mohabbat rooh mein samaayi ho jaise...

by pallavi on June 07, 2005, 05:40:06 AM
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tere chhoone se ehsaas hua hai,,
bahut kuchh baaki tha zindgi mein abhi,,
ek aahat se teri dil mein,,
jeene ki tamannna fir se laut aayi ho jaise...

har us manzar ki chah hai mujhe,,
jis lamhe tum mere saath ho,,
bekhabar si hoti hu jab sehlaate ho baalo ko,,
zindgi saari un lamho me simat aayi ho jaise...

madhosh ho jaati hu is kadar main,,
jab dekhte ho aankho me tadap ke tum..
kaampte hain lub bhi teri har baat ke saath,,
dil mein nahi mohabbat rooh mein samaayi ho jaise..
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«Reply #1 on: June 07, 2005, 05:54:16 AM »
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very nice  pallavi




Kahte hai Mohabbat me need nahi aati,
Kash koi hum se be mohabbat kare
Humay need bahut atti hai.
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«Reply #2 on: June 07, 2005, 09:50:58 AM »
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tere chhoone se ehsaas hua hai,,
bahut kuchh baaki tha zindgi mein abhi,,
ek aahat se teri dil mein,,
jeene ki tamannna fir se laut aayi ho jaise...

har us manzar ki chah hai mujhe,,
jis lamhe tum mere saath ho,,
bekhabar si hoti hu jab sehlaate ho baalo ko,,
zindgi saari un lamho me simat aayi ho jaise...

madhosh ho jaati hu is kadar main,,
jab dekhte ho aankho me tadap ke tum..
kaampte hain lub bhi teri har baat ke saath,,
dil mein nahi mohabbat rooh mein samaayi ho jaise..


jannat ka surur paya tha maine kabhi teri aankho me,...

lakin ab ye nafrat ki aag hai kaisi,.....

hawao ko jhulte hue dekha tha maine teri baho me,....

lakin aab ye ruswai mujhse kaisi,.....

dekha tha tufa maine kabhi tere pyar ka,.....

ab ye tere pyar me thandi aag hai kaisi,......

nahi kerti ho mujhe pyar to mujhe thukra do tum,...

magar tumhari aapni zindigi se ye ruswai kaisi,.......
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«Reply #3 on: June 07, 2005, 04:56:44 PM »
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very nice  pallavi




Kahte hai Mohabbat me need nahi aati,
Kash koi hum se be mohabbat kare
Humay need bahut atti hai.

 thanx mr. bose..
 heheheehe
 aur ye kya likh diya... neend ke liye ishk.. lolzzz..wahh
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«Reply #4 on: June 07, 2005, 05:00:08 PM »
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tere chhoone se ehsaas hua hai,,
bahut kuchh baaki tha zindgi mein abhi,,
ek aahat se teri dil mein,,
jeene ki tamannna fir se laut aayi ho jaise...

har us manzar ki chah hai mujhe,,
jis lamhe tum mere saath ho,,
bekhabar si hoti hu jab sehlaate ho baalo ko,,
zindgi saari un lamho me simat aayi ho jaise...

madhosh ho jaati hu is kadar main,,
jab dekhte ho aankho me tadap ke tum..
kaampte hain lub bhi teri har baat ke saath,,
dil mein nahi mohabbat rooh mein samaayi ho jaise..


jannat ka surur paya tha maine kabhi teri aankho me,...

lakin ab ye nafrat ki aag hai kaisi,.....

hawao ko jhulte hue dekha tha maine teri baho me,....

lakin aab ye ruswai mujhse kaisi,.....

dekha tha tufa maine kabhi tere pyar ka,.....

ab ye tere pyar me thandi aag hai kaisi,......

nahi kerti ho mujhe pyar to mujhe thukra do tum,...

magar tumhari aapni zindigi se ye ruswai kaisi,.......



 wowwww... bahut khoob tushaar ji... very well written... sach yahaan ek se badh ke  ek shayar hain... thanx a lot for sharing ur expression wid us...
take care
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«Reply #5 on: June 08, 2005, 05:30:56 PM »
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tere chhoone se ehsaas hua hai,,
bahut kuchh baaki tha zindgi mein abhi,,
ek aahat se teri dil mein,,
jeene ki tamannna fir se laut aayi ho jaise...

har us manzar ki chah hai mujhe,,
jis lamhe tum mere saath ho,,
bekhabar si hoti hu jab sehlaate ho baalo ko,,
zindgi saari un lamho me simat aayi ho jaise...

madhosh ho jaati hu is kadar main,,
jab dekhte ho aankho me tadap ke tum..
kaampte hain lub bhi teri har baat ke saath,,
dil mein nahi mohabbat rooh mein samaayi ho jaise..


again beautiful work Pallavi ji :D

I love 2 read ur work,u write soo well.
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«Reply #6 on: June 11, 2005, 06:34:59 AM »
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tere chhoone se ehsaas hua hai,,
bahut kuchh baaki tha zindgi mein abhi,,
ek aahat se teri dil mein,,
jeene ki tamannna fir se laut aayi ho jaise...

har us manzar ki chah hai mujhe,,
jis lamhe tum mere saath ho,,
bekhabar si hoti hu jab sehlaate ho baalo ko,,
zindgi saari un lamho me simat aayi ho jaise...

madhosh ho jaati hu is kadar main,,
jab dekhte ho aankho me tadap ke tum..
kaampte hain lub bhi teri har baat ke saath,,
dil mein nahi mohabbat rooh mein samaayi ho jaise..


again beautiful work Pallavi ji :D

I love 2 read ur work,you write soo well.

 thanx for appreciating me nidhi.. really nice to c ur reply
 keep smiling like this only..
 take care
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«Reply #7 on: June 11, 2005, 07:01:08 AM »
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wow kafi achaa likha pallavi ji and tushar.......very nice.....
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«Reply #8 on: June 11, 2005, 07:11:42 AM »
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tere chhoone se ehsaas hua hai,,
bahut kuchh baaki tha zindgi mein abhi,,
ek aahat se teri dil mein,,
jeene ki tamannna fir se laut aayi ho jaise...

har us manzar ki chah hai mujhe,,
jis lamhe tum mere saath ho,,
bekhabar si hoti hu jab sehlaate ho baalo ko,,
zindgi saari un lamho me simat aayi ho jaise...

madhosh ho jaati hu is kadar main,,
jab dekhte ho aankho me tadap ke tum..
kaampte hain lub bhi teri har baat ke saath,,
dil mein nahi mohabbat rooh mein samaayi ho jaise..


very nice and true words. pallavi

zindgi simt gaee
un hansee palo mein
jo bitayee humne
tumhare saath mai
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«Reply #9 on: June 11, 2005, 07:23:39 AM »
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thX all of them ,.........


or plZ aagar aap mere dost hai to mera thX accept met kariye ga ,..

kyuki friends k bich thX or sorry k liye koi jagah nahi,.....
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«Reply #10 on: June 11, 2005, 10:24:10 AM »
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bahoot khoob dosto .. well nice pallavi... kya baat hai tushaar..
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«Reply #11 on: June 11, 2005, 11:04:04 AM »
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bahot  khoob   pallavi  .....................tushar...................
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«Reply #12 on: June 12, 2005, 06:37:46 AM »
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ohhh myy godddddd...... Usual Smile  so many ppl like me.. i mean poem...heheheh thanx a lotttt to alll of uuu.... & its  going so nice to be wid all of u ............ always keep smling..
 take care
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