meri har rooh mein tum ho

by Gesu on October 20, 2005, 05:36:28 AM
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humare dil ka haal hai en Lavzo mein.
aapke liye jazbaat hai  en lavzon mein
Tanha raatoin ki khamoshi hai en Lavzo mein,
Tere aahat ki ek aas chupi hai en Lavzo mein.  
Aapke hone ki mehak hai in lavzon mein
Tumhara mujhmein yeh rang hai lavzon mein,
Dhadkanon ki pukar hai en  lavzon mein
 Pal-pal mein hua ekraar hai en Lavzo mein.
Tera mera takraar hai ein lavzo mein,
 Tanha raatoin ki tanhaee hai en Lavzo mein.
Jo baat hum keh na sakenge tumse,
Woh afsana bayaan hai en Lavzo mein
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«Reply #1 on: October 20, 2005, 05:58:05 AM »
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Khub likha hain gesu tumne. Really liked it.
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«Reply #2 on: October 20, 2005, 06:02:30 AM »
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Wah gesu bhai khub likha, aacha laga bahut. JAi Shri krihna.
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«Reply #3 on: October 20, 2005, 08:11:04 AM »
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thanks dildaar ji and nirbhay thanks a lot
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«Reply #4 on: October 21, 2005, 06:48:15 AM »
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Gesu i expect u to write more frequently.

Dil ka haal labzo mein bayan karna mushkil hain,
Ishq mein dard ka qahaar jo zulmi hain.

Tanhai ki tum baat karte ho,
Dhadkano ki pukar ko bhi tum sun lete ho,

Unke tazveer ko iss dil se kaise mitau,
Kambhaqt iss mohabbat k dard ko labzo mein kaise bathlau.
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«Reply #5 on: October 21, 2005, 07:43:42 AM »
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thanks likhne ki aadatt to hai but yahaan aisa lagta hai ke shayad mazak na bane kyon ki kuch bhi dil mein aata hai to likh deti hoon.

Dekhte rahe har pal tumhe;
Behte rahe har pal tum mein;
Paate rahein tumko har pal;
Khote rahe khud ko har pal;
Aankhon se aankhen milti hai jab jab;
Saanson se saanse judti hai tab tab;
Chein ki kadi judti hai har pal;
Betaabi ghate hue bhi badti hai har pal
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«Reply #6 on: October 21, 2005, 10:50:43 AM »
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kese bayan karu meri mohabbat ko kuch lafzo me,
kese jatau mere dard-e-dil ko kuch lafzo me.
na kar yu zid aye mere dil-e-dilbar,
k bit jayegi ye hasin zindgi in lafzo ko kehne me.
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«Reply #7 on: March 03, 2010, 04:49:53 AM »
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humare dil ka haal hai en Lavzo mein.
aapke liye jazbaat hai  en lavzon mein
Tanha raatoin ki khamoshi hai en Lavzo mein,
Tere aahat ki ek aas chupi hai en Lavzo mein.   
Aapke hone ki mehak hai in lavzon mein
Tumhara mujhmein yeh rang hai lavzon mein,
Dhadkanon ki pukar hai en  lavzon mein
 Pal-pal mein hua ekraar hai en Lavzo mein.
Tera mera takraar hai ein lavzo mein,
 Tanha raatoin ki tanhaee hai en Lavzo mein.
Jo baat hum keh na sakenge tumse,
Woh afsana bayaan hai en Lavzo mein
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