"" sachhi Mohabbat "" :):) 'nir'

by nirala on February 02, 2011, 07:20:11 AM
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wo zakhm pe zakhm diye jate he
hum b has has kar liye jate he

wo kabi girgit ki tarah sawar jate he
unke har rng me hum b dekho rang hi jate he

apni makkari pr wafa ka ik prda b wo lgate he
hum b sharafat ka dhong rachate he

istemal wo khud ka hi hrdum krte rahte he
hmne b batlaya ki bs unpar hi mrte he

pyar ke khel me wo nadanipan diklate he
hum b to janaab naye khiladi sa ban jate he

Sachhi mohabat ka Nir ehsaas wo jatate hain
unke hi yaaro sang hum bhi dosti apni nibhate hain
Usual SmileUsual Smile
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«Reply #1 on: February 02, 2011, 08:35:09 AM »
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Quote from: nirala on February 02, 2011, 07:20:11 AM
wo zakhm pe zakhm diye jate he
hum b has has kar liye jate he

wo kabi girgit ki tarah sawar jate he
unke har rng me hum b dekho rang hi jate he

apni makkari pr wafa ka ik prda b wo lgate he
hum b sharafat ka dhong rachate he

istemal wo khud ka hi hrdum krte rahte he
hmne b batlaya ki bs unpar hi mrte he

pyar ke khel me wo nadanipan diklate he
hum b to janaab naye khiladi sa ban jate he

Sachhi mohabat ka Nir ehsaas wo jatate hain
unke hi yaaro sang hum bhi dosti apni nibhate hain
Usual SmileUsual Smile

Matlaa bahut khoob likha hai aapne ... dil se daad !!!!!!!!!
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nirala
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«Reply #2 on: February 02, 2011, 08:47:43 AM »
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Thanx Naresh ji lekin ek baat bataiye --ye Matla kya hota hai ??
mujhe nahi pata plzz batao aap
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thanx
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manzil-e-ishq
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«Reply #3 on: February 02, 2011, 12:25:27 PM »
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nice lines nirala ji.....
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«Reply #4 on: February 02, 2011, 12:39:55 PM »
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Nirala ji bahut khoobsurati se likha hai.
the first 2 lines are very very nice.........
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«Reply #5 on: February 02, 2011, 12:45:05 PM »
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bahut bahut sukriya Manzil ji
aur Suresh ji aapka bhi teh dil se dhanyabaad
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thanx
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«Reply #6 on: February 02, 2011, 12:52:40 PM »
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MOVED TO APPROPRIATE SECTION!

YOINDIA MONITOR!

THANX!
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«Reply #7 on: February 02, 2011, 12:53:29 PM »
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bahut khoob nirala ji...
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manjum
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«Reply #8 on: February 03, 2011, 09:11:33 AM »
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wah niralaji... bahut khub...

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«Reply #9 on: February 03, 2011, 09:32:40 AM »
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thanx BBL ji--
aapne bhi mujhe move kar dia Usual Smile
mai jahan tahan post kar deta hun aajkal.
Manju aapka bhi bahut saara sukriya
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«Reply #10 on: February 03, 2011, 11:41:38 AM »
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Nirala ji ,
           aapki kai racha padha maine ......aapki soch bahut achhi lagi ....aap jo bhi likhte ho sadgi se bayan kar dete ho ......apni kalam ko aap bar bar padhiye .....mujhe yakeen hai aap jald hi behtareen tahreer kah paoge

khuda aapki kalam ko aur noor bakshe

DuaoN ke saath
ijazat
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«Reply #11 on: February 03, 2011, 11:48:16 AM »
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Sunder bhaav...mast shabd...pyaari kavitaa.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Quote from: nirala on February 02, 2011, 07:20:11 AM
wo zakhm pe zakhm diye jate he
hum b has has kar liye jate he

wo kabi girgit ki tarah sawar jate he
unke har rng me hum b dekho rang hi jate he

apni makkari pr wafa ka ik prda b wo lgate he
hum b sharafat ka dhong rachate he

istemal wo khud ka hi hrdum krte rahte he
hmne b batlaya ki bs unpar hi mrte he

pyar ke khel me wo nadanipan diklate he
hum b to janaab naye khiladi sa ban jate he

Sachhi mohabat ka Nir ehsaas wo jatate hain
unke hi yaaro sang hum bhi dosti apni nibhate hain
Usual SmileUsual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: February 03, 2011, 12:01:44 PM »
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Quote from: nirala on February 02, 2011, 08:47:43 AM
Thanx Naresh ji lekin ek baat bataiye --ye Matla kya hota hai ??
mujhe nahi pata plzz batao aap
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thanx
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matla kisi bhi ghazal nuzm ka pahla 2mishra ko kahte haiN.....
jaise.......aapki tareeh ka yeh 2 mishra (lines)
wo zakhm pe zakhm diye jate he
hum b has has kar liye jate he
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«Reply #13 on: February 03, 2011, 06:13:12 PM »
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aapka bahut bahut sukriya Tamanna ji---aapne mujhe matla ka matlab batlaya Usual Smile
thanku ji--
aur haan aapne kaha ki mai aur achha likh paunga agr khud ko baar baar padhu !!
lekin mai to khud ka sirf ek baar likhta hu direct fir kabhi nhi padhta Usual Smile
wese bhi jo achha likhe wo fir kaahe ka nirala !!
hahaha
aapka sukriya ji aapki baat maane ki kosis karunga.
achha banna kise pasand nahi!!
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thanx
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«Reply #14 on: February 05, 2011, 02:45:21 PM »
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Bahut Khub Nirala JI
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