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main jo aankhon me teri khwab hun bankar rahti aaj tu jaan le maine bhi tujhe chaha hai meri aakhon ki kisi kajal ki zarurat kab hai ye teri yaad se sharma ke jo jhuk jaati hain mere haathon me jaane kyun na rachati hai hina ke tere haathon ki garmi se ye hain surkh bahut maine aanchal bhi to chere pe bar bar dala par tujhe dekh ke ud jata hai baadal ki tarah mere hamdam ye bata konsa singar karun mujhko milne ki hai jaldi kya intezaar karun
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«Reply #1 on: June 14, 2006, 10:14:05 PM » |
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kya khoob kahi tabassum ji wah wah wah
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«Reply #2 on: June 14, 2006, 11:43:33 PM » |
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tabassum ji aap ki bhatreen baat par aaraz hai
kyaa huaa teraa har ik roz mujhe Khat likhanaa aur Khat me.n dil-e-betaab kii haalat likhanaa
merii Khaatir shab-e-furqat me.n na sonaa teraa merii yaado.n me.n pareshaa.N saa honaa teraa aur phir Khat me.n shab-e-hijr kii baabat likhanaa kyaa huaa teraa har ik roz mujhe Khat likhanaa
vo sar-e-shaam Khayaalo.n me.n mere kho jaanaa aur phir Khud hii teraa sharm_saar ho jaanaa vo akele me.n mujhe pyaar bharaa Khat likhanaa kyaa huaa teraa har ik roz mujhe Khat likhanaa
kis liye to.D diye tuune sabhii ahad-e-vafaa kyaa hue vaade muhabbat ke bataa kuchh to bataa kis liye chho.D diyaa tuu ne mujhe Khat likhanaa kyaa huaa teraa har ik roz mujhe Khat likhanaa
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tabassum shakeel
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«Reply #3 on: June 15, 2006, 12:55:40 AM » |
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shukriya budhuji and bm ji arz kiya hai ki.........
mere hamdam tujhe khat likhe hain maine jab bhi sara din raah taki aas rahi khat ki mujhe main har khat me apna haal e dil bayan kiya vo mera raaton sote se chamak kar uthna vo har ek shaam der tak teri yun rah takna jaise toone kiya vaada sada nibhaya ho jaise tu saath raha ban ke mera saya ho main har roz nihara hai jab bhi khud ko lagta tha aaina ban gaya aankhen teri nazaren phir meri yunhi sharm se jhuk jaati thi jaise jab tu tha hua karti halat meri dil hai jalta mera reshm ke libason ko dekh kabhi pahna tha jinhe tujhko rijhane ke liye mere hamdam tu ye khat ka bahana leke meri maasoom mohbbat ka na mazaq bana khat likhun ya na likhun main to rhungi teri tu kahe ya na kahe main hi hun chahat teri
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tabassum shakeel
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«Reply #4 on: June 15, 2006, 08:10:20 PM » |
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mera mehboob to ik baadal hai chhaya hai yun mere vajood pe vo lekin vo kyun thahar nahi jaata har ghadi kyun vo mere saath nahi uski aawargi ka shikva hai par vahi cheez dil ko bhai hai mast baadal sa uska ud jaana pal me phir aaake mujhpe chha jaana aur ek intezaar de jaana ban chuka hai vo zidagi meri
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tabassum shakeel
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«Reply #5 on: June 17, 2006, 11:22:46 AM » |
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dil ke rishte se vo lagta hai yun mujhko apna jaise saalon se mere saath raha karta hai main use kaise bhulaun ke kaise yaad karun kabhi jo mujhse mile to main ye friyaad karun ban saka tu na jo mera to kyun hai dil me mere kya mujhe yun hi satane ki hai chahat teri.......
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«Reply #6 on: June 17, 2006, 01:29:03 PM » |
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asalam alikum ,bahut hi achai shayeri hai tabassum
her khamoshi ka matlab inkaar nahe hota
har shikast ka matlab haar nahe hota
keya howa agar main tum ko pa na saki
sirif panay ka naam peyar nahe hota
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«Reply #7 on: June 17, 2006, 09:52:48 PM » |
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Bohat khoob Tabassum, Blackmon & Abeera...
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«Reply #8 on: June 17, 2006, 10:33:20 PM » |
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Very nice every1 
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tabassum shakeel
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«Reply #9 on: June 18, 2006, 02:00:50 PM » |
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shukriya abeera ,aryan aur ds ji
mere hamdam ki baat karti rahun aur har pal use hi likhti rahun jisko dekha na maine barson se uski tasveer main banati hun
dhunle dhundle naqssh usake jo rah gae zahan me sada ke liye baad uske na dekha phir kuchh bhi nazren apni to bas jhuki hi rahin
saans chalti hai kyonki zinda hun dil ab mera kabhi dhadkta nahi vo to bas yaad leke baitha hai laakh kahdo kabhi ye hansto de
zindagi ki vo sari khushiyan gain sare rang hi bikhar gae mere aaj rangon ko shayri me bharun zindagi me to ab rang na rahe................
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«Reply #10 on: June 18, 2006, 03:25:05 PM » |
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good job all
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«Reply #11 on: June 18, 2006, 07:47:10 PM » |
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thanks
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«Reply #12 on: June 19, 2006, 10:41:45 AM » |
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excellent tabassum jiii...behtareenn..
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tabassum shakeel
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«Reply #13 on: June 19, 2006, 11:57:51 AM » |
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ji zarra navazi ka shukriya
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tabassum shakeel
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«Reply #14 on: June 19, 2006, 12:05:36 PM » |
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dil ke aangan me vo to rahta hai main bas usko hi dekha karti hun vo mujhe dekh le jo pal bhar ko main khilun jaise phool juhi ka
yahi khushbu to hai pasand use isase hi vo qareeb aaya tha par vo phir door kyun gaya mujhse kya kahun thi ye dastan hi aur
vo hai ab dil ke bagh me mere aur main dil me uske rahti hun jabhi palkon ko band karti hun saamne vo hi muskurata hai
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