Tamanna-e-Dil.......

by punam on May 26, 2008, 02:29:02 PM
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syednaami
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«Reply #60 on: June 14, 2008, 07:09:04 PM »
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HoneyRose Saahiba... Aapka buhat shukriya... So nice of you for encouragement...
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«Reply #61 on: June 16, 2008, 01:05:31 PM »
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Na waqt ruka humare liye na hum ruk paye
mile bhi hum kahan jahan se bichhde the...

paake saamne hum na koi baat kar paye
dil me sawalon ke sailaab jo bhare the..

jee bhar ke dekhne ki koshish me hum hare
aankhon me jo aansoo ubal rahe the...

kahan the tum itne din puchh bhi na paye
lab tak aake alfaaz yun hi jaise ruk gaye the...

sare gham hum pal me bhula bhi diye
jab humen aap bahon me bhar liye the..

shukar khuda ka aaj woh humen mil to gaye
bas yun kat jaye zindagi dil hi dil me dua kar rahe the....



Wah Kya Baat hai Punam dear. Behtreen Likha hai ek ek Lafz..!!

Dil Ko Chhoo Gai aapki Yeh Rachna.. Bahut Bahut Khooooob..!!
Afsos to yeh Hai ki Yeh itna Khubsoorat kalaam Padhne me main Late kaise ho gaya.. Really great..!! Usual Smile Usual Smile

**~** Mann **~**
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punam
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«Reply #62 on: June 23, 2008, 04:01:34 PM »
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Thanx Mann ji...
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punam
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«Reply #63 on: June 23, 2008, 04:03:50 PM »
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Haalat hamari kuchh aisi badli, -
Sahra men khade ajnabi jaisi, -

Kah na paaye Tamanna-e-Dil apni, -
Is umeed pe ki woh hi kuchh kahti, -

Intazaar ki ghadi bhi tham gayi, -
Par unki zubaan khaamosh hi rahi, -

Pyar ka nasha ya hamari Himmat thi, -
Unki baat apne shabdon men kahdi. -

Sar hilaya unhon ne aur haan kar di, -
Dil ki tamanna yun hamari puri hui. -



(Syed Naami)

wow syed ji bahot khoob..bahot hi acha likha aap ne...
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punam
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«Reply #64 on: June 23, 2008, 04:04:58 PM »
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dil men aaj yeh kaisa toofan hai
koi to hai jisse dil chahta hai

dekha hai uski aankhon men pyar jab se
tab se uski yaad ne mujhe tanha kiya hai...

bin uske raat kat rahi taare gin gin
pata nahin ek ek din kaise kaatna hai..

jab bhi khayaalon men aata hai
dil mahik uthhta hai man machalne lagta hai..

rache mahindi haath me ussi ke naam ki
aaj dil men bas yahi tamanna hai..
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syednaami
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«Reply #65 on: June 23, 2008, 05:56:28 PM »
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wow syed ji bahot khoob..bahot hi acha likha aap ne...

Aap ki nazr-e-karam ka tah-e-dil se shukarguzaar hun...

dil men aaj yeh kaisa toofan hai
koi to hai jisse dil chahta hai

dekha hai uski aankhon men pyar jab se
tab se uski yaad ne mujhe tanha kiya hai...

bin uske raat kat rahi taare gin gin
pata nahin ek ek din kaise kaatna hai..

jab bhi khayaalon men aata hai
dil mahik uthhta hai man machalne lagta hai..

rache mahindi haath me ussi ke naam ki
aaj dil men bas yahi tamanna hai..


Buhat hi pyari aur sundar rachna mohit kar gayi... Wah...
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Pooja
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«Reply #66 on: June 23, 2008, 06:06:46 PM »
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bahoot khoob Sami jee and Palkhi dear!!
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syednaami
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«Reply #67 on: June 23, 2008, 06:34:23 PM »
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Aap ne tareef ki buhat mamnoon hun aapka Pooja jee...
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honeyrose
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«Reply #68 on: July 10, 2008, 07:50:26 AM »
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dil men aaj yeh kaisa toofan hai
koi to hai jisse dil chahta hai

dekha hai uski aankhon men pyar jab se
tab se uski yaad ne mujhe tanha kiya hai...

bin uske raat kat rahi taare gin gin
pata nahin ek ek din kaise kaatna hai..

jab bhi khayaalon men aata hai
dil mahik uthhta hai man machalne lagta hai..

rache mahindi haath me ussi ke naam ki
aaj dil men bas yahi tamanna hai..


Khoob likha hai punam dear.. Thumbs UP


 
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punam
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«Reply #69 on: July 13, 2008, 07:11:43 AM »
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Sukriya syed ji...and Honey di...
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syednaami
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«Reply #70 on: July 13, 2008, 04:05:31 PM »
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Aap ka bhi buhat shukriya Punam Saahiba...
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