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«Reply #45 on: July 05, 2006, 09:28:14 AM » |
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shaakhon par parinde chahake hain baagon me baharen aai hain khushboo se chaman phir jhoomta hai ek aahat teri aai hai
dil sahma sahma rahta hai ik dar sa bana hi rahta hai tum aae nahi to kya hoga is soch ne barq girai hai
saansen meri tham jaati hain ik aahat teri sunane ko dil tham tham ke dhadkta hai kya teri sada phir aai hai
jaane kab tujhko dekhungi jaane kab main mil paaungi ik muddat baad tujhe dekha chehare pe udasi chhai hai
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«Reply #46 on: July 06, 2006, 09:46:05 AM » |
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«Reply #47 on: July 07, 2006, 11:39:03 PM » |
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dil jab bhi mera dhadka hai isane bas tera naam liya jab saan chali hai meri to bas jake tujhko choo aai
main jaanti hun tu janta hai chahat se judi hai rusvaai phir kya mere bas me hai tujhko main na yaad karun haan koshish si ek jaari hai
ab dekh tu main kya soche hun main door rahungi tujhse ab tu mujhko yaad nahi karna ik dukh se bane is rishte ko ham jaldi hi dafna denge phir main hun yahaan aur tu hai vahaan ik dooje ko na sada denge ab bhool bhi ja ki main kaha tu khwab hai meri aankhon ka main bhool rahi hun tune kaha singar tujhe kuchh pasand nahi aur yaad hai kaya tha tune kaha par ye baaten maine kyunki mujhe tujhko yaad nahi karna aur tera naam nahi lena...........................
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«Reply #48 on: July 09, 2006, 12:14:52 PM » |
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tujhko dekha aur jaana hai ek tu hi achcha lagta hai aur isaki saza hi paai hai sou sou gham sah ke baithe the ik chot nai phir paai hai taqdeer badlane nikale the taqdeer hami pe hansati hai tere shikve bas tu jaane hamko to kisi se gila nahi ek aadat si hai sahne ki chup rahne ki aur likhne ki jo likhna band main kardungi to saan bhi na chal paaegi koi isko jab kahe shayari chonk si main kyon padti hun ye shayri hai ya mera dil isko main jaan na paati hun jo sahma sada se rahta hai ik dar sa bana hi rahta hai ab aane wala kya gham hai iska andesha rahta hai sari sachchai jhooth bani sara achcha hi bura hua apni bas aisi qismat hai achcha na kabhi kuchh ho paya yaadon ke safar me ham tanha ye saari duniya begani mujhko achcha kuchh lagta nahi shayed ye ik beemari hai jinko ye jahan hai achcha laga unko ye jahaan mubarak ho hamko to samjh kuchh aata nahi ye hamko kabhi achcha na laga jab koi bhi achcha hamko laga tab bas vo peechhe choota hai ham aage badhe marzi se nahi ki ye bhi mere haath kahaan bas haath me hai to ek lakeer jo mujh par hansati rahti hai kahti hai mujhe ki "naam se kya tum samjhi tabassum ban logi" maine to rakha ye naam nahi mujhko hai mila bas apno se par naam se bas kya hota hai sou dard bhi paae apno se main naam badal lun sochati hun to haath ki lakeer phir hansati hai main saath rahungi har dam tere chaahe tu koi naam rakhe aakhir ko main hans padti hun sab choot chuke jo apne the par ye hi lakeer to saath me hai ab isko mujhko chahna hai phir dekhti hun kab tak rahti hai haathon me saathi ban ke par gar ye gai ab chhod mujhe phir se mujhe ik dukh hoga ye ek silsila jaari hai jo kabhi khatm nahi hoga..............................
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«Reply #49 on: July 13, 2006, 01:31:57 PM » |
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dard likhna hame nahi aaya tumne hamko na ye kyon sikhlaya ham ne jo bhi likha fizul raha jab tujhi ko likha nahi bhaya har tarah se tujhe manaya hai aaj khud par hi gussa ayaa hai kya bane ham faqat isi ke liye jo bhi chahe hame rula bas de aansu ab khushq hain aur dil tanha ik naye ham safar ko jaaten hain rahbaron ne jo chot ham ko di usase hamne sabaq bas seekha hai ab na darwaaza khulega ye kisi dastak se main rahungi yahaan tanha teri yaaden lekar..........
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«Reply #50 on: July 14, 2006, 01:13:38 AM » |
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Bohat hi khoob Tabassum.... Zabardast!
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«Reply #51 on: July 14, 2006, 08:28:56 AM » |
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bahut bahut shukriya aryan 
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«Reply #52 on: July 15, 2006, 09:55:16 AM » |
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jaane kya baat tujhme aisi hai hamne dekha tujhe tu achcha laga yun hamari na aisi aadat hai mud ham dekhte kisi ki taraf tere dil ne thi di sada koi hamne jo mud ke bas tujhe dekha ik vo din hai aur aaj ka din meri nazron ne na phir kuchh dekha teri tasveer meri aankhon me dil pe hain naqsh teri baaton ke rooh hai qed teri ulfat me kaisi ik zindagi hai ye meri?
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«Reply #53 on: July 17, 2006, 12:37:04 PM » |
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wah tabassum ji bahut hi umdaa likhti hain aap...
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«Reply #54 on: July 17, 2006, 12:40:49 PM » |
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thanx gesu aap khud kamaal ka likhtin hain 
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«Reply #55 on: July 19, 2006, 07:34:09 PM » |
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hamadam hi mila aisa likhna hame pada chaha hi usane aisa likhna hame pada nazaren thi jaise jaadu baaten thin jaise khushboo hansata tha aise jaise sou phool khil uthen hon usko na jo likhun main to shayri hi kaisi usko na jo main sochun to zindagi hi kaisi baaton ke rang touba ik silsila hi tha vo rahta hai dil me aise bas ghar hai ye usika jabjab vo mujh se rootha maine hi tha manaya ki roothe bhi vo hamse to hamko hi tha dekhe jaane tha koi jaadu ya tha vo mera hamdam bas sochati un usko aur rahtin hun main gum sum
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«Reply #56 on: July 20, 2006, 08:38:49 PM » |
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Good One Tabassum....
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«Reply #57 on: July 20, 2006, 08:59:36 PM » |
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shukriya aryan
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«Reply #58 on: July 22, 2006, 10:03:01 AM » |
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jaane kya baat hai unme jo ham unhe dekhen bheed me bhi jab vo hon to bas hame dekhen kabhi ho jaaen vo khafa jo koi hame dekkhe kabhi naraz hon bas yun ham samajhte nahi samajh ke ab kya karen kuch ki ham to unke hain ye illaten vo hi palen ki ham to ukke hain............
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«Reply #59 on: July 22, 2006, 11:29:43 AM » |
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Pyar ke raste itne kantile kyu hai? dil ke darmiyan itne fasle kyu hai? pyar to hai kudrat ka anupam tohfa. phir iske kadrdan duniya me nahi milte kyu hai?
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