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«Reply #30 on: July 02, 2006, 10:40:07 AM » |
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thanx for every word u wrote...ji ye rest hi hai ....baaqi cheezon se.........thanx a lot aapke aane se zara honsala bana rahta hai............
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«Reply #31 on: July 02, 2006, 12:58:21 PM » |
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mere khat vapas na karo
jo dil tumko diya ab tak tumhare pas hi hai
main tumse khat vapas le ke bolo kya karungi
jo tum louta sako vo pyare lamhe
tumhare saath jo kaate the maine
to mujhko chahiye vo sab ke sab hi
mera khat leke bolo kya karungi
jo hansna tha tumhari shokhiyon par
jo baaten tumne jab mujh se kahi thin
agar louta sako louta do mujhko
ki tanha main to ab ghut si gai hun
mujhe tum ek baar phir se pukaro
teri aawaz mujhko phir hai sunani
ki kya kah ke the tum mujhko bulate
zara aawaz do to yaad aae........
main phir khush ho ke tere paas aaun
vo bhula waqt phir se main dohraaun
kahan kagaz ka vo tukda kahan tum
bhala usko main leke kya karoongi.
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abeera
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«Reply #32 on: July 02, 2006, 03:36:50 PM » |
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asalam alikum tabasum bahut acha likha hai really nice
bikhri hai meri zaat use keh dena
kabhi mile use to yeh baat kehdena
woh saath tha to zamana tha humdum mera
magar ab koi nahin hai saathmeray use kehdena
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tabassum shakeel
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«Reply #33 on: July 02, 2006, 04:37:36 PM » |
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w/salam abeera nice to see u again......
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tabassum shakeel
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«Reply #34 on: July 02, 2006, 11:04:13 PM » |
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kagaz par rang
aise sare khwab likhugi
jo na poore ho pae
zindagi me na sahi
kagaz par rang bikherungi
apna apna badla hai ye
likhna koi likhna hai
kuchh hain tumhari yaaden bas
kuchh dard bas apna hai
sare din vo likhna hai
jab tumko maine yaad kiya
par nahi tumhara naam liya
sari baaten likhnaa hai
jo tum se main na kah paai
sari raaten likhni hain
jab sari raat na so paai
par jo likhdun to kya hoga
tum to isko padhte nahi
sare log hi padhte hain
bas ik tumko maaloom nahi
ik din vo himmat bhi karungi
tumko yahan bulaaungi
sara likha phir tum bhi padhna
main door kahin chhup jaaungi
tum jab tak aawaz na doge
paas nahi main aaungi
kagaz par likhte likhte ab
dil hai mera bhar sa gaya
tum aao to rang bharenge
ham kaagaz ke bahar bhi...........................
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shayar_dildaar
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«Reply #35 on: July 03, 2006, 10:49:59 AM » |
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excellent going
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tabassum shakeel
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«Reply #36 on: July 03, 2006, 10:52:57 AM » |
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shukriya aapke aane se zara honsla bana rahta hai
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tabassum shakeel
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«Reply #37 on: July 03, 2006, 08:22:10 PM » |
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jab se tumse baat na ki hai
ham to khud se nahi mile hain
tum jab kahte the kuch achcha
to ham bhi tab hans dete the
ab to hansna bhool rahe hain
tum the saath to dil bhi khush tha
tum se door ye ab chup chup hai
isko zara bahlana hoga
sirf tumhari yaadon se
phir jaisa ki tumne kaha tha
sab thik phir ho jaaega
bhool gae tum jaise hamko
tum kahte ho ham bhi vaise
bhool sakenge ahista ahista .........
par ye kaho aisa hoga na
sab kuchh thik phir ho jaega na
ham tumko phir bhulenge na
itna bas hamko batlado...............
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«Reply #38 on: July 04, 2006, 09:36:50 PM » |
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tum aae aur hamse mile to
aaj kuchh dil ko chain sa aaya
baat naki thi dil gum sum tha
aaj hai kuch araam sa aaya
ham bhi kya ab ham se rahen hain
lagta hai hain aapka saaya
aisa bhi kya hai ji tum me
soch ke dekha samajh na aaya
saari duniya ek taraf kyun
saath aapka dil ko bhaya................
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«Reply #39 on: July 04, 2006, 09:48:11 PM » |
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Gud Job Tabbassum ji
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«Reply #40 on: July 04, 2006, 10:28:19 PM » |
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excellent stuff...Tabassum jii aap sirf likhte jaye...Aap ache likhte hain aur aap ka hausla afzai hum karte rahenge...
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«Reply #41 on: July 04, 2006, 11:12:03 PM » |
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thanx bs ji
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«Reply #42 on: July 04, 2006, 11:15:53 PM » |
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bahut bahut shukriya sd ji is sunsaan me kabhi kabhi dar lagne lagta hai aap ki taareef se thodi himmat rahti hai
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«Reply #43 on: July 05, 2006, 03:36:28 AM » |
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:lol: ..acha tha!!! bahut bahut shukriya sd ji is sunsaan me kabhi kabhi dar lagne lagta hai aap ki taareef se thodi himmat rahti hai |
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«Reply #44 on: July 05, 2006, 09:20:46 AM » |
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:lol: :lol: :lol:
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