pyar ki barish.................

by ranjana on April 22, 2006, 05:35:45 PM
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chandni ki barish mein naha kar.......
ham dono rahe pyar ki barish mein khoye........
teri ungaliya khelti rahi mere balo se .......
ham dono raat ko shabnam ki oas par soye........

teri saanso mein , tujh mein kho kar janae jaana ......
kal raat ham bahut der tak roye..........

ek ghunt ek saans mein pee le mujhko.......
kya pata fir yeh sama yun meherbaan na hoye

teri saanso mein, tuj mein kho kar .......
ham dono rahe pyar ki barish mein khoye..........
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«Reply #1 on: April 22, 2006, 07:16:34 PM »
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nice...
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«Reply #2 on: April 23, 2006, 02:36:34 AM »
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very nice... ranjana...

bheege honge chand ke barish mein nah kar...
par chand ko kyon bula lete ho...?woh toh ghayal hain..
teri ada dekhkar... khud jal jati hai...
aur tumhe aisa ek pal de deti hain...
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«Reply #3 on: April 23, 2006, 06:54:36 AM »
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shukriya.......
mazid.mrkotian........and sweetiepie........

aapne jo lines likhi woh bhi bahut khubsurat hai...........

with best wishes

ranjana
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«Reply #4 on: April 23, 2006, 05:17:12 PM »
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har shaam hum par yun hi mehrbaan hogi.
tere mere pyaar ki baarish humesa yunhi barsegi.

bahut sundar kahte hai aap Majid ji......

ranju
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«Reply #5 on: April 23, 2006, 05:31:53 PM »
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Gud JOb Ranjana ji and Majid bhai always gr8888

Pyar ki baarish me bheeg kar aaj hum jhoomne lage hain....
Hoke tere nashe me choor tere nishaan dhoondne lage hain...!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #6 on: April 23, 2006, 05:47:31 PM »
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tere lavzon kee muhabaat ko choom kar
hum to rahe tere daaman mein sooye
tere baal kartey they kuch iss tarah sargaroshi
fhir hum jaagtey rahey aaur tum sooye

tere pahlu mein, teri bahoon mein aye jaan-e-tamana
hum dinn bhar raat samjh kar sooye

sarr se lekar paun takk kuch iss tarah chu lu tumhein
fhir harr baar tu mujhko dekhar wahi khwaab dekhne sooye

uss barish ki raat mein aaye haseen
tum meri, mai teri dono ek dujhe bahoon mein rahe lipatey
ke uske baad jabb bhi barsa baadal madhosh hokar
harr shab hum teri yaad mein Roye!!!
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«Reply #7 on: April 24, 2006, 03:21:55 AM »
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tere lavzon kee muhabaat ko choom kar
hum to rahe tere daaman mein sooye
tere baal kartey they kuch iss tarah sargaroshi
fhir hum jaagtey rahey aaur tum sooye

tere pahlu mein, teri bahoon mein aye jaan-e-tamana
hum dinn bhar raat samjh kar sooye

sarr se lekar paun takk kuch iss tarah chu lu tumhein
fhir harr baar tu mujhko dekhar wahi khwaab dekhne sooye

uss barish ki raat mein aaye haseen
tum meri, mai teri dono ek dujhe bahoon mein rahe lipatey
ke uske baad jabb bhi barsa baadal madhosh hokar
harr shab hum teri yaad mein Roye!!!

WAH!!!!!!!!!
mera likha hua laga ki jaise mukmal ho gaya ............
bahut sundar likha aapne..........Nirbhay

with love

ranjana
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«Reply #8 on: April 24, 2006, 03:27:19 AM »
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Pyar ki baarish me bheeg kar aaj hum jhoomne lage hain....
Hoke tere nashe me choor tere nishaan dhoondne lage hain...!!!!!!!!
 
 
thanks shayaar ji............very nice lines.......


with love

ranjana
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«Reply #9 on: April 24, 2006, 03:57:45 AM »
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Thanks RanJu and please keep writing!!
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«Reply #10 on: April 24, 2006, 02:23:48 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob NIRBHAY JI, BADNAAM JI, MAJID BHAI, MRKOTIANS JI.. sab ne acha likha hai..
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«Reply #11 on: April 24, 2006, 02:30:41 PM »
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chandni ki barish mein naha kar.......
ham dono rahe pyar ki barish mein khoye........
teri ungaliya khelti rahi mere balo se .......
ham dono raat ko shabnam ki oas par soye........

teri saanso mein , tujh mein kho kar janae jaana ......
kal raat ham bahut der tak roye..........

ek ghunt ek saans mein pee le mujhko.......
kya pata fir yeh sama yun meherbaan na hoye

teri saanso mein, tuj mein kho kar .......
ham dono rahe pyar ki barish mein khoye..........


RANJANA JI aapne behad khubsoorat likha hai... kamaal ka likha hai .. very nice.. aur aapka YOINDIA par swagat hai......

Wo chandni ki barish humen yaad rahegi,
yeh zindgi me mere, meri saugat rahegi.....

wo jo anguliyon se khele hum teri zulfon se,
wo zulfon ki ghata, mohabbat ki phir barish karegi.....

meri saanson ko jo, apni saanson se mahakaya tha,
yeh mahak meri maut ke baad bhi mere sath rahegi.....

ek ghoont, ek saans me kaise pee loon main tujhe,
meri chahat ke samundar me tu har dam sath rahegi..

hum tum kho chuke hain, is pyar me is kadar,
ki chahat ki duniya me, jodi humari aasman chooegi....
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«Reply #12 on: April 24, 2006, 04:57:32 PM »
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Wo chandni ki barish humen yaad rahegi,
yeh zindgi me mere, meri saugat rahegi.....

wo jo anguliyon se khele hum teri zulfon se,
wo zulfon ki ghata, mohabbat ki phir barish karegi.....

meri saanson ko jo, apni saanson se mahakaya tha,
yeh mahak meri maut ke baad bhi mere sath rahegi.....

ek ghoont, ek saans me kaise pee loon main tujhe,
meri chahat ke samundar me tu har dam sath rahegi..

hum tum kho chuke hain, is pyar me is kadar,
ki chahat ki duniya me, jodi humari aasman chooegi....
 
 
wow aap sab log toh kamal hain.........meri poem itni romantic mujhe kabhi nahi kagi jitni aapke is kalam ke baad lag rahi hai .........

great!!!!!!!!!!

shukriya

with love

ranju
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«Reply #13 on: May 12, 2006, 03:26:02 AM »
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sawan ki pehali padi jab fooharen
toh sajan tum yaad aaye
thandi chali jab purvaai .......
toh us pawan ke jhanko mein
kshuhbu tumhari aaye...
jab koyal ne kuke lagaai
toh mere dil ke taar bhi
bas tere pyar ka hi sangeet sunaye
in hi mast fooharon, hawaon ki tarah
aisa lagata hai mujhko .......
sajan tum ho meri baahon mein samaye..........
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«Reply #14 on: May 12, 2006, 09:41:35 AM »
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gud work all...
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