"Nazar"

by vimmi singh on January 07, 2013, 08:39:54 AM
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नज़र ही नज़र से बसे थे तुम नज़र में
लब ही ना खुले सब कह जाते थे हम नज़र से
सुखे मन की व्यथा मेरे दिल की कथा
तुम ने पढ़ लिया  फिर जाने किस नज़र से
 
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Nazar hi nazar se base the tum nazar me
Lab hi na khule sab kah jaate the hum nazar se
Sukhe mann ki vyatha, mere dil ki katha
Tum ne padh liya ,  fir jaane kis nazar se
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«Reply #1 on: January 07, 2013, 08:50:35 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: January 07, 2013, 08:52:37 AM »
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नज़र ही नज़र से बसे थे तुम नज़र में
लब ही ना खुले सब कह जाते थे हम नज़र से
सुखे मन की व्यथा मेरे दिल की कथा
तुम ने पढ़ लिया  फिर जाने किस नज़र से
 
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Nazar hi nazar se base the tum nazar me
Lab hi na khule sab kah jaate the hum nazar se
Sukhe mann ki vyatha, mere dil ki katha
Tum ne padh liya ,  fir jaane kis nazar se



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«Reply #3 on: January 07, 2013, 08:54:38 AM »
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bahoot khoob kha vimmiji dhero dad
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«Reply #4 on: January 07, 2013, 09:00:56 AM »
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waah boht khub vimi ji boht khub
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«Reply #5 on: January 07, 2013, 11:00:10 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob vimmijee
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«Reply #6 on: January 07, 2013, 11:08:13 AM »
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thank you saini sir.....  Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: January 07, 2013, 12:03:29 PM »
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नज़र ही नज़र से बसे थे तुम नज़र में
लब ही ना खुले सब कह जाते थे हम नज़र से
सुखे मन की व्यथा मेरे दिल की कथा
तुम ने पढ़ लिया  फिर जाने किस नज़र से
 
         -.-.-.-.-.-.

Nazar hi nazar se base the tum nazar me
Lab hi na khule sab kah jaate the hum nazar se
Sukhe mann ki vyatha, mere dil ki katha
Tum ne padh liya ,  fir jaane kis nazar se


kya kahne vimmi.............!
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«Reply #8 on: January 07, 2013, 12:06:09 PM »
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नज़र ही नज़र से बसे थे तुम नज़र में
लब ही ना खुले सब कह जाते थे हम नज़र से
सुखे मन की व्यथा मेरे दिल की कथा
तुम ने पढ़ लिया  फिर जाने किस नज़र से
 
         -.-.-.-.-.-.

Nazar hi nazar se base the tum nazar me
Lab hi na khule sab kah jaate the hum nazar se
Sukhe mann ki vyatha, mere dil ki katha
Tum ne padh liya ,  fir jaane kis nazar se


ati sundar
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«Reply #9 on: January 07, 2013, 12:11:21 PM »
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very very niceeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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«Reply #10 on: January 07, 2013, 01:47:40 PM »
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thank you qalb ji....  Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: January 07, 2013, 01:52:41 PM »
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«Reply #12 on: January 07, 2013, 02:04:49 PM »
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Good work but way to go girl, you still have to improve a lot. Keep them coming.
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«Reply #13 on: January 08, 2013, 05:54:39 AM »
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bahut khoob vimmi ji, dhero dad
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bahoot khoob kha vimmiji dhero dad

bahut shukriya Azad Mishra ji........
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