

Kaun Kehta Hai Ke Mohabbat Dam Tod Deti Hai!!!
Har Kadam par khud Ko,Tujhpar Vaar Kiya

Sabne Hungama-e-Mehfil ke Maze Loote!!
Maine To Teri Tanhai Ka Bhi Satkaar Kiya

Kisi Manzil Ki Mujhe Koi Tamanna Kabhi Thi Bhi Nahi!!!
Saath Chalna Hi Zindagi hai,Yehi Maine Humesha Mere Yaar Kiya

Ruthne-manaane Ke Daur Se UbharKar Bhi Ab Yeh Naraazgi Kaisi!!!
 humne To Apni Zindagi hi Tujhpar Nisaar Kiya..

Chaand-Taare Tod Laana To Mere Bas Mein Nahi!!!
maine To Kharch Tumpar Sirf Apna Aitbaar Kiya

suna Hai Log Mohabbat mein Aaj Bhi Saboot Mangte Hai!!!
Sochta Hoon Maine Mohabbat Ki Yaa Koi Karobaar Kiya

Yaar "Khwaish" Dabi Awaaz mein Kyon Kehte Ho!!!
Ba-Buland kaho Naa Ke "HaaN Maine Pyaar Kiya..."
 
                   ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~

gud work.!
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«Reply #11 on: May 01, 2011, 11:07:22 AM »
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bht bht khoob khwaish ji....
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«Reply #12 on: May 01, 2011, 12:42:42 PM »
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bahot khoob khwaish ji.........

maja aa gaya padkar.........kitne ehsaas bhar diye is ek kalaam me apne......thts really cool...........

ese hi likhtey rahiye .one of ur best creation khwaish ji......
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«Reply #13 on: May 04, 2011, 02:28:13 PM »
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"Tanhai ka bhi satkar kiya"

"Mohobat ki ya koi karobar kiya"

"Tujhpe kharch sirf apna aetabaar kiya"

Dost, bahaut umda likha hai apne hamesha ki tarha..
Quoted lines toh behad dil kay kareeb rahi..
Jaise mere dil ki awaz ko sunkar kisi ne kagaz par utaar diya..
Dil dil se daad..
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Khush rahiye..!

Aapka bahut bahut Shukriya Bhai Rahim..Ek Bhai Hi Dusre Ke Dil Ki baat Likh sakta Hai..Yuhi Saath Rahiyega icon_flower

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«Reply #14 on: May 04, 2011, 02:43:17 PM »
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boht khoob likha hai khawaish ji
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