Tamanna-e-Dil.......

by punam on May 26, 2008, 02:29:02 PM
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punam
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Na waqt ruka humare liye na hum ruk paye
mile bhi hum kahan jahan se bichhde the...

paake saamne hum na koi baat kar paye
dil me sawalon ke sailaab jo bhare the..

jee bhar ke dekhne ki koshish me hum hare
aankhon me jo aansoo ubal rahe the...

kahan the tum itne din puchh bhi na paye
lab tak aake alfaaz yun hi jaise ruk gaye the...

sare gham hum pal me bhula bhi diye
jab humen aap bahon me bhar liye the..

shukar khuda ka aaj woh humen mil to gaye
bas yun kat jaye zindagi dil hi dil me dua kar rahe the....
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Sonia01
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«Reply #1 on: May 26, 2008, 02:45:49 PM »
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Na waqt ruka humare liye na hum ruk paye
mile bhi hum kahan jahan se bichhde the...

paake saamne hum na koi baat kar paye
dil me sawalon ke sailaab jo bhare the..

jee bhar ke dekhne ki koshish me hum hare
aankhon me jo aansoo ubal rahe the...

kahan the tum itne din puchh bhi na paye
lab tak aake alfaaz yun hi jaise ruk gaye the...

sare gham hum pal me bhula bhi diye
jab humen aap bahon me bhar liye the..

shukar khuda ka aaj woh humen mil to gaye
bas yun kat jaye zindagi dil hi dil me dua kar rahe the....


Punam bahut accha likha hai aapne. Yu hi likhte rehna.
Accha laga padkar...
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honeyrose
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«Reply #2 on: May 26, 2008, 04:00:56 PM »
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Punam dear bohat acha likhe ho aap .. Clapping Smiley
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punam
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«Reply #3 on: May 26, 2008, 04:06:47 PM »
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Thanx Sonia.... and Honey di...
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deetri1
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«Reply #4 on: May 26, 2008, 08:40:35 PM »
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paake saamne hum na koi baat kar paye
dil me sawalon ke sailaab jo bhare the..


punam ji ye sher mujhe behad pasand aaya...lekin pahle sher ko theek tarah samajh nahi paya,..
Na waqt ruka humare liye na hum ruk paye
mile bhi hum kahan jahan se bichhde the...
milne aur bichhadne ki jagah ek hi ho to waqt ka thamna samajh me aata hai..lekin waqt ke chalte rahne aur manazir ke thamne me confusion hai...
explain kare to inayat hogi...

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punam
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«Reply #5 on: May 26, 2008, 09:15:39 PM »
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paake saamne hum na koi baat kar paye
dil me sawalon ke sailaab jo bhare the..


punam ji ye sher mujhe behad pasand aaya...lekin pahle sher ko theek tarah samajh nahi paya,..
Na waqt ruka humare liye na hum ruk paye
mile bhi hum kahan jahan se bichhde the...
milne aur bichhadne ki jagah ek hi ho to waqt ka thamna samajh me aata hai..lekin waqt ke chalte rahne aur manazir ke thamne me confusion hai...
explain kare to inayat hogi...

Thanx deetril ji...

Maine apni taraf se koshish ki explain karne ki, Deetri1 ji, umeed hai aapko pasand ayega mera jawab....


Na waqt ruka humare liye na hum ruk paye
mile bhi hum kahan jahan se bichhde the..
1.
Waqt ka na rukna matlab Waqt jaise ki kissi ka intazaar nahin karta, aur na hum ruk paye ka matlab yeh ki "hum jis jagah par the wahan rukna hamare liye mushkil tha so kahin aur chal diye."

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Mile bhi hum kahan ..... ka matlab "Duniya gol hai, to aise hi mulaqat hui ussi jagah jahan hamne saath chhoda tha, aur ek baar phir wapas milan hua....
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #6 on: May 27, 2008, 06:19:50 AM »
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ye naseeb tha tera jo tera hamdam tujhe nasib hua
khuda kar karam e-dost har kisi par nahi hota
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syednaami
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«Reply #7 on: May 27, 2008, 06:41:48 AM »
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Waqt thamta nahin kabhi kissi ke liye, -
Lot kar aane waalon se kaise ab gile, -

Mile to bhool gaye hum woh sab shikve, -
Sawal ban kar jo man men panapte rahe, -

Mere nainon se neer behisaab bah rahe the, -
Ek milan ki aas thi aur pal pal tadap rahe the, -

Baaten thi kai batlana hum bhi chahate the, -
Tumhare milan ne saare alfaaz bemaani kar diye, -

Juda rah kar humen anjaane dukh buhat mile, -
Tujhse lipat kar roye to sab gham chhat gaye, -

Mushkil tha par namumkin hai na soche the, -
Pyar sacha tha hamara jo aaj do dil ek jaan ho gaye, -


(Syed Naami)

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Buhat umda kavita rachi hai Punam saahiba aapne... Excellent work...
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honeyrose
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«Reply #8 on: May 27, 2008, 07:00:09 AM »
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Syed bohat khoob likha hai ek
ek lafz jaise dil ko chu leti ho Clapping Smiley

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k.shael
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«Reply #9 on: May 27, 2008, 07:04:29 AM »
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EXCELLENT WORK BY BOTH OF U Applause
POONAM JI, & KAUSHIK JI....
HEART TOUCHING LINES,GOOD KEEP
IT UP....

KAASH TUMHARI TARAH MERI KISMAT CHAMAK JAYE,
WO MUJHE MANANE KABHI TO AAYE,HO JAYENGE DOOR
MERE SARE GILE SHIKWE EK BAAR WO MUJHE APNE SEENE
SE TO LAGAYE....
BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #10 on: May 27, 2008, 07:26:36 AM »
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Syed bohat khoob likha hai ek
ek lafz jaise dil ko chu leti ho Clapping Smiley



Hosla afzai ka tah-e-dil se mamnoon, hun, shukriya
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k.shael
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«Reply #11 on: May 27, 2008, 08:05:23 AM »
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EXCELLENT WORK BY BOTH OF U Applause
POONAM JI, & SYED NAMI JI
HEART TOUCHING LINES,GOOD KEEP
IT UP....
SORRY FOR NAME MISTAKE....

KAASH TUMHARI TARAH MERI KISMAT CHAMAK JAYE,
WO MUJHE MANANE KABHI TO AAYE,HO JAYENGE DOOR
MERE SARE GILE SHIKWE EK BAAR WO MUJHE APNE SEENE
SE TO LAGAYE....
BY. K.SHAEL
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syednaami
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«Reply #12 on: May 27, 2008, 09:21:55 AM »
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wow bohat khoob Punam Ji.....achha likha hai
aur bhai jaan aap to hai hi lajawab lagey raho..hmhm

So sweet of you Shihab baba, So nice of you, keep reading and you too do write along, please....

Quote from: k.shael on Today at 02:34:29 AM
EXCELLENT WORK BY BOTH OF U Applause
POONAM JI, & SYED NAMI JI
HEART TOUCHING LINES,GOOD KEEP
IT UP....
SORRY FOR NAME MISTAKE....

Arey k.shael Saahiba koi baat nahin thi, aap yahan aaye buhat mashkoor hun.
So nice of you Thanks...
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punam
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«Reply #13 on: May 27, 2008, 11:25:40 AM »
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kaushikbhawna ji bahot acha likhe aap...

syed ji...koi labz nahi mere paas aap k tareef karne...
bahot bahot acha likhe ho aap....

Honey di thanx...

k.shael ji sukriya ..aap ko acha laga humare liye yehi bahot hai...

Majid ji sukriya....aap bhi kuch likh ke jaate....

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«Reply #14 on: May 27, 2008, 12:50:51 PM »
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Na waqt ruka humare liye na hum ruk paye
mile bhi hum kahan jahan se bichhde the...

paake saamne hum na koi baat kar paye
dil me sawalon ke sailaab jo bhare the..

jee bhar ke dekhne ki koshish me hum hare
aankhon me jo aansoo ubal rahe the...

kahan the tum itne din puchh bhi na paye
lab tak aake alfaaz yun hi jaise ruk gaye the...

sare gham hum pal me bhula bhi diye
jab humen aap bahon me bhar liye the..

shukar khuda ka aaj woh humen mil to gaye
bas yun kat jaye zindagi dil hi dil me dua kar rahe the....


Behad Khubsoorat Likha Hai Punam.. Ek Ek Lafz Behad Pyaar Bhare Likhe Hain.. Usual Smile Usual Smile

Humesha ki Tarah Ehasaason se Saja Likha Hai.. Good One..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Daaad Kubool Farmaiyega..!! icon_thumleft icon_thumleft

**~** Mann **~**
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