Tamanna-e-Dil.......

by punam on May 26, 2008, 02:29:02 PM
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«Reply #30 on: May 29, 2008, 08:02:36 PM »
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Tulooi-e-Shams ke sang unka intazaar main karti hun
Ghuroob-e-shams dekh kar soch men pad jaati hun...

kitna waqt guzra maloom nahin bas sochti rati hun...
unke khayaalon men khud ko bhula baitthi hun...

kaise hain woh chand ko dekh unka haal puchhti hun
kya laaye ho koi sandesh hawa se puchhti hun..

milne ki tamanna se bas yun jeeye jaati hun
dur se hi sahi woh khush hai bas yehi jaan.na chahti hun...
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Pooja
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«Reply #31 on: May 29, 2008, 08:07:49 PM »
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bahoot khoob Punam!!
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«Reply #32 on: May 30, 2008, 01:56:19 AM »
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Sonia01 jee, aapne bilkul meri hi pasand ka  shayr chuna hai, aapki aamad aur waqt dene ka tah-e-dil se mashkoor hun... Shukriya

Aaahoooo ..!! itna shudda urdu se nawaza(teek likha na?) mujhe? Urdu main hamara gyaan toda kya bilkul kam hai sriman syednaami aka Big B.. Waise bahut bahut shukriya jawab dene k liye. tongue3
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«Reply #33 on: May 30, 2008, 02:03:26 AM »
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Tulooi-e-Shams ke sang unka intazaar main karti hun
Ghuroob-e-shams dekh kar soch men pad jaati hun...

kitna waqt guzra maloom nahin bas sochti rati hun...
unke khayaalon men khud ko bhula baitthi hun...

kaise hain woh chand ko dekh unka haal puchhti hun
kya laaye ho koi sandesh hawa se puchhti hun..

milne ki tamanna se bas yun jeeye jaati hun
dur se hi sahi woh khush hai bas yehi jaan.na chahti hun...


Firse bahut accha likha hai aapne Punam.  Applause
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punam
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«Reply #34 on: May 30, 2008, 04:57:01 AM »
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Thanx Pooja di....

Thank u sonu....
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syednaami
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«Reply #35 on: May 30, 2008, 05:30:54 AM »
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syed ji...hoshla koun kis ka afza raha..? aap humare ..
thanx a lot...

Punam Jee, hum sab ek dusre ki haosla afzai hi to karte hain, bas yunhi samajh le koi bhi prerna aise to nahin milti...

Aaahoooo ..!! itna shudda urdu se nawaza(teek likha na?) mujhe? Urdu main hamara gyaan toda kya bilkul kam hai sriman syednaami aka Big B.. Waise bahut bahut shukriya jawab dene k liye. tongue3

Arey yeh to aam Urdu hai, baba, Aap aajkal achha likh rahe ho to kuchh paish kardo bhai, waise bhi aap ki likhai men kissi jaan pahchaan waale ki khushboo samayi hai...
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«Reply #36 on: May 30, 2008, 05:44:14 AM »
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Tulooi-e-Shams ke sang unka intazaar main karti hun
Ghuroob-e-shams dekh kar soch men pad jaati hun...
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milne ki tamanna se bas yun jeeye jaati hun
dur se hi sahi woh khush hai bas yehi jaan.na chahti hun...


Buhat hi bahtareen khayaalat paish kiye hain,, wah wah...
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Sonia01
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«Reply #37 on: May 31, 2008, 02:26:26 AM »
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Arey yeh to aam Urdu hai, baba, Aap aajkal achha likh rahe ho to kuchh paish kardo bhai, waise bhi aap ki likhai men kissi jaan pahchaan waale ki khushboo samayi hai...

Aam urdu ya kaccha aam urdu... seekhungi mai but dheere dheere.. read2

Hmmmm aapko hamari likhayee main kisii ki khushboo samayi dete nazar aayi hai?
Aap hi kaho without Guru koyi padayi kar sakte kya?Huh? I am learning from you all.
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«Reply #38 on: May 31, 2008, 05:04:34 AM »
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ajnabi jan kar tum mujhe bhula na dena
mere zakhmo ko hawa de kar dhukha na dena
yun to bahut khoya hai hum ne zindagi me par
nazro se apni hame gira nahi dena
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punam
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«Reply #39 on: May 31, 2008, 06:09:26 AM »
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Thanx sonu....syed ji ...
rajbhargava ji bahot khoob...
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punam
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«Reply #40 on: June 02, 2008, 01:49:46 PM »
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unki khamoshi bhi mujhse baaten karti hai
woh bolte bhi nahin mujhe sunai unki awaaz deti hai..

hum rooh se alag hain par dil se nahin
yeh bas hum jaante hain koi aur nahin..

dhadkan meri judi hai unhi ke dam se
unki bahon men hona hai fana yahi tamanna hai..
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Sonia01
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«Reply #41 on: June 02, 2008, 02:01:55 PM »
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Bahut accha likha hai. Applause
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syednaami
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«Reply #42 on: June 02, 2008, 02:24:46 PM »
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Aam urdu ya kaccha aam urdu... seekhungi mai but dheere dheere.. read2
Hmmmm aapko hamari likhayee main kisii ki khushboo samayi dete nazar aayi hai?
Aap hi kaho without Guru koyi padayi kar sakte kya?Huh? I am learning from you all.


Aam ko Urdu men likha jaaye to pronunciation men thoda difference hai aur to Urdu men spelling bhi change hai dono words ki...

Aap ki Aam urdu bhi kachhe aam ki tarah soar hai... so seekhiye shayad Aam pak jaaye Urdu ka...
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«Reply #43 on: June 02, 2008, 02:27:17 PM »
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ajnabi jan kar tum mujhe bhula na dena
mere zakhmo ko hawa de kar dhukha na dena
yun to bahut khoya hai hum ne zindagi me par
nazro se apni hame gira nahi dena
Nice quote Raj saahib... Khoob paish kia...

unki khamoshi bhi mujhse baaten karti hai
woh bolte bhi nahin mujhe sunai unki awaaz deti hai..
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Iss dafa phir se shama-e-mahil roshan karke dil khush kar diya... wah wah
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punam
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«Reply #44 on: June 02, 2008, 02:59:05 PM »
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Thanx sonia...

sukriya syed ji..
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