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«Reply #15 on: June 19, 2006, 12:15:22 PM » |
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tauba hain..aur hum samjhe aap kamaal dikha rahi hain..
chaliye fir bhi awesome...
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«Reply #16 on: June 19, 2006, 01:20:53 PM » |
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ji shukriya maine kuchh kiya hi nahi apne aap likha raha hai....bahut bahut shukriya honsla afzaai ka
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«Reply #17 on: June 27, 2006, 07:22:23 PM » |
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bichhati apni palaken tere pairon ke tale bhi main
jo tera saath milta doosari hi ban ke rahti main
tere darwaze pe main khud diya ban ke jala karti jo ye hota to hamdam baat koi aur hi hoti
tu mujhse roothne ka ek bhi pal chhant na pata main teri har khushi pe is tarah qurban ho jaati
hamara ghar hi phir ek bagh hota apni chahat ka jahaan ke har ik phool ka khwab hota usme rahne ka
na deewaren hi hotin ham indradhanush ko bula lete
vo dauda dauda aata dekhne is ghar ki khushiyon ko
meri nzmon hi me na tum jo meri zindagi me hote to main ek doosari hoti zindagi khushnuma hoti
magar tum khwab the mera to bas khwabo tak rah pae
na tum tak main pahunch paai na mujh tak tum pahunch paae
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«Reply #18 on: June 27, 2006, 07:24:53 PM » |
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tumhaari zid par
jo main banu qalm tumhari to kya tum likh paoge jo main mera anchal de dun us par kya likh paaoge khushboo se tum jhoom uthoge sara jag phir janega ham tum pas na aaen to hi ham tum kuchh likh paaenge varna yun hi baat badhegi ban ne lagenge afsane ham tum me jo rista hai bas tum jano ya ham jane par utrna paaenge ham beech dhar bah jaaenge main tumko yahan door khadi hi sada se dekhati rahti hun pas na aa main paaungi bas qismat hi hai kuchh aisi door khadi me kisi kinare hardam tumhe niharungi............
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«Reply #19 on: June 27, 2006, 07:28:31 PM » |
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vo kamra
ki is ghar ke kone me koi tasveer aise hai jahan se khushboo aati hai mohabbat ki zara use saaf to karna zara mujhko dikhana to ye chehra jaana sa kyun hai ise maine kahan dekha haan tere saath tha ye to kabhi tu bhi to hansti thi ye kamra bhi chahakta tha aawazen thin yahaan par bhi kabhi vo tumse kahta tha na jaane kya nahi maloom magar maine suna hai tum khikhilakar jab hansatin thin ye sab kab hua kaise hua chahe na batlaao kisi ko yaad karke ik pal ko tum bhi muskaao
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«Reply #20 on: June 27, 2006, 07:34:51 PM » |
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tum par shuru aur tum par khatm har soch hai meri main apne aap par kabhi juhunjhla bhi hun jati kya aur kahin kuchh nahi jo soch sakun main? kya aur kahin kuchh nahi jo dekhna chahun? tum chhae ho dil par mere baadal ki tarah hi barsoge bhi kabhi ya yunhi sochon me rahoge?
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«Reply #21 on: June 28, 2006, 12:09:30 PM » |
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very nice tabassum jiii
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«Reply #22 on: June 28, 2006, 07:21:56 PM » |
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shukriya bahut bahut sd ji
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«Reply #23 on: June 30, 2006, 11:40:10 AM » |
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samne tum the door kinare par kishti meri bin patwar ki mauj e dil se badhi ja rahi thi....................
na lahar hi rok paai meri vo shiksta kishti na bhanvar duba hi paya na zehan me koi bhi tha tere naam ke siva.............
pahunch paai jo tum tak to meri khush nasibi jo na pahunchun to mujhko bhool jaana.....
ki jaane kitane aise naam honge jo tum tak aa sake na vo sab meri tarah the vo sab gumnaam hain ab .........
bas ik tum ho chamkta vo sitara jo sadiyon se ab tak hai chamkta ye ab kya ilzaam sab tum pe lagaen ki hain sab hi teri chahat ke mare......
tujhe pana bane mera muqddar yehi ik soch mujhko har ghadi hai yehi ek soch mujhko har ghadi hai..................
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«Reply #24 on: June 30, 2006, 11:45:15 AM » |
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ye khwab tumhare kaise hain ki kuch jaane se lagte hain kya maine kabhi dekha hai inhe ye kyun apne se lagte hain tunko maloom ho batlaao ki mujhko to maaloom nahi main rehti bahut akeli hun koi khwab nahi koi soch nahi kuch achcha mujhe nahi lagta kuchh uljhi uljhi sochen hai kuchh gahre se sannate hain main beaawaz sadaaon si kab se tanha si bhatkati hun
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«Reply #25 on: June 30, 2006, 11:50:45 AM » |
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yaadon se rishta tod saken aisa to kabhi mumkin hi kahaan vo ham me aise samai hai ki jaise dhadkan is dil me hai jab koi kisi ki baat chali tab hamne tumko yaad kiya jab tanhaai me baithe hain dil ne phir tera naam liya ek hook si uthti rahti hai ik dard sa dil me jaari hai ye yaad hai teri ya tu bata koi la ilaj beemari hai
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«Reply #26 on: June 30, 2006, 03:27:53 PM » |
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yaadon se rishta tod saken aisa to kabhi mumkin hi kahaan vo ham me aise samai hai ki jaise dhadkan is dil me hai jab koi kisi ki baat chali tab hamne tumko yaad kiya jab tanhaai me baithe hain dil ne phir tera naam liya ek hook si uthti rahti hai ik dard sa dil me jaari hai ye yaad hai teri ya tu bata koi la ilaj beemari hai MashaALLAH..bahut khoob sis..keep it up
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«Reply #27 on: June 30, 2006, 06:37:14 PM » |
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thanx a lot sis 
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«Reply #28 on: July 01, 2006, 10:07:21 PM » |
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rang gulabi jab bhi dekha teri aankhen yaad aain pyari hain vo sach much itani jheel si inme gehraai
ik dora jo laal sa hai vo teri shararat kahta hai usase zara main dar jaati hun verna tu achcha lagta hai
bikhre se jo baal hain tere ik din inhen sanvaarungi teri shitaabi peshaani par ek nishaani rakhni hai
befikron si teri hansi teri kyun mujhko bahut lubhati hai hans kar jo tu dekhle mujhko saans meri jam jaati hai
tujhko hardam dil me chaha aankhon se to ghoora hai tujhko ye ahsaas nahi hai tu bas mera poora hai
meri sakhi se kyun poochha tha mujhko kya man bhaata hai vahi rang phir pahan ke aksar tu mere ghar aata hai
tujhko abhi hai dil me chaaha tujhko nahi bataya hai meri kitaaben palat palat ke tu jo dhoonda karta hai
vo to mere dil pe likha hai kagaz ki kya hasti hai meri himmat jis din hogi bas main tujhko de doongi
abhi to aankhen uthati nahi hain aur kisi din sochungi likhte likhte nazm ye aadhi kahin main uth kar zara gai
aaker dekha to tu baitha khush ho isko padhta hai.............................
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«Reply #29 on: July 02, 2006, 10:29:31 AM » |
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Yeh kya ho raha hain...Zara rest liya karte hain tabassum ji...Aap toh lagta hain, best form mein hain...Kya baat hain..HAts off to u
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